6539743 i was going for a more rosario+vampire feel to it (tell me good moka isn't a proto fluttershy if anything) just with a lot of that series key elements inverted. there are also a few call backs to the traits of the mane universe flutterbat, such as her comparison to her feeding off him like "apple ambrosia" i also based her jerk personallity in the beggining on how she acted in putting your hoof down, just...not AS unlikeable, plus there's a more legit reason for how she acts. I think the actual sex was maybe a bit vanilla (given my work at least ) but i tried compensating for it by giving a more romantic edge like the scented candles and low light, did i pull that off?
This proves that you can still love a girl, even if she is a creature (That's what Monster Musume taught me).
As for that sex scene:
6539743 i was going for a more rosario+vampire feel to it (tell me good moka isn't a proto fluttershy if anything) just with a lot of that series key elements inverted. there are also a few call backs to the traits of the mane universe flutterbat, such as her comparison to her feeding off him like "apple ambrosia" i also based her jerk personallity in the beggining on how she acted in putting your hoof down, just...not AS unlikeable, plus there's a more legit reason for how she acts. I think the actual sex was maybe a bit vanilla (given my work at least ) but i tried compensating for it by giving a more romantic edge like the scented candles and low light, did i pull that off?
You pulled it off excellently. And no that I look back at it, it does have that Rosario+Vampire feel to it.
More chaps please.
Also the story as a whole Daaaaaaaawwwww!
So. A vampire Fluttershy has sex with a guy in a Neo costume...
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... Wait, it's on Hallow's eve? And she looses herself
to dance!? And-And...replygif.net/i/979.gif
F*CK YEAH!