i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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Mark has no idea that she's a monster… Yet
Great so far…
also, love the cover art of the story
6535101 there will be two outcomes to the story, i tried to base how she looks in the story on the cover but addeed a few details of my own like her belt, and jacket, also good thing this idea came to me in time for Halloween eh?
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True that
This proves that you can still love a girl, even if she is a creature (That's what Monster Musume taught me).
As for that sex scene:
6539743 i was going for a more rosario+vampire feel to it (tell me good moka isn't a proto fluttershy if anything) just with a lot of that series key elements inverted. there are also a few call backs to the traits of the mane universe flutterbat, such as her comparison to her feeding off him like "apple ambrosia" i also based her jerk personallity in the beggining on how she acted in putting your hoof down, just...not AS unlikeable, plus there's a more legit reason for how she acts. I think the actual sex was maybe a bit vanilla (given my work at least ) but i tried compensating for it by giving a more romantic edge like the scented candles and low light, did i pull that off?
You pulled it off excellently. And no that I look back at it, it does have that Rosario+Vampire feel to it.
More chaps please.
6544993 its ready
Mark's dead?!?!?! Noooooooooooo!!!! may he rest in peace
What a sad ending. Now I feel sad. I'm an emotional person
6547930 it's more an alternate what if? ending that takes place right where she asked the titular "would you still love me?" Question, and instead of still seeing fluttershy in her, he only sees a creature and his awnser is no, so he's not really dead, he only could have been.
Awesome
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A thousand & one thanks, be to thee!
Personally I quite enjoy when authors write these kind of "What if" senarios!
6671614 if you liked this seasonal story let me know what you think of my holiday one when you get around to it.
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Will do
6671629. Thanx
Also the story as a whole Daaaaaaaawwwww!
7018309 it was written for halloween, what was i supposed to say? also you do know the alt ending kinda turns awww! into..noooo!
What's with the hate for it?
7026197 what do mean? What hate for what exactly?
7026800 Sorry meant that one for the other one's.
So. A vampire Fluttershy has sex with a guy in a Neo costume...
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... Wait, it's on Hallow's eve? And she looses herself
to dance!? And-And...replygif.net/i/979.gif
F*CK YEAH!
This ending... It doesn't do it for me at all.
7521755 it was meant to be an alt/dark or sad ending
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At least you find out that she's a virgin in that chapter! It makes Ch.2 more special.
So this part of the story never happened?
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the alt or bad ending is the one that didnt happen
Just making sure.