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HavokAfterDark


I'm just like everyone else... except for the part where I'm completely different from everyone else... and that's okay.

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The, Fluttershy, girl sat on the edge of the bed

Shouldn't it be "The girl, Fluttershy, sat on the edge of the bed"? Over than that, good fic.

This sounds suspiciously similar to my fic.

5725251 I'm sorry. I've never read it. :twilightsheepish:

5725143 Thank you for pointing out that mistake, I've fixed it now. :twilightsmile:

There are so many ships.what's the next cheese pie?

5746930 CheesePie will never be in my fics. I don't judge those who like it, I am just very against it. However I am a firm believer in shipping all the ponies. :raritywink:

that's a lot of ships. I wonder who's with Pinkie, also FlutterxDash is to cute.

Shouldn't this have a Mane 6 Tag instead? That way you can add the Sirens and Sunset.

5760214 You caught me, been meaning to fix that for a while but now that you mentioned it I've fixed it. Originally only chapters one and four were supposed to exist, but on a whim I decided I wasn't going to half-ass it. :twilightsheepish: That's what took me so long to change the tags, cause I honestly didn't know what I was going to do. :twilightsheepish:

Wow I did not see that ship coming :pinkiegasp:.

5771411 Here's hoping it was a pleasant surprise. :twilightsheepish:

very good chapter :pinkiehappy:
I loved :heart: :heart: :heart:
I hope to see the continuation soon :raritystarry:
you are very good writer :twilightsmile:

5773924 Why thank you. You have no idea how much that means to me. :pinkiehappy:

5773930 seriously :pinkiesmile:
really, you're very good :twilightsmile:

I think i have been reading to many tragedy romance story on this site but, I feel like something bad is about to happen :derpytongue2:. Anyway great Chapter and has Mixtle23 said you are a really good writer :twilightsmile:.

5775549 Well, I dunno. I guess you'll have to wait and see. :derpytongue2: And thank you very much, it always makes me feel better to know there are people who enjoy my writing. :twilightsmile:

I love this story and not just for the clop. Good job :heart:

You have very little nothing to regret. This story is amazing and I would be totally on board if there were like 10, 15 more chapters, or one that's up to you really, but still keep doing what your doing because you're great at what you do. Take these it's dangerous to go alone. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

5787386 Well, thank you very much. It really means a lot to me to know people actually care about the stories I write. :pinkiehappy: Also, originally the story was only going to be chapter one and chapter four, but I just can't stop. I like this story personally and I'm glad to know you do as well. :twilightsmile:

VERY GOOD CHAPTER!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:
I loved :heart: :heart: :heart:
I hope to see the continuation soon :raritystarry:
Very good job, all :pinkiesmile:
you are a good writer :twilightsmile:

5802829 Why thank you very much. :twilightsmile: I always appreciate your comments, they really make my day.

5805081 you welcome. friend :ajsmug:
and your glad my day reading your fanfic :pinkiehappy:
I love so much this fanfic :raritystarry:
has lust, but simultaneously feeling :raritywink: :pinkiesmile:
I love that kind of fanfics :heart: :heart: :heart:
I hope you can continue it soon, and if possible to do so more fanfics :pinkiesad2:

The plausibility of the story suffers somewhat from every girl in story being in lesbians with another mane character AND having sex on the same night AND Adagio somehow always ending up watching them in one way or another, but it was a well written, well meaning and enjoyable story.


I would like some more please...

You have my attention. :raritywink:

5816432 Glad to hear it. Hope I'm worthy of the attention. :twilightsheepish:

Man. If there's one cartoon character that's hot as a lesbian, it's sunset.

Also, I'm really enjoying this. Especially my lower half. :pinkiecrazy:

Good. Fucking. Job.


I NEED MORE!

5817012 I know how that feels.

Keep this story going.

beautiful :raritystarry:
I love this kind of fanfic :heart:
so far it is the best I've read :pinkiehappy:
I look forward to seeing the next chapter :pinkiesad2:
continues so friend :raritywink:

So does or will Twilight have relations with her worlds Pinkie as well or is it just this world's Pinkie Pie only?

5921131 Y'know... if there is one thing I love more than people who comment on my stories, it's people who repeatedly comment on every chapter. That let's me know that if nothing else I have one person waiting on me to write and I will always have that one person in my mind pushing me to write the next chapter. You have no idea how much it means to me to see that at least one person has been with this story from the beginning and is still reading it.


Thank you.

5922686 She and Pinkie are "Experiment Partners"... and yes. Experimenting with both Pinkie Pie's is the optimum way to receive the maximum non-biased feedback on her research on the pleasure experience in both her human and pony anatomy.

5923519 you're welcome :twilightsmile:
I love the way you write :raritystarry:
I will always follow your fanfics :pinkiehappy:
(especially when there sundagio) :raritywink:
I love this fanfic because curiously put my favorite couples:
FlutterDash, RariJack, TwiPie, dream, and especially SunDagio :heart: :heart: :heart:
I am delighted the heart that you think of me that way :pinkiesad2:

Lol. Keep this up.

Warning: This story is fully of extremely wild clop, expect insanity.

The only insanity I'm seeing is this crazy-ass mountain of feels you've built.

What the sirens didn't know was that King Sombra's reign of terror came to an end thanks to a brave little dragon who protected the Crystal Heart and lead to Princess Cadence.

That was great :pinkiesmile: I like clop with feels makes a good snack :twilightblush: I WANT MOAR SOON! :flutterrage: If that is alright with you :fluttershyouch:

Yay! It's not just shameless pornography!

Seriously though, good job.

Another excellent chapter, I can't express how much i this story. :heart: The only thing I hate is myself for not being able to read this chapter as soon as it came out. Please for the love of all that is good in this world don't stop writing... ever! I love you, because you just make my day better even rereading it just lightens my mood. And I mean, how spot on the scene where Aria and Sonata are the exact opposite of what Adagio expected! It just is the best. :heart::heart::heart::moustache::moustache::moustache::heart::heart::heart:

as always, I loved :pinkiehappy:
I'm sad to be finished :fluttercry:
but still love it :heart:
continuous friend :twilightsmile:

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Well thank you very much. I'm glad you've enjoyed what I have so far. The last chapter should be up within a few days. :twilightsmile:

5976875 Yeah... this was originally supposed to be a completely different story and I've never gotten around to changing the description. Sorry about that. :twilightsheepish:

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Hey, I ain't complainin'... well, okay, I guess I actually kinda was... but I didn't mean it! :pinkiehappy:

5990829 All good, friend. I took no offence. I just hope you enjoyed the story. :twilightsheepish: I know with that description it wasn't exactly what a lot of people were expecting and I hope I didn't disappoint. :twilightsmile:

Shiet its over...

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