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Ditzy Doo never had many friends in her life, but she has her daughter, Dinky, which makes her happy, even without a bunch of friends.
One day, Ditzy decides to take Dinky with her to show her what she does for a living. In the same day, she receives a package to deliver to Princess Luna. Will that event change her life?
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Story wrote by: ezio demantay and Ykke Spark
Edited by: Lunar Justice, iMacPoneh and nobodyreallyimportant
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FIRST! No to see how sappy this'll make me. [[MYBODYISNOTREADYMEME!]]
EDIT:...........I want a second chapter! Please?! Don't make me pull out the fluttercry!
Great story. Wait... so many views and already 7 likes? And still not submited? Interesting...
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Inception much?
Great story...I love it
I am in love with your story. My two favorite mares (not including octascratch) in a story!!!! Please make a second chapter!!!!
DerpyLuna? This is definitely a never done before. Must Read.
Good story
Interesting, but rushed.
To be honest, because of that fact, I'm kinda neutral about it.
+1000 points for Derpy being the main glad to see she get some princess action
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Two complaints, both minor.
One: Another way to state the ending would be: "And they all lived happily ever after."
Two: You hinted at a sequel in a one-shot. Just as bad as hinting at a sequel, then openly stating you're not making one.
Doesn't change the fact that this is one good story. Keep up the good work!
"'Sister, how... how do I know if I love someone?' Luna asked nervously."
Someone should be somepony. =p And skipping one paragraph, there's the same mistake.
"'Come on Luna, don’t be such scared cat. Just relax and have a drink.' Luna smiled at Dinky's statement...'
It was Ditzy who said it. Dinky's asleep.
Sorry if this is taken as an insult, I was just trying to help.
But at any account, this is an awesome story, though the ending made me stop breathing for a few seconds... Please give us a second chapter...
Meh. Not bad, but it could have been better.
This story, I like it. ANOTHER!
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Wow guys, you really do want a sequel, don't you? Well, how about this?
We will let this fic breath a while on this site, see how many more requests we receive, and we will deliver you the sequel? Fair enough?
795125 Deal
Just a quick question, how does Luna instantly figure out Dinky has trouble with magic... It seemed as if some dialogue was missing... Could just be me, ignore if it is...
795139
Oh, thank you for telling us! Here, is this better?
"And miss Luna might help me with my little magic pwoblem too!" Dinky exclaimed. "She is a big pony. Like this big," the filly said as she was stretching her hooves as hard as she could, in the end falling on her back in the soft grass.
Still too adorable if you ask me. I'm worried about my blood sugar.
795125
im okay with that
795125
Very much enjoyable. Thank you. So long as I am not killed within the time between now, and the next chapter.
795125
Alright, I guess I can wait. I wanted more because I'm slowly going insane at the moment. Anyways, can't wait. It's a deal.
795125
I second this motion!
795125 I'm very excited for when the Sequel comes out.
i love this story please make Another chapter ill be your best friend times 20
please!!! make a sequel as fast a possible im sorry i just had to ask twice its that good of a story
796164
Activate friendship powa!
Adorable, surprising, and gave me ideas for my own stories.
Great work!
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Gave you ideas? Hmm, interesting. Glad to help you!
Im proud
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Justicia será el mÃo!
Lunar Justice
That was a brilliantly written story and has left me wanting more, I would love to see how others take to there friendship
and also would love to see luna find and pound the living sh
t out of ditzy rapist 
loved this. besides the rushed feel and a few grammer issues, it was AWSOME!
if you do make more i will gladly read them, Lunaderp is one of my favorite derpy pairings, but behind derpyshy.
Hope you make more
this story is 101% better sequel sound great to see what happens with ditzy and luna
799049
We know that Luna x Ditzy isn't really used, but we thought that it would make sense. Also, they are very much alike.
Horribly, terribly sweet. And in need of grammar assistance, as was already mentioned.
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Ok, we admit it. How about this? What if you'd help us with these grammar issues from the sequel?
800766
Actually, what I pointed out were just personal pet peeves of mine...
I wouldn't be much help anyways. Too lazy.
FUCK why did this have to end?
800766
That would be AWSOME!!!
im probably not that good, but i'd love to help! still a newbie author, but sure!
also YEAH FOR SEQUALS!
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Aydn here. Honestly, this is the second fic I ever wrote. In my opinion, newbie writers are the best. They aren't perfectionist.
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lol thanks, i think....
anyways, just let me now when you need me and i'll galdly look it over, O umm if you dont mind, could you help me with my stories a bit, sorry
802555 Contact Aydn Duncan. He might be willing to help.
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AWSOME THANK YOU
sorry, lol
I personally thought this story was ok.
I like the idea but I just couldn't get into the story. I had a hard time getting through the dialogue, as quite a bit of it seemed forced or unneeded.
802855
Aydn here. At least I know that this is my second fic I ever wrote. We are really working on constant improvement. But thank you for your opinion
although I absolutely adore Dinky it pisses me off a little to think that Ditsy was raped at least thats what I think you implied and I can't help but think that we might know who this stallion is considering that he is probably a unicorn as well as a grade A a-hole,
803250 I can tell you this. Life isn't fair
Oh I loved this! So sweet
Good job man!
This is good, but I think it'd be better if you got a proof reader. Some of the sentences are kinda awkward. In any case, have some mustaches.
Loved the story!!!!
... 
NEED MORE!!!!
Childish. Badly written. Painful to read.