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Good start,
You have my interest.
The Monk
Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm. -Scarheart
It's been awhile since I've seen such a promising Human x Derpy story. Consider this liked and followed.
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Working on the next chapter, should see it go up by the end of the week.
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As requested, it is out!
Well done. Your writing is solid and so far I'm liking the characters. Its nice to see you taking sexuality like an adult. So many here write in-story sexuality in a very disturbing way. They write it almost Sex-phobic to the point where a large number of characters in stories on this site freak out at even the thought of a romantic kiss. It gets old, to be honest.
Its refreshing to see an adult relationship for a change. Your the Author obviously, and its up to you where you end it, but I would very much like to see the family dynamic form between Guy, Dinky, and Derpy. I think this could become a great "Slice of Life" story.
As for names, does he really have to have one? Honestly, in my real world life, I can go an entire year without ever saying anyones name even once. Most of my conversations start "Hey," or "Got a second?" (Although I always liked Guy, Jake, Max, or Kevin.)
Well done, Keep up the good work.
The Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller
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All of my stories have a more adult/mature behavior to romantic endeavors, if that is something that can be used for the enhancement of the story. Or at least do my best to put myself in that position and that mindset to better describe the thoughts and emotions of the characters. Though I am quite certain the readers of this story will enjoy the dynamic of the relationship as it progresses. Also unlike most relationships in movies, books and such where it is always "they lived happily ever after with no issues" this will have plenty of issues and trials, just like real life relationships. Though I am glad you enjoy this story and it helps encourage me to keep working on it.
Reading this because Ditzy and Dinky is in it
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Next chapter is in the works. With finals early this week I spent most of my weekend studying. But this story will see an update by the end of the week.