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I've read at least one story that treated Parasprites as basically the food base of the entire forest. The ecosystem is closed off and nothing else could possibly reproduce fast enough to feed all of it.
Bosheit schlägt die elfte Stunde,
Aus des Seelensumpfes Grunde,
Fluch ich euch, Vernunft und Sinn!
Wahrheit, Weisheit, fahrt dahin!
Lüge stärke meine Worte,
Ausgekocht in der Retorte,
Zeigt sichs: Täuschung wird die Welt
Und was wirklich ist, zerfällt.
Keiner Ordnung sei willfahret,
nicht des Geistes, noch der Natur,
denn die Freiheit offenbaret
ganz sich in der Willkür nur.
Weil wir kein Gewissen kennen,
grenzenlos ist uns're Macht:
Weil wir alles machen können,
wird auch alles nun gemacht.
Alle Bande zu zerreißen,
schwören wir zu Anbeginn.
Unsre Wissenschaft soll heißen:
Unsinn, Wahnsinn, Widersinn!
Yes, I've seen the cartoon. I liked the book a lot better, though.
What is he going to do with his old flesh and bone body anyway?
looking forward to more
and with that i got addicted to your story... I NEED MOAR!!! please continue your work!
he's still going to be able to use the humanoid body right? that seemed like it would make an awesome battle body.
6817451 I hope so.
Other than the fact that you call the parasprites Para Sprites (and always capitalized), I have no complaints with this story.
We are rather concerned about how things will go in the next chapter of this story for this human, pegasi are rather renowned to have the best eyesight out of any pony tribe. Rainbow Dash had proved that in one episode, so her mentioning why there is a living plant following the zebra may bring questions, we can only guess WHO may want them first. Though the Apple family has been around as one of the longest settled so they would be stumped on this issue too, though there might be assumptions that Earth ponies use to be like he is. XD
Though he's already likely causing deviations to the story/fate he knows by existing. Also sadly enough he is immortal in his current state of being, though of a wild magic type, sentient and sapient which some may refer to him as the likely only pure spirit of the Everfree Forest. though Twilight will learn that ghosts exist, that will be fun to see her try and formulate how it works.
Before I begin reading this I just have to say this.
This? This is garbage. I mean come on man. Every one writes something like this. It's a hack job, a "insert generic description here." it is an authors duty to try to find new ways to engage the readers.
Same thing goes for "it's a HiE story with a twist." It does, like you joked, send readers running. Don't acknowledge it. Accept that it is a used concept and boldly stride forward. Be confident that your story looks interesting enough to start reading and is good enough to keep reading.
Than said, it looks interesting, I read lupine tree recently and now have a massive wood (ha!) for plant humans in the everfree and you got featured so, without further a due, I'm off to read.
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What is the name of that cartoon?
6817451 He can just craft a new one remember? or atleast, that is what I understood from the story
Great job mate, I absolutely loved the chapter.
Alright I am going to give you a chance, because you asked. That and this doesn't seem to be a displaced fic. I'll start reading this tonight. See ya on the other side of this text gauntlet.
There is not much for me to say, but i love this story to bits.
6817343 you earned a whole box of cookies
Finished, it wasn't bad really. I just wish to read more dammit. I am gonna go off and take my frustrations out on a long fic. But, you have my interest. I would love to see how this goes.
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Thanks! The "Satanic Choral CO2" is one of my favourite scenes in the book. Has stuck with me for, oh, almost twenty years now. I actually wrote most of that down by memory. I hope you know enough German that you could understand it. It's incredibly mood-setting, but I never learned the English translation.
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I'm afraid I don't remember, but the book was called "Der satanarchäolügenialkohöllische Wunschpunsch."
This is a good story!
I really like the story despite the fact that it feels rather rushed and lacking in depth. Aeron just makes a decision. What he does is narrated but his thought process doesn't exist. He feels like an empty husk moving from one thing to the next without actually being there, because for all the physical description, who he is as a person/soul/being is not communicated.
For example:
and
That is the entirety of his introspection. He doesn't seem to have any emotion as a character. Later on when he manufactures an equine body, he jumps right in. No sense of self rooted in his physical aspects.
We barely know what he feels, much less why. We know his body is "bloody" and "mutilated" but there aren't any concrete details or imagery.
There is a potentially excellent story here that I want to read, but I feel we're only getting half of it.
The cover picture reminds me of the Viking Lava Golem from Samurai Jack
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The story is barely ten thousand words long yet and only a few chapters in, give it some time to establish things like that. Infodumping everything to the point of emo navel-gazing wouldn't be any better. It's in the phase of establishing what he is and what his place in the world is right now, I'm sure the rest will come later.
