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>Embodiment of Rage
>Diablo 3's Demon Hunter
>The guys, who run purely on hate to demons
>Rage
What I'm doing with my life.

Read it. It is just another Human acting villainous story, down to the last detail.
You might as well had copy/pasted 3 other HAV stories i have read.
That said its decent beginning , but there is no actual story, exempt the copy pasta HAV beginning. Well edited, but nothing really worth reading more than two times.

Write actual story plz, and stop lying in your writers notes.Well at last The description is about right, D3 ripoff self insert.

You linked to a picture instead of describing your character. How lazy is that.

4972472 I get where you're coming from but this is just the prologue. I'm not actually gonna have my character hell-bent on revenge and wanting to kill everything.

Just trust me, you'll see

4974303 Far be it from me to be the voice of reason and sound advice, but it's usually considered a good idea to put out more than just a prologue.
Less flak that way.

4984417 Hang on man. Year 11 is a bitch.

I have a 4 day weekend so I'll write it up then

4984473 looks at the date this story was added :rainbowderp: wow..... um im going to go hit my head against a wall right now i feel like a douche:ajsleepy:

4984803 Hahaha nah man it's all good

Good things happen to those who do good. So yeah... be a nice guy. Screw rage.

neutral. This is good

4991169 Thanks man :)

4991167 True dat. But I hope you know that no matter what you pick, good bad or neutral the character will still be somewhat hateful. It is his nature after all, he just won't act upon said hatred.

4991178 SCREW RAGE YOU HAVE FRIENDSHIP! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

4991181 xD xD very true

Let the hatred reign...

Bad.

Neutral. He seems to only hold hatred for Celestia, maybe Luna and Discord.

Be Neutral then Bad if need be, with that forge fragment amnesia by that I mean with the Line:

"Hello there...old friend." I growled darkly at the one who is the cause of my suffering

Follow up with
*Giving a puzzled look your own words you say "...........Why did I say that? You haven't betrayed our friendship yet Celestia have you?........Or did I betray it?.........But why would I betray it?" forging looking even more confused then when I started talking*

Going this way gives Twilight and gang a chance to see Celestia act in a way that is anything but loving and kind, from there the seeds of Fear Doubt and Confusion will be planted into all but Twilight until the Full story of 'How Rage came to be here' and how 'selfish' it was of Celestia to play with "Fate". From there you can go in many different ways.......

(These are what I can see happening)
Slow rebellion to building an army with those who feel Equestria has to much power ("because they can use Magic and we can't") and after feeding off their rage for so long, remove them Celestia and Luna in One quick burst!

Neutral Coz I want to see what happens 8D

im gonna say neutral but i also want good cause it would be interesting to see how twilight would react to what the guy says like you pulled me from my own world thats why i hate you

1 more day for voting then I'll start on the next chapter

Times up! Any votes from now on won't be counted.

so what class is he? demon hunter?

break her horn off and kick so hard up her plot it ends up back in its old position, nothing less than karma finding its way back home

One question why the long hair?

5109838 Because I have long hair?

Jules, I know you're busy, but where's the next chapter? I'm eager.

5238527 Will write again when my laptop un-fucks itself

Neutral is most adequate desicion.
Bad gonna make him look like an asshole, while Good is just stupid.

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