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Hi! Name's Jackie! I love to write! Not very good at it, but that's what practice is for. I love romance, slice-of-life and comedy fics.Thanks for sticking with it!

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Spitfire, leader of the famous Wonderbolts, notices Rainbow Dash flying too close during one of their shows and wastes no time in alerting security. Rainbow is dragged off, but not before pulling off an elaborate maneuver that catches the flyer's eye. After the show, the two run into each other again, but this time, security isn't alerted. Instead, Spitfire insists on taking the mare out for a cup of coffee and a talk.

One of her teammates is oddly unhappy about that.

Ch 1 proofread by jeray2000 and Rezio. <3
Cover art by Iopichio, used with permission. <3

Notes:~~~ A look at same-sex love in the military before 'Don't Ask, Don't Tell' was repealed. This is obviously an AU, one that takes a more realistic approach to homosexuality in the military. Also, and I'm surprised by the amount of opposition this received, the Wonderbolts are a military squadron. Yes, they're performers, but they are still a part of Equestria's "Armed Forces", just like the Blue Angels and the Thunderbolts are in the US.
Warnings:~~~ Lesbian shipping, profanity, some violence.

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Nice story so far, so is this before the series starts or sometime after but before the Grand Galloping Gala where Rainbow tried to talk with the Wonderbolts. Also why not have Rainbow try a Sonic Rainboom as a way to show off to the Wonderbolts to show them just what she is able to do, heck she could even go through a Everfree Forest Storm that is forming and destroy it to show just how strong a weather pony and flyer she is to them.

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That sounds interesting. : 3 I'll have to take that into consideration for the next chapter.

This is awesome! More please!

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I'm actually writing the outline for the next chapter right now. Thanks for the interest! And thanks for sticking with it. <3

Gonna like this before I even read it as I like the setting as it's a bit more true. Can't wait.

Comment posted by tuntematon deleted Jul 29th, 2016

You know what I hate with fics like that? It's when I catch them too early, and there's only one bucking good chapter and I have to wait for more.
Great so far, looking forward for more!

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