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VitalSpark
Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.
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Well, at least this is better than Trixie x Starlight......thanks so much for breaking the ice.
Quite the involved clop scene. Could go on, but it doesn't feel like it needs it unless you're going to expand it into more of a story and not just more clop.
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If I did write more, it probably wouldn't have a lot more story than this one.
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Fair enough. Clop without plot is definitely a 'sometimes' thing for me, both as writer and reader. Greatly prefer the two interwoven. But your writing is very detailed and fairly hot, so I will track it regardless.
I would love to see a sequel of this amazing story
HA HA RUNNING GAG
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Eeyup!
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Maybe. It doesn't seem to have been as popular as I'd hoped, so a direct sequel seems unlikely. But I enjoyed the dynamic I established between the pair in this story, so I won't rule out writing more.
Yes.
Star swirl te breasted WTF 0.o XD im enjoying this
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Star Swirl the Breasted is actually a reference to an earlier story of mine, Buck to the Future: Futa Future Twilight Fucks Twilight.
If you liked this story, you'll probably enjoy that too.
Futa? sure. Watersports... meh.
Oh, btw, while the before the sex scene was a bit awkwardly written in my opinion, what followed sure was pretty good.
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Agree, Futa bonus without WS please!
When you mentioned Starlight wanting to get intimate with Sunburst I nearly vomited. I do have a great idea, continue on with this BUT have Starlight decide that she would much rather be with Twilight.
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The final mention of him does suggest that she'd pretty much forgotten about him in all the excitement.
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But does she permanently forget about him, well in any kind of romantic way?
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Never really thought that far ahead.
Outside the castle, Spike and Discord were looking at Starlight through the window.
Spike: What is wrong with Starlight?
Discord: Perhaps my mere presence is making her feel nervous.
Spike: No that´s not it.
Discord: Fine I´ll go see.
Discord teleports to the castle then back to Spike with a photo.
Discord: Here you go.
Spike:(Looks at photo)Trixie is so gonna lose it.
Discord: I thought she was into Sunburst.
Spike: Well she is cute.(Covers his mouth)
Discord:(Smirks)What was that I heard?
Spike: I can´t control my crushes. Plus they´re not married so it´s not wrong is it?
Discord: Oh, you ponies and your morals.
Spike: Hey!
Starlight and Twilight can never go wrong. I really did like the part where Scootaloo snapped a picture of Starlight. That’s going to be fun.