Really? That super old, pretty bad story of mine? I genuinely forgot about it. Thanks for reminding me it exists (not sarcasm). Might inspire a better horror story in the future.

Thank you for adding These Final Words to your Human Shelf.

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What I like about it is Dudley's slow realization of how wrong he was. For things you could have done better, probably explaining why he was hallucinating ponies because that was pretty confusing to me.

Thanks for adding The Unbefuddling of Dudley Dursley to your favorites.
What part(s) did you like best/think I could have done better?

Thanks for the faves!