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sneakpeak321
You know that one moment when you think of something awesome to write. Only to come in realization half ways done, it isn't such a great idea. Yea, I have a lot of those.
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I don't hate your story. I think you need an editor, however. I'm guessing that English is not your first language, and an editor would help a lot. I'd suggest looking over in the Author Support group.
I liked it. It was short and sweet. My one problem with it is that there are a TON of grammar errors and Fluttershys is a little out of character.
Scoots2
Hell no. English is my first language. I didn't try to make this neat and polish. Just write down whatever in my mind at publish it. Like I said, this wans''t suppose to be anything special.
But if you want, I will fix this up. Just give me the yes and I will fix this story.