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Quick, and too the point. Enjoyable, but nothing special currently.
There's an 'I' instead of 'it' too.
If AvP is anything to go by XenoQueens should be too big for tree hopping unless they're massively huge trees
7415520 You got me there I couldn't have him on thee ground though.
Hmm. Seems good so far. Though, you might want to fix quite a few spelling mistakes
I recommend new chapters once every week so you can have more lengthy chapters
I love the Elements of Insanity!
*Puts on sunglasses*
YEEAAAHHHH!
7518766 this comment made me laugh
7519346
I try.
7518766 Well played
More Please?
Great story!!!
Adding the token to the summary was mot necessary, remove it please. And what do you mean nothing sexual?
Well, i tried. Im never going to find a good xenomorph/mlp fanfic! There was only 1 i liked!
I have hope for this but.... i want to like it because xenomorphs but....
I stopped understanding what was going on since the beginning of the chapter. Im assuming that it was so cringe that it mutated
Someone's having problem's
So now a Predator is gonna show up?
7564724 Yep
Where is the war of shadows from?
7565010 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285238/nightmare-breach-the-war-of-shadows
What happened when the transition from the gardens to the cave? xD
7571080 Eh kind of
7571080 what kind of story?
7644230 really spooky anyways its been awhile how are you.
When is the next chapter coming out?
7652535 not sure because im in a writer's block but I'll let you know of any updates on the story.
7652535 New chapter is up
I exploded with exitment twice because new chapters are always
Wait what do you mean "going dead"?
Expand upon this and you can make it better. Add in the transition from the castle garden to the cave and you have a better beginning. Otherwise it was ok.
7787301 I might will be unresponsive or as a term on vaction for a while.
7532527 ever saw xeno porn ever?
7797107 Exactly someone gets the joke
7797162 i once looked in my history and found some weird shit... so i blame my brother for being on my computer
7564708 you're here too? Remember me, the zorua fic?
7817933 Aw you too
Ok just gonna say it who her thinks these 2 will end up doing it raise a paw claw or hoof
For the queen ... amin king
7833530 *Raises Talon*
7833530 Welp knew this was going to happen *raises claw*
P.S. Do not think of this as a confirmation for I'm still deciding what to do with them.
This does bring up the question of whether he was Displaced or stole a Queen's body, because from what I'm reading, the Queen had a life and control over the Hivemind before Khyax was 'Displaced'.
7839238 dude it says in the start he was at comic con as a queen and had a species change from the magic and griz i got a oc whod fit in as a displaced person u can have as a ally
7797107 OOOO OOO OO OOOOO!! I DID!! it as wierd and hot at the same time
7839476 Who is this person?