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Lunasservant1985
i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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I think I know where this is going...
Interesting story. Still, is Harshwhinny aware of John having three girls already.
6231804 somewhat, but she doesn't really mind, so long as they'll always have that couch...and maybe something else....maybe...
really even though these stories are "sequels" to each other the only realy connection is they use the same characters following one series of event to the next...more like episodes of an actual EQ series than anything
6231731 Would you like a preview?
She practically was in tears of shock and disbelief as the girls stood casually at the top of the stairs waving her pointer at them like something out of a low brow anime comedy and whined..."Would you mind explaining why there where three girls in your bedroom? ""actually I was in his bathroom to be honest," Chimed in Aria, making Mrs. sweetstuff practically faint in disbelief. "
yes ik you cant word it like that in the actual story but it was the only way to fit the SP tag around it
The description itself tells it will be a funny story.
6233371 it's already awkward enough when you have to introduce your parents to your first love...but how do you explain to them how you have three first loves without looking like a gigolo? and when two more girls are spending the weekend in the neighborhood?
So...any thoughts on the story so far? i'm always looking for feedback
Update: omg i just realized your the author of castus and the human pony war series!
your work inspired me to answer the call of the fimfiction writer!...I dont mean to sound starstruck but...if i may be so bold as to say, it's an honor to have you comment here shadowWalking
6233571
I'm actually reading the first one before this so I can get caught up with all the info. I'll give a full review once I catch up, though this story is definitely something to read by its description alone.
And what are you talking about? It can't be that hard to introduce three girlfriends. Right?
6233874 maybe, but remember the sweetstuffs...they aren't bigots or all that backwards in their beliefs, it's just they have a very archaic way of thinking, the Mrs. especially, she thought it be a big thing to accept Jhon having one girlfriend, like just one that he'd go steady with until he makes and honest woman out of her like something right out of an episode of leave it to beaver or father knows best. but its basically amounting to "oh hi him mom glad to see you after this time have you met the three girls at once i'm dating?" yeah thats why its going to be very awkward when i get around to that little bit, and the lead up to it wont help either
also what do you mean by first one from the beginning? you mean taco bar right?
so apparently another dazzlings fic exists that uses the same cover as mine only slightly cropped...i just would like to go on record and say my cover is supposed to be the girls gathered around the back patio of a house posing for a reaction to the realization that they all shamelessly date and do things with the same guy...opps
6233890
Yep. Gotta start from the first girl friend to the last XD
I can't wait for the lead up and the revelation XD.
6234847 i kinda skipped doing an adagio fic unless you count this one, seeing as the little "surprise" was her idea and she's the most active with her most lines as of this story
sorry this one chapter came up a bit short, hope you still found it enjoyable.
This is getting hot!!! By the way, love the title of this chapter!! Hahahahahaha!!!
6238029 Did you get the reference?
6238038
Yes
Jessica rabbit
6238040 was it fitting? I just hope it fit the idea behind the chapter
6238045
Totally fits for the chapter
6238053 Thank you, It does my heart good to satisfy my loyal followers with new material. and im glad your enjoying the story.
6238062
Your welcome and keep being awesome.
6238067 one last quick question, what do you think of the character John Sweetstuff? I have over the course of the series tried to paint the picture of a character that, yes does "get around" but unlike Quagmire from family guy or boomhauer from king of the hill, I wanted to give him admirable traits and personality beyond that, would you say i pulled that off well enough zod, my friend?
6238090
John is good the way he is.
You made a Who Framed Roger Rabbit reference...
I officially love you now
6240026 there's actually one earlier in the previous chapter
"You don't know how hard it is...was, is being a poor girl with such...talents here in this world." She said giving a little pout that would make Sonata blush if she'd been awake. Followed by a soft flutter of those lashes of the gleaming rubies she called eyes. John bent low over her just inches from her pretty face, almost nose to nose.
i was going to go all in and have the next bit of dilouge be almost word for word to eddie's but i thought that'd be too on the nose
so....any other thoughts on the story?
Needs a bit of editing, but not bad. Not bad at all.
6252347 Yhea I took a bit of an overhaul on this chapter just now so it should be fixed up.
Thank you btw, im just glad you really like it.
Sexy as usual
6252451 and this is all just a tease to the big finish
is the grammar fixed up though as someone said it need a few tweaks before.
6252458
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us when the next chapter is published.
6252546 A mini family reunion, first meetings with one group of girls, and some "girl time" alone with the other two
6252554
Interesting
6252561 but thats nothing compared to what i have planned for the climax...which has been foreshadowed a bit already...
6252596
6252638 let me just ask...do you think the dazzlings after all they have been through in both context to the events of rainbow rocks and this series deserve something good to happen to them?...Really good?
6252665
They deserve some goodness in life.
Sure they did some bad things in the past, but they can deserve a second chance
6252789 Then I'll bet you'll love what I have planned for them and the others when all is said and done
...I only wish I had more time to get this story updated more, but some things including other stories are getting in the way, 
At least three of them havent even been submited yet...but I'm glad you enjoy my dazzling series so much, and I only hope they'll be worth the wait. 
6257502
You kidding, they are totally worth the wait
6257614 Updated with the moment you've all been waiting for
Good chapter
Also, now that you mention sonata dusk wearing something similar to the Sgt peppers lonely hearts club band, she kinda does wear something quite similar
6261230 I've seen harm's way make her a futurama fan in his dazzlings fics...but her a beatles fan?
quick someone call deviantart!
also speaking of beatles refferences...Paulie and Linda?...eh? eh?
Cool story /)
6263774 Thax, what do you think about it in depth? if i may ask...
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We're going to be in for some lovely conflict.
6265002 I think we all know where this situation is heading
6265073 Oh, I can see. That's why I said lovely conflict is heading our way.
I will enjoy reading it so much
6265093 Bringing your girlfriend home awkward enough as it is...but how do you explain one in you bed and another in your closet especially when they look like thisimg07.deviantart.net/82da/i/2014/311/e/a/the_dazzlings_by_prensesmelodiahenk-d85l6e6.png
granted that's tame compared to say the monster high girls...but when your mentality is stuck in the age of pinafores and mccarthyism...well you get the idea right?
6265131 That's right it's going to be good.
6265173 And the next chapter is ready...
that just reminded me of Rosario vampire
6266327 only with Tsukune not afraid to actually show how he feels and having no gripes with having three girls have the hots for him, I have drawn from that show a bit in coming up with this series i admit, but i still wanted to give it some of its own identity and flare in its own right
6267185 cool I like that finally there is a protagonist that is in this situation and will act on there feelings instead of being afraid.(loving the story so far btw)