Nice couple of chapters.
Great connections here.

6347290 what's that mean? great connections?

6353185 Oh, Sunset's new connection to Athena, being her champion.
The connections of the Sirens being confirmed.
Those Connections.

6354470 oh ok, Yeah I figured since Sunset's motivation for coming to the EG universe was jealously over allicorn twilight, why not give her something even better than being an allicorn?

6469515 no i just meant his mother to be seamstress and father a baker.

6470012 If my guess was right, it would have been awesome.

6479131 oh...ill keep that in mind for later works featuring him.

6505116 oh its ok, I've wanted comments and feedback on my stories like this for ages so...THANKS ..Im glad you're enjoying my EG fics...I did do something of a spin off to this series thought it's not directly linked as a sequel to it if your interested, ill post a link in the comments once you've caught up

6505565 I drew a lot from animes like Rosario vampire and girls bravo when it came to taking this series that way, so that does kinda explain why the fics go into such territory, shows like that start in very down to earth settings but they often have a transition to a world less like the normal everyday in them often in their first episodes, like yokai academy being revealed to be a school of monsters in its pilot or the pilot of GB being about a teenage school boy allergic to women being sucked into a vortex that takes him to a planet of almost nothing but women....so barring the pacing issues and the grammer flubs...I take it you're still enjoying the read?