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I'm sorry, yet I'm having trouble trying to take this story of yours seriously. Especially since the grammar mistakes and odd personalities in characters are so distracting.
Zerzero? That's not a number.
7662234
Lmao.
7662219 ehh sorry next one will have an editor.
This is disturbing/The flow, so hard to follow/Not Enough Haiku
Where is the Badass/The mysterious Ninja/I don't see him here
Here is an advice/ Something a Novice forgets/Get an Editor
7751409 Well Zer0 has been with Alex for several years andhas changed somewhat starting to talk like him and get more lazy because there is no challenge that deserves his skill
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Also get a proofreader
7662219
hahaha yea I was a novice back when I started this and stil am but im learning. And am slowly getting better and am trying to practice my writing.
7751409
niiiiiiice!!! cool haiku dude
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plus....u lazy bra
dude this is a good story, just touch up on it and it will be great.
please don't give up on this story
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Yes, I be lazy, if I do write a prequel, I'll be forced to write his short haikus
Jeez Alex no need to be a ass to Luna