I apologise in advance for what you are about to read.
Our protagonist falls from the sky and accidentally possesses Celestia, they then proceeds to do the only rational thing any sane person would do in his situation, abuse their new found power like Tartarus.
The cover art is not mine and can be found here (send them chocolate cake): http://magister39.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-Commander-Easyglider-costume-456932539
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You might want to read 'Rise of Sunbutt the Awesome' for comparison. It's the gold-standard for 'human becomes Celestia and exploits it' fics.
It's full of realistic feeling, in-character reactions to crazily ooc celestia. Freakouts abound.
Pity it stopped updating.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/158507/rise-of-sunbutt-the-awesome
Thanks, I'll read it later
Anyways I like this fic so far (one thing don't please just don't make your character unaware of what spending too much money will do like seriously just no no its common sense money doesn't grow on trees I just love me some trollestia more or less but in reality it is just a human also since he possessed celly I really hope that celly is there like in his head number one to annoy him (from other perspective celly just seems a little off her rocker) who knows maybe she thinks he is some kind of creature like nightmare moon
Cant wait to read the next chapter so far my honest opinion in this fic at this point is
7/10
7087622 thanks for the input man, I do have plans for where I want the plot to go and I do have an idea as for why he is possessing celestia in particular (which will either seem like a proper twist or extreamly convoluted :\ ) and I was planning on him having a smallish spending spree before Luna steps in
7087639 just a quickie is celestia in his mind?
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not as of yet, I would like to incorporate it but it would somewhat contradict what I'm currently planning but I am currently trying to think of a way for them both to play out.
As long as he isn´t sharing his mind or something like that, I´m probably going to like it.
Has he seen an horse before?
Can´t say what I think about it right now, I'm going to read more, because it wasn´t enough to say much about it.
7088841 we'll just have to wait and see
sorry I think i stop here, not really in the mood for another body sharing story.
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That's fine; I'm just writing this for fun and to try and give people something fun to read, so I hope you enjoyed what you read and that maybe you'll come back to it some day in the future
I burst with happiness everytime I see this story is updated.
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OMG THANK YOU!
It's great to know that something I started doing on a whim has made someone feel like that, thank you Ratmandango for making my day
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NP
Yummy.
Grammatical errors, spelling errors, punctuation errors, incorrect word choices, run-on sentences, missing indentations, point of view shifts...the writing is a mess. Yes, I realize you're using British English not American English. That's ok, but there's a lot going on here that's incorrect in both conventions.
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Sorry about that, I hope that it doesn't make it too unreadable in your eyes
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Yummy indeed, if not very sticky
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Sweeter than a Cherry Pie.
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Seems pretty cool
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Thanks :)
I do want to write some more of it but I'm afraid that I'm very lazy so I don't know when I'll get around to doing it :/
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My eye twitched every time I saw one of the many errors.
8153048 yeah, I'm aware that it's all a bit shit, but I haven't got anyone to edit it yet and I'm only writing it for fun mostly :/
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I could edit it for you. It would have to wait until i wake up later today, as it's currently 1:22 in the morning. All I would need is editing access to it in Google Docs.
8153088 oh, thanks for the offer :)
https://youtu.be/3i3HxiUqfp0
Pls make more
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I want to, and I am working on it, unfortunately I’m very lazy
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Ah I understand I am lazy myself
What does charizarding mean/ entail?
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https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Charizarding
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what kind of nut job comes up with stuff like that
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
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You know...humans
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Aww, thanks bby
As it should be
As you should be
Twilight Sparkle
No 
A Pony, actually 
Equestria, Ponyville more specifically 
You are losing consciousness 
What do you mean "potentially", its already more interesting
Or so they think
Well she can also tell when the others are lying (aka putting on their poker faces)
The true secret technique of any ruler
Oh that's cute, you think she can't move the entire party to Canterlot castle before Luna and Robert/Celestia gets there
Yeah... still haven't figured out how to win those staring matches
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I highly doubt you ever will (it tends to cheat, seeing as it has no eye lids and all)
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Sit down and read.... As long as I can remember this story was and still is one of the funniest things I've ever read.
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Thanks man, that means a lot
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No problem! Only three stories have genuinely made me laugh out loud and this is on of them.
... Whut?
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Yes? Is there a problem
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No problem, it just doesn't make sense that Pinkie was an old computer, I don't think she even has the vocal capacity to imitate the sound! Though it is PINKIE we're talking about...
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Good times. Heartbreaking coming across unfinished favorite fics.
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I do really want to pick this back up at some point as well as fix some plot points and stylistic choices that I wasn’t totally happy with, but I suffer from a serious case of the lazy.
However I have started work on these think, having just finished work on revamping chapter 1 with work on chapter 2 and beyond about to begin.
I’ve also decided to start setting myself more realistic writing targets (200 words a day) than just trying to force out a chapter in one sitting which tends to leave me drained and unmotivated.
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True, pulling out entire chapters sucked when I was editing. After a while my hobby felt like a chore. So, no worries on the story, just glad to have hope it ain't over.