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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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Mark has no idea that she's a monster… Yet :rainbowderp:


Great so far…

also, love the cover art of the story :heart:

6535101 there will be two outcomes to the story, i tried to base how she looks in the story on the cover but addeed a few details of my own like her belt, and jacket, also good thing this idea came to me in time for Halloween eh?:duck:

This proves that you can still love a girl, even if she is a creature :heart: (That's what Monster Musume taught me).

As for that sex scene:

6539743 i was going for a more rosario+vampire feel to it (tell me good moka isn't a proto fluttershy if anything:raritywink:) just with a lot of that series key elements inverted. there are also a few call backs to the traits of the mane universe flutterbat, such as her comparison to her feeding off him like "apple ambrosia" i also based her jerk personallity in the beggining on how she acted in putting your hoof down, just...not AS unlikeable, plus there's a more legit reason for how she acts. I think the actual sex was maybe a bit vanilla (given my work at least :twilightblush:) but i tried compensating for it by giving a more romantic edge like the scented candles and low light, did i pull that off?

You pulled it off excellently. And no that I look back at it, it does have that Rosario+Vampire feel to it.

Mark's dead?!?!?! Noooooooooooo!!!! :raritycry: :fluttercry: :applecry: may he rest in peace :ajsleepy:



What a sad ending. Now I feel sad. I'm an emotional person :fluttershysad:

6547930 it's more an alternate what if? ending that takes place right where she asked the titular "would you still love me?" Question, and instead of still seeing fluttershy in her, he only sees a creature and his awnser is no, so he's not really dead, he only could have been.

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A thousand & one thanks, be to thee!
Personally I quite enjoy when authors write these kind of "What if" senarios!

6671614 if you liked this seasonal story let me know what you think of my holiday one when you get around to it. :pinkiehappy:

"The One,"

:facehoof: Also the story as a whole :scootangel: Daaaaaaaawwwww!

7018309 it was written for halloween, what was i supposed to say? also you do know the alt ending kinda turns awww!:scootangel: into..noooo!:raritydespair:

So. A vampire Fluttershy has sex with a guy in a Neo costume...
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... Wait, it's on Hallow's eve? And she looses herself to dance!? And-And...
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F*CK YEAH!

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At least you find out that she's a virgin in that chapter! It makes Ch.2 more special.

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