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Lunasservant1985
i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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I hate to break it to you, but on Fimfic, "human in Equestria" fics are a dime a dozen. Each one has exactly the same formula
1.Human (sometimes a Brony) is transported to Equestria,
2.Human easily makes friends with the Mane 6,
3.Human has some special ability/attribute that will become essential later in the story
4. Human falls in love with Twilight/Mane 6/side character
5. Human screws canon character
I have no reason to believe that your fic will be any different.
6975019 im well aware the stigma HIE fics often get, and While I won't deny you your opinion, i will say i tried my best to either sidestep around those points, or i worked to do at least sonething different with them.
6975156 A little green man once said "There is no try or try not. Do or do not, there only is."
6975956 And that green man was not very connected with reality.
But, I do have to say that while I really like HiE...Not many are truly good enough for me to reread it again.
This story is no different.
6976090 Even a broken clock is right twice a day. Personally speaking, HiE fics are repellent. While wish fulfillment has always been an unfortunate part of fanfiction, within this fandom it's gone to a whole new level. I'll admit there are some golden nuggets amongst the bilge, but separating them from the self-insert/displaced/Marty-stu cringefests is just too much.
Nice story
6976304 thank you, your words are just what i need to hear after listening to these two...
6976529 your welcome but truly great story
I wish I could see more daring do x human stories.
6976592 that's.. kinda why I wrote this one
A great story, especially containing Daring Do. I haven't found many well written ones involving her and a human honestly, so again a great story. However you will find a few over-opinionated individuals who always have a less than favorable opinion. Best thing to do is just forget them and keep on going.i.ytimg.com/vi/m7KVwxajVMg/maxresdefault.jpg
6976529 Mwuhahahahahahahaha
6975019
Not sure what your point is here. Did you even read the story, or did you just come here to point out your dislike for HiE stories?
How about giving some constructive criticism back to the author?
6975956
"No! Try not. Do, or do not. There is no try."
ftfy.
6982399 I understand where you're coming from, HumanxHorse author. Next time, I'll leave a dislike without an explanation.
You missed my point entirely. You’re judging and disliking a story without even reading it because it's something that you don’t personally enjoy based on common tropes that might not even be in the story at all. There are a lot of stories on this site that I don’t care for, but I wouldn’t instantly dislike it and assume that it has all the tropes that I don’t like.
You shouldn’t judge a book by its cover. I've read a lot of stories that I would normally pass up, but they ended up being really good for the most part. I think you should give other stories a fair chance to prove themselves and judge them based on the actual story and characters within it. And if the story is still crappy by your standers, then point it out. Give some helpful advice instead of jumping to conclusions.
6982419 vote abuse is fun!
>> Pusspuss
No point in trying to explain anything to a troll.
6984173
I take it you're a Knight Rider fan?
6984183
Yes. What gave it away?
This is my first Daring Do clop and I love it
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8.5 out of 10
6986187 That crossover with Nightmare On Elm street? It's here!..
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A nightmare on Canterlot High...Feeling brave and don't plan on sleeping tonight?
6986363
I'll go read that
Um.
You need an editor...
...
...
Like, bad.
If one work'd on this, then fire him/her and get another one.
Not to mention that Human in Equestria fictions are damn near literally everywhere you look, and most are terrible. Sorry, but this does fall into that category.
I don't care about what ANYBODY else says;
This is still a great story.
I; because I am so smrt... Please tell me this was intentional, Homer needs his recognition too, and that about crying and masturbating...
why
6982399 I mean, that other quote could've been his little green Muppet Weiner but who knows
6997183 yes it was intentional..and hey he still got lucky with daring in the end right?
6997251 I mean, he did but... Whatever good story as always lol
8698322
she could just be teasing