The very opening of this chapter is literally like several knives in the heart.

...You don't call Fluttershy things like that...

Good chapter either way.

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hey its just a dream

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and thx!

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hey have you read the recent chapter?

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Figgen adorable

*See's this is on hiatus and last written 16th Jul 2016* Is it cancelled?

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no just wanted to work on it later cause i hve like 4 storys that need updateing

8051373 You see this is actually my first fic I will admit my cu rent stuff is a whole lot better than any of my older stuff

I thank you for taking time out of your day to rate it

If you want to see better work from me i suggest any of my one shots or any of my more up to date fics

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It does say it is your first in the description... I at least read that before starting my reading. :P

I rated so I can move it to its' appropriate folder in The Shipshelf. Speaking of which I will be moving it now... one second... there I added it to the, so far, end result. I have it on my reading bookshelf, so I can change it once you get more chapters out, and I find that it got a higher rating.

I'll take you up on that offer. ^^

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