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VitalSpark


Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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I will read it, but not because I'm a bad person. Its because I want to. But mostly because that is a lie that will help me sleep better at night.

I would read this, but I'm not into feet.

I apologize i didn't proof read this fast enough :(

But, it is a really great story :)

Wonderful work once again.

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The foot fetish stuff is only a small part of the story... less than ten percent, I think.

foot fetish

Sorry, sis, this will be one story of yours that I will never read no matter what:pinkiesad2:
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I already know I'm a bad person, after some fics I favorited, I won't be surprised if I'm going to tartarus
Anyway, I'm going to give this a try

EDIT: I liked it :twilightsmile:

i hope u continue this story

i havent found any good/non-oneshot fluterbatxoc fics


i hope 2 c more

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But... but... realism!

In my research for this story, I discovered that real vampire bats quite commonly bite people's toes. That's where that idea came from.

Anyway, you're never going to make it as a pedicurist with that attitude. (Live the dream. Make it real.)

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Sorry, this is a one shot. It was incorrectly marked as incomplete. And the narrator is not an OC. He's a canon background human.

I do have an idea for a sequel which would be more of a slow burning romance between the two. Fluttershy back in her non bat persona is very embarrassed by what has occurred, but Indigo Wreath wants to get to know the real Fluttershy. Awkwardness, romance, and eventually more clop. But I don't know if it'll ever get written. More ideas than time.

Oh brother, the foot stuff happens for like 4 seconds. Let's not lose our heads over that.

Anyway, this story was one I could really...

(Puts on sunglasses)

...sink my teeth into.

I fear my efforts to make some vampire puns have been in vein, eh, they would have just sucked anyway. :moustache:

Great job and I'll be on the lookout for that second story if you make it.

I'm just a sucker for Flutterbat.
EDIT: I got one!!!
"I once bought 51% of the shares in a Vampire Slayer company, now I'm the main Stakeholder

Something something something ew feet.

Overall it was...well it was damn hot. The thing is, the foot thing seems to be one of those all or nothing kind of things. If people like it, then it's gunna be a good read for them. If they don't, it is like as not going to be a deal breaker, -Much like how someone placing a dick in their mouth right after it had been in their butt just threw me out of Buck to the Future - because if you don't like feet, it is probably a turn off like getting a bucket of ice water dumped on you. And I don't like feet. :fluttershyouch: Surprisingly (for me, I mean) it ended up not being a deal breaker, though I did kinda just skim over real quick, so I can say I enjoyed the majority of the story. (And I admit, the foot thing does have the benefit of actually tying into the vampirism thing in a neat way, so it's got that going for it. Which is nice.)

All told, for all my bitching, a +1. And if a sequel does manage to happen one day, well colour me interested.

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FWIW, I don't actually have a foot fetish myself. I don't dislike feet, but find the majority of foot fetish material dull just because of the massive focus on feet. It has the same impact on me as a story would have if it had a massive focus on elbows or wrists or rocks or paint drying. Really, I just wanted her to bite him somewhere, and the feet made the most sense, so I added that bit.

So, our narrator has discovered that his girlfriend Fluttershy has the sensual side that rarely anyone else sees--the amarous, sensual, lovely Flutterbat, with her cute bat wings and her red eyes of desire and lust, even though there is still a calmness in those eyes. I've got to hand it to you, well done with the details, all the way to the minute points of her size. Also it is refreshing that she's abnormally large in the bust area--I love Flutters as the motherly type meaning usually plus-size breasts (at least D), but this image you made really stood out. And another thing that I loved about this was that even though Flutter wasn't herself per se, you can tell that she still was able to be shy conserved Fluttershy even when she (as Flutterbat) was able to push her boundaries a bit (remember, even though it's Flutterbat in control, there is still the FLUTTER in Flutterbat).

In short, I truly enjoyed this, and I would like to see another scenario of these two, especially when he fully comes to grips about this newly discovered side to his shy reserved girlfriend. :yay:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, though actually the story specifically describes her breasts as "small". And Fluttershy and Indigo are not dating. Hence his absolute surprise about her turning up in his room late at night. He only knows her from biology class at school.

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Whoops!! I meant to say that it was refreshing that Flutters is actually normal in the bust department, or in your case a bit smaller--usually when we describe Flutters, she's got breast for days because of the memes and cliches that the shy, quiet type of girl usually has the largest breast of a group, or at least they are quite full...and it was nice to see her as normal...

Other than that, everything I said in the previous comment, I meant it. :twilightsmile:

This story was so perfect. As a foot fetishist i indeed would have liked the foot scene to have lasted longer... but it was short and passionate, which is even better.

Great job, faved and watched.

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Yay! Thanks. I'm not really very into feet, but vampire bats do apparently commonly bite between the toes, so I decided to include that in the story. :pinkiehappy:

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Well what do you know ?
We learn something new everyday.... well that's one of the most tender part of the body, and there is plenty of blood going there.

Wow so that mean that not only your story is awesome... but it's also scientifically correct ? My god, it's beautiful.

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There it was again

This was a good story, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up :)

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