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KIDX


What can I say. I'm a pony lover. I also love to make stories about love and forgiveness, and create dark subject matter. I enjoy this badass stuff. Wink.

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Discord is under deep depression for betraying Equestria and his friends after helping Tirek. The anger from other ponies and a trial for his actions was too much for him as well, so he makes a decision to drown himself. However, Twilight and her friends try to save Discord from his depression, proving forgiveness is not only appropriate for him, but how treasuring life is without throwing it away...

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God, this was depressing and I really felt for Discord here even if I can't see his canon self resorting to self harm or attempted suicide.

Comment posted by Nerfyy deleted Oct 14th, 2016
Comment posted by KIDX deleted Oct 14th, 2016

Such a sad story that it filled my eyes. It's a good thing it got a happy ending. You got yourself a liker.

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Thank You

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I just thought that sad issue would add more thematic material

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I'm talking about the moral lesson that self-abuse only makes things worse.

This story is the whole package - heart warming and sweet, sad but good at the same time:pinkiehappy:

This is so SAD!!! My heart literally ached and I was crying the entire time:fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry: why... *cries* I need some happy videos of Discord like right now to fix me.

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Wow. I appreciate you sharing your feelings with me. It's what makes us all human.

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*Snifs then nods* mum. But luckily it had a happy ending so, yay:yay:

Good story. I loved it

7646317 Thanks

Comment posted by KIDX deleted Oct 17th, 2016

This hit me really hard because I know exactly how he feels...:raritydespair::raritycry:

7762223 Yeah, it took a lot of editing to make this more emotional. :fluttercry:

7762407 so sad to be honest best story ever I'm sure some people cried and I know you had some people with the same thoughts of suicide and wanted to help them but I love this story 10/10 your the best thanks for making this:raritywink:

7919841 Thanks so much too. :)

You really made me see the light. Thank you so much. :twilightsmile:

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I'm sure some people cried

I did.

8070132 just let those tears flow out of them eyes

8070168 I did when I first read this story.

8070301 yeah I know did anyone hear you cry

8075263 I cry quietly, so I think no one heard me. They might've seen me shed tears, though.

8076167 I know iits much sadder then what happen in the walking dead season 7 ep 1 where gleen died by negan

8093806 She's very concerned about what will happen next

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They did most likely have guns in EQG though

Comment posted by LusitaniaTheBunny deleted Dec 5th, 2017

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You just found it

Look Discord, you won't be happy until you get a cat. Get a cat and you'll be less stressed.

I was crying so hard throughout the entire time.In the middle i cleaned my tears and continued a second later i'm in the same state 😭

great story by the way.😍

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Aw. Thanks. :)

Ahhh even with music I was fine until I saw that goddamn journal... This was slightly quick but I loved it nonetheless.

This story is pretty much drowning in OOC characters and actions. I guess it's atleast exactly what it was advertised as plot-wise though so that's... good? Even though the plot is a big emotional/physical torture fest around Discord. Somebody already mentioned that Discord wouldn't do any of this but I guess the story needs to exist so there's that. A few typos here and there but I guess the writing is decent for the most part.

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Whoever that person is is wrong. Anyone can fall into depression and suicide, and we've seen Discord cry before, so it's not like it's unusual for us. It's like Spike said, he may appear like a big tough guy, but on the inside he's a real softy

I appreciate the story so much, because it treats the problem and seriousness of suicide with respect. It shows a great lesson too, self-harm doesn’t solve problems, it creates them.

This was a great story, bit depressing, but it really gives the story a serious mood.:twilightsmile:

I wept through a good portion of this story. That's a good sign that the message got through.

You wrote a very sad story, and that's a good thing

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