Needs a bit of editing, but not bad. Not bad at all.

6252347 Yhea I took a bit of an overhaul on this chapter just now so it should be fixed up.

Thank you btw, im just glad you really like it.

Sexy as usual

6252451 and this is all just a tease to the big finish

is the grammar fixed up though as someone said it need a few tweaks before.

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Can't wait to see what you have in store for us when the next chapter is published.

6252546 A mini family reunion, first meetings with one group of girls, and some "girl time" alone with the other two

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Interesting

6252561 but thats nothing compared to what i have planned for the climax...which has been foreshadowed a bit already...

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6252638 let me just ask...do you think the dazzlings after all they have been through in both context to the events of rainbow rocks and this series deserve something good to happen to them?...Really good?

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They deserve some goodness in life.

Sure they did some bad things in the past, but they can deserve a second chance

6252789 Then I'll bet you'll love what I have planned for them and the others when all is said and done ...I only wish I had more time to get this story updated more, but some things including other stories are getting in the way, At least three of them havent even been submited yet...but I'm glad you enjoy my dazzling series so much, and I only hope they'll be worth the wait.

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You kidding, they are totally worth the wait

Son of a biscotti! I'm super jealous right now. Why can't I be a fictional character at times like these?