Mrs. Linda Sweetstuff was over joyed to hear her son was taking a weekend off to come home to the community on the shores of Lake Parthenope, little did she suspect a few "unexpected quests" would be dropping in as well.
6305288 If your father was a Canaanite god of prosperity turned evil (or so you think), your master the god of lust and destruction, and your mother the mother of the first succubus...you'd be pretty messed up too,
But trixie's a real full blood mage (a good witch so to speak) The dazzlings have new powers over the seas (or lakes in this case) and there is still sunset and John left to see what role they play in this....who knows maybe there's also more to the villian than we see...or not...maybe
also i noticed your avatar...I hope my writing here isn't coming off as...insensitive heh
now picture Equestria having a line from the other end not connected to its mirror verse to this central core of power and existence
"not connected to its mirror-verse but instead connected to this central core of power"
Also wow, this got complex really fast. Joined of feels like it was injected in, not given enough wiggle room to feel like a post of this universe yet. In the future maybe have maybe more than one chapter between introducing the ominous character and their simultaneous reveal and exposition.
Anywhos, still reading when I get a chance (been reading this firing work breaks)
6291689 and IT IS READY!
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Creepy stuff with this demon.
6305288 If your father was a Canaanite god of prosperity turned evil (or so you think), your master the god of lust and destruction, and your mother the mother of the first succubus...you'd be pretty messed up too,
But trixie's a real full blood mage (a good witch so to speak) The dazzlings have new powers over the seas (or lakes in this case) and there is still sunset and John left to see what role they play in this....who knows maybe there's also more to the villian than we see...or not...maybe
also i noticed your avatar...I hope my writing here isn't coming off as...insensitive heh
6305298
you're writing is fine
This is getting very interesting. I don't want to spoil anything but I believe I know what's gonna happen later...
6305412 like the new cover?
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Very interesting.
*bloody
"not connected to its mirror-verse but instead connected to this central core of power"
Also wow, this got complex really fast. Joined of feels like it was injected in, not given enough wiggle room to feel like a post of this universe yet. In the future maybe have maybe more than one chapter between introducing the ominous character and their simultaneous reveal and exposition.
Anywhos, still reading when I get a chance (been reading this firing work breaks)