I write stuff sometimes...maybe.
Life throws us curve balls, but what happens when that curve ball is a Pegasus? This is something that I've had on Fanfiction.net for a while, and got off my lazy butt finally decided to post it here after polishing it up a bit and doing some reworking.
I'd like to thank the Infamous, Illustrious, and Canadious TJ Pones for the new Cover Art.
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A good start and a fun concept. A couple formatting errors and a bit rushed, but still quite good. I look forward to future installments.
7302185 Thanks! The FIM Fiction format stuff is really new to me, so, hopefully I'll get it right eventually. But I appreciate your input.
....Hail the Emperor.
I really enjoyed that! I haven't any criticism or errors unfortunately. Sorry
7302262 That's okay, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
The first pony fic I ever read has graced Fimfiction with its presence. I approve of this.
7302687 Its back from the dead and gone under some rework, but I'm glad you remember this story after all this time.
Dang, mom's gonna find something suspicious
Here's hoping you're not done with this story.
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Sorry about the lack of updating, life's been hitting me pretty hard lately (along with a little bit of being downright lazy), but I do plan on updating... eventually.
If Lewis found out about Derpy or whatever her name is, I don't wanna find out.
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I don't think they would want to find out either.
Here comes the exciting part
aww derpy never change
I haven't seen Smart Derpy in awhile... even though she just read offa the periodic table or something.
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I like to think she has those moments where she comes out of left field with an intelligent answer. It's more the idea of we don't know where her knowledge begins or where it ends.
is derpy a secret genuis but she doesnt know it?
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More like random moments of intelligence. Like i said in my other comment, we don't know where her knowledge begins or where it ends. And I like to think she's a lot more observant than people (or ponies) give her credit for.
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huh neat nice icon btw
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Thanks, Eevee is one of my favorite pokemon and this picture especially caught my attention.
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drapion is my fave
i laughed so hard at that
Minus the minor grammar errors this story is great.
how has this not been featured I will never know
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Yeah, there are some things I miss, but then again, there's no such thing as a perfect paper. But thank you, I appreciate your input.
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I dunno, i just write things, and things explode.
I screed like a little threstral filly when I saw this updated.
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Oh. Well, I'm glad i could make your day more....scree....worthy?
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Now I don't think you could have said anything truer.
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lol
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oh it would be funny if derpy saw a picture of herself as the muffin queen and thought that her future self and starts ordering don around like pack mule
Can we just have artwork of Derpy the Muffin Queen!?
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Unfortunately, I can only write, not draw. Even my stick people aren't drawn correctly.
8736137 Oh. Someone will draw that eventually. It would be cool if I can, but I have enough skill to draw simple cover art.
i hope don doesnt have to pay for the comuter
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Nice catch. I totally missed that.
i need to keep this in mind when I become a parent that was good
With lemon juice and vinegar with a gallon of bleach and salt afterwards.
lolz
8778209 That’s a lotta sour things.
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When mixed properly it makes a really nice smelly cleaner, minus the salt and little bleach of course. Good for cleaning kennels.
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Huh, interesting. You never know what you're going to learn from comment sections, especially practical cleaning solutions.
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I'm...not sure what you took away from that entire section of the story but...alrighty then.
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i come from a family that pranks each other constently
Oh dear.
and derpys first lesson is that its time to for the deus vult [T]
sorry but I have been binge listing to sabaton because their songs are based on actual battles that happened like D-day when germany marched into russia and the crusaide are some examples
Cue montage.
For some reason, every time we meet Lewis i'm immediately reminded of Lyra. huh.
i like how does that make you feel those are funny
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BLT~ bread, lettuce, tomato~ you actually had me completely stumped there. I applaud you good writer.