• Published 6th Jul 2016
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Daughter of the Crimson King - The-Black-Knight



When Twilight was born, her parents weren't who she thought they were. After an incident involving a malevolent entity, that wanted her for dark plots, they agreed to disguise her and send her away... Twenty Years Later, the past repeats itself.

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Chapter Nineteen

Chapter Nineteen

-Prospero, two days later-

Twilight was in the pyramid of her father, wearing a traditional Prosperian Royal Dress. She twirled around in the main hall, the lavender dress spinning with her movements. “I cannot get over how beautiful this dress is! Not to mention, how light!” Twilight said, running her hands over the golden trims.

“I know, darling!” Rarity said, the group all wearing a variation of Twilight’s dress, but not with a royal look. “Your father’s world has quite the class. Not to mention, your uncle Fulgrim.”

“Yes, Fulgrim is quite fluent in both art and beauty.” Celestia suddenly said, the older princess walking into the hall. “You look beautiful, Twilight.”

Twilight blushed, and hugged Celestia. “Thank you, mother.” She said, backing up some. “Is it bad that I am more nervous than when I became a Princess of Equestria?”

Celestia shook her head. “No, my dear Twilight. After all, this is even greater.” The older princess suddenly smiled. “Besides, there is one that will help you with this.”

“And who is that, mother?” Twilight asked, she knew Peter and her friends were here, and her father said Azhek would arrive some time during the ceremony… But Celestia made it sound like someone else.

“You will see, Twilight.” Celestia said, smiling at her, as a Scarab Occult Terminator walked up.

“Pardon the interruption, your majesties. But, everything is ready.” He said, nodding to the group of women.

“T-Thank you, brother.” Twilight said, still feeling nervous, and smiled.

“It is my pleasure, dearest sister.” The Terminator said, then left back the way he came.

“Well then, everyone, let us not keep Magnus waiting.” Celestia said, the six girls nodding and followed her.

At the pyramid’s entrance, Magnus stood with his Scarab Occult Terminators. He looked at the gathered Astartes, Spireguard, and Tizca citizens. They were all cheering in excitement. He had just told them that his daughter had been recovered, and is on Prospero. Magnus knew his sons and people would be happy, but they were ecstatic right now.

The Primarch raised a hand up, causing the crowds to quiet down. “Now, after leading you all with this information.” He started, placing a hand over his heart. “I present to you, my daughter and heir… Princess Twilight Sparkle!” The doors quickly opened up, revealing Twilight walking with Celestia, and her friends behind them. When they reached the Primarch, he embraced the two of them. “You look beautiful. Now, Twilight… I got them ready, it is your turn.”

She nodded to him, and moved towards where her father was once standing. The crowds were all quiet, all three groups waiting for Twilight’s speech. “W-What can I say? To be honest, I was shocked to find out my heritage, on both sides.” The Astartes all nodded, the others just listened. “But, I will make the same oath I made when I became a Princess of Equestria and Friendship.” Magnus made a quick motion, Terminators holding Imperial or Thousand Sons Standards suddenly pulled up a banner bearing Twilight’s cute mark. “But I swear to uphold my charge, and ensure the safety of all my subjects!”

The crowds began to cheer even louder, the Astartes joining in the cheers of joy. Magnus joined his daughter, holding her crown in his right hand. Twilight faced him, the two smiling at each other. “Twilight Sparkle, with this crown, do you swear to uphold the tenants of Prospero? To defend its people while also preserving all knowledge discovered?” He asked.

“I swear.” Twilight said, kneeling down and allowed Magnus to place the crown on her head.

“Then rise, Princess Twilight Sparkle… Princess of Equestria, Friendship, and Prospero!” Magnus declared, Twilight standing back up. “And, after also speaking with your mother about this… We decided to have you act as our representative to Terra Five-Five-Nine…. Young Peter’s World.” Twilight suddenly lit up, and hugged her father, which caused him to laugh. “With this, you will require a personal guard.”

Their attention was pulled back to the door, revealing Peter wearing a variation of the Spireguard uniform mixed with his Spider-Man costume. Behind him, were twelve Scarab Occult Terminators, bearing Twilight’s cutie mark on their right shoulder, which was painted the lavender color of her coat. Though, what surprised her the most, was the large Contemptor Dreadnought bringing up the rear. Its right hand was holding a massive heqa staff, while the left was a four pronged lightning claw. “Friendship Honor Guard, reporting for duty, Princess!” Peter said, saluting Twilight, while earning groans from the Terminators.

Twilight giggled, Magnus placing a hand on her shoulder. “Many wanted to be part of your guard… But Peter and the honorable fallen were my top choices. The Honorable One will also act as your advisor, when on emissary missions to other worlds.”

“Who is he?” She asked, as the Dreadnought walked up to them.

“Why not ask him? He can speak.” Magnus suggested, Twilight nodding and walked up to the juggernaut.

“Honorable One, may I have your name?” She asked, the Dreadnought leaning down to look at her.

“<My voice… Is distorted…. By the vox-speaker.>” His speaker boomed, the ground shaking. “<But I will say… I made a promise… To always protect you.>”

Twilight went wide eyed, placing a hand over her mouth. “A-Azhek?” She asked, the Dreadnought nodding.

