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NintendoGal55


I'm a Canadian gal who loves to write. :D

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Rainbow Dash is away at college and living the life. However, for some time now, she's been seeking out an individual known as "Mister Enigma", but feeling unable to approach him. There's something about this guy she can't put her finger on.

However, life truly is full of surprises as she connects the dots between the past and the present.

Written for the third FlutterDash Contest "Change".

Much help with writing and concept by Poison Cure.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 9 )

This is definitely an impressive piece of literature you've written here.

My only comment is that I found it unbelievable that Pinkie and Rainbow Dash would attend the same college. I've posted this on many stories centered around this already, yet is it odd I think Pinkie would go to a Ivy League college and end up becoming someone who runs a business in parties? While Rainbow would enter a college with scholarship for some sport? Or even become a PE teacher? Or is that just me?

Anyway, I just love this story. :twilightsmile:

Mr Enigma? ...What's the Riddler up to this time? Honestly, last I heard he was locked up in Arkham.

Didn't know you were going to be in the FlutterDash contest, Nintendo. Guess I've got some real tough competition now. Very cute story. I have to say, I was kind of expecting the 'Change' part to show up where it was revealed that Fluttershy actually became a boy! Oh, well. I'm betting that their first date will be at Pinkie's party.

Anyway, good luck in the contest. Oh, and btw, you might want to look back over the story. A few words I think you intended didn't take. Also, looking forward to the next chapter of 'Cupid Discord'.

“Let us be off, youngling! To the mistress of unbound romance knowledge! And bound too,” Pinkie added with a wink

Is that a BDSM joke?

Awesome.

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now Reviews #96.

My review can be found here.

Oh ma-gersh that.. was so cute!

Two lost friends finding each other again...and become something more. I've always loved strories like that. You did amazing with this :heart:

Two lost friends finding each other again...and become something more. I've always loved strories like that. You did amazing with this :heart:

This story deserves more love. There's a few typos and such here and there but besides that, I think it's great.

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