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10champ10
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Very interesting read! I hope you continue, i'd like to see more of it.
I can't help but think that this "Ghost" is from Modern Warfare 2.
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While yes he does have similar names to Soap and Ghost from MW2. He is not related to the series outside of similar names. Though you aren't the first nor the last that will probably make that assumption about him.
Too much Hellsing Ultimate Abridged.
Needs more DBZA.
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Something I need to watch more of.
Me: Whoa story pacing!
Story: Pacing
what's that?
Me:
I think you misplaced part of your chapter, unless that was supposed to be some sort of pov change.
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Yes, I changed POV focus. Tried to make that known by increasing the size of the gap between Ghost and Daring Do because I'm too lazy to add those fancy lines in that other stories have in them.
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Not sure how in the world your comment has managed to elude me till just now. But I got a chuckle out of it. As I do agree, that chapter's pacing was a bit faster than it probably should have been. Now looking back, I probably would have paced this story much slower during the trip back to their homes. Might do that. Since the one chapter still needs to edited a bit to include at least three more scenes for Ghost and basically rework Daring's side of it. But it will have to wait till I get some decent down time from work and school to be able to sit and redo them.
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I actually did start a chapter to follow up, but it never made it to completion before my hiatus due to school and other life events keeping me occupied. Having caught up with the story and the others I have, the updates will begin to resume real soon.