“<Even through these… Mechanical eyes… You are still… Beautiful, dear sister.>” Azhek said, as Twilight hugged the massive form, who returned the gesture with a gentle one arm embrace. “<I look forward… To helping protect you… Twilight.>”

One of the Terminators suddenly yelled. “All hail! Princess Twilight! Daughter of Lord Magnus and Princess Celestia!” The entire city exploded with ‘Hail!’ Before speeders flew overhead, releasing fireworks, and a lavender battle-barge, sporting her cutie mark, flew in.

“Your flagship… I heard Terra Five-Five-Nine has a galactic federation… Just in case they wish for you to meet them. It has its own crew, and is armed with a company of Astartes, from every Cult, for support.” Magnus said, Twilight gave a nod… The spectacle was unbelievable to her…. Not to mention, she had her own ship and fighting force to help protect everyone!

Though, a thought suddenly came to Twilight’s mind. “Hey, Azhek?” The Dreadnought looked back down at her. “I wonder what you’ll look like, as a pony, now.”

Azhek was silent for a moment. “<This will be… Most intriguing.>”

Comments ( 41 )

Firstly sorry about last night my autism and overactive imagination got the better of me. Secondly I am going to do a tally of your warhammer 40k cross overs let me know if I miss one.
x2 Salamanders
x2 Night Lords
x2 Thousand Sons
x1 Ultramarines
x1 Legio Custodes
x1 Iron Warriors
x1 Space Wolves
x1 Black Legion/noise marine
x1 Khornate Berserker

7368787 Kharion is not Black Legion, he's just another Renegade that uses sonic weaponry. If you noticed, his armor coloring is black and SILVER.

7368831 I was wondering when you would post this here.

IT ...IS ... HERE!!!!!
It's finally here.

:yay:

7369091 Could... Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut that requires me to go to each, and every, individual paragraph and putting a space between them -_- too tired atm for that.

7369101 I see. No worries.

UniqueSKD wants a hug!

7370891 Alpharius and Omegaron make sixteen. Would have been 15, but seeing how they're twins?

7370909 It might just be how I read it but it seems to me that you made it sound like the Emperor brought 17 primarchs with him.

7370969 *shrugs* There are seventeen. With the twins, there were a total of 19 Primarchs. Now, with Lorgar gone to the warp and Horus dead, there are Seventeen total(counting Magnus). Sixteen showed up with the Emperor. With the Emperor, seventeen showed up.

7371035 Technically 21 including the missing primarchs.

7371047 Yes, I wasn't including them.

Azhek was silent for a moment. “<This will be… Most intriguing.>”

I like how it end so casually, like-- just hearing someone elses thoughts thar are like "here we go" it sounds so funny :rainbowlaugh:

Amazing story,

Also;

Peter+Twilight= Best pony/human spider thingy couple :pinkiehappy:

epic story. like the change in the warhammer40k history

I would love LOVE to see a sequel of this, it's too good not to have one.

7486416 i know I did. If you been to my fanfic account, and read A Lavender Feather, it is the correct spelling. I left it here as a reminder to myself.

7486549 I don't use fanfiction anymore, it keeps crashing my computer for some reason

7486549 You should bring that here as well.

7734982 Actually, he is classified as a Mutate. His mutation was not really natural, and caused by an outside force. Think of it as the same process involving Deadpool and how his situations happened. Except, more accident and less biologicial super soldier chop shop.

7735178 Yes I realize that now that it was Doom based off the movie rather then the comics sorry about that

Who's the Crimson King? Is it Magnus the Red? Cause I'd really like to read a fanfic with Magnus being a main character.

7759859 FINALLY!!!! SOMEONE HAS CREATED THE GAME!!!!!

Amazing story could you possibly keep going with the story in a sequel?

DO A SEQUAL THE WORLD DEMANDS IT!

Is there gonna be a sequel

7486549
*waving a hand* You WILL create a sequel.

The Emperor giving Twilight lessons on her usage of the other side of her magical abilities would make for an interesting side story and be interesting to find out what rank of psyker she is in said story.

And to further the topic of Twilight visiting her father's side of the family or they visiting her I thought of which ways that some of her uncles (an grandfather) can teach her to be a good leader when push comes to shove.

Robute Guilliman and of course Alpherous and Omegon: Tactics and Strategy.
Leman Russ and Jaghatai Khan': The more personal side of combat.
The Emperor: I've already stated what he would do.
As for the others I have no idea.

7486549
Let's try this trick again. *waves hand* You will create a sequel.

Really want sequel please!

After reading through this a second time in a while I will that whilst this story is very good for its time, it seems rushed a bit, like there wasn’t enough time to develop the relationship with Twi and Peter for example.

Plus there’s little world building like how does the 40k universe look in this AU. Still a very good story, which I think deserves a wiki.

11022602
I mean 17 primarchs and the emperor is still overkill to the extreme

Great story, would like to see a sequel that continues the adventures of Twilight and Spider-Man, but I know how unlikely that will be, especially after all this time.

11771889
Considering my displeasure for the man I refuse to call him JJJ.

9753538
Robot Gilgamesh is more of a logistics focused one.
Khan A and Ω would do pranks.
Vulkan Ferus and Perty would do smithing and operating heavy machinery.
Mortarion on health.
Agron and Russ on how to fight.
That's all I'm willing to think of for now.

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