Hey, author, make him grew up some branches in form of wings and one stump in form of horn, it should win him some social points.
Found one more!
To that end I was trying to grow myself a new body, and equine body.
The "and" at the end should be "an"
Keep it up! I am hungry for more!
Pretty cool story, if a bit rushed here and there. Do keep going!
I feel rather intrigued by this story. I like the general setting, however the part with him befriending Zecora feels rushed. Imo, his magic could also be better explained. These two are the only complaints you'll get from me for now.
I like this story a lot and am already looking forward to the next chapter. I do have a question though. Is there going to be more gore in this story? If so, will it be greater than, equal to, or less than the description of his death via Timberwolves?
Hm, I seem to have run out of chapters to read...many sad, much regret.
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You also have to realize that he is a tree. I feel like that might just put a damper on how exactly you would express your emotions. As for the sense of binding to his original form. He controls his pony form as a marionette/puppet. So it would be safe to say he feels the same about his humanoid form. In that case I feel like it would be the same as exchanging puppets and would probably have little to no reservations about changing bodies like that. Similar to how I feel I would approach the matter.
However that doesn't excuse kinda choppy sentences he tends to have in his writing. Idk if you were going there with your comment but I do feel that this needs to be pointed out and hopefully someone will help fix it for him.
6819623 I was laughing pretty hard when I saw your profile pic and name 10/10
Where did you get this EPIC cover art?
I'll probably read this when it progresses a bit further (or completes). If I do and I don't encounter a single 'I am Groot' joke, I will be SO disappointed in you.
Also, good on you for finally spinning something interesting out of the cliche` of 'HiE gets attacked by and overcomes timberwolves / manticore in the Everfree' trope. (Incidentally my favorite HiE story involved the protagonist entering Equestria from.... basically orbit. Man vs Gravity. Go! Bwahaha. (he survived.)
It doesn't feel like the character has a concrete personality yet. My only real complaint, and one that's easily fixed. Can't wait for MOAR!
I quite like this fic so far. It's very well written. :]
A very well written story.
I can't wait for a new chapter.
Love it
I could be your editor.
Started off a bit shaky (it may be because, like others, I've seen a good number of poor 'brony'-HiEs as apposed to non-brony, and that put me on guard. And similar to the character's experience, writing a 'landing in Equestria' is always a bit rough, since it's usually the most contrived bit), but I like where it's going. Keep up the good work, and congrats on the feature!
Also, don't act so humble/silly about writing an HiE. It's pretty much my bread & butter for this site. Everyone has their niche, and even then, quality work doesn't have to rely on that niche and grows beyond. Sufficed to say, I gave you that chance before you even asked, and I don't regret it.
I would be willing to be an editor. I'm quite good at spotting spelling mistakes.
If you choose me to be one if your editors, please PM me. (Private message)
If the ponies weren't scared of Zecora initially, they'll be terrified of her when she shows up with her "pet" timberpony. Heck, she probably caught and turned some poor stallion into a shambling zombie tree-thing with her witch powers like some... evil druid-kinda necromancer! The author could have some fun coming up with wild, outlandish, and paranoid rumors to be whispered behind closed doors and shuttered windows.
I guess it's up to Applebloom to extend the olive branch... assuming Mr.Timberpony himself doesn't grow one first. Ha!
(Ok, that was a bit of a stretch for a pun)
Very good story so far, will be looking forward to future updates.
Good work.
Annnnnd....tracking!
6821259 It's an internal monologue. He's supposed to have that kind of awkward sentences.
very nice,
...please use more lesser used powers!
like, can he travel underground?
can he grow large leaves enough to fly/shrink down so he can fly?
can he breath underwater?
does he need to breath?
could he create a filter to make some sort of breathing mask, so he can bring ponies with him?
Swamp thing himself lived in a swamp, and swamps have LOTS of water...
plus he was shown to breath underwater in a few cases 3.bp.blogspot.com/-O4cuurWmWR0/TjydqPaOiJI/AAAAAAAAApI/jzgOTWbtsto/s1600/swamp-thing-sketch.jpg comicsrecommended.com/images/dc/swampthing_025_underwater.jpg latimesherocomplex.files.wordpress.com/2014/05/swamp-thing-32-cover.jpg
imagine him living in a house under a marsh, with a breathing space for visitors
I somehow knew that he wouldn´t meet anyone else yet, but it is a good story.
I'd be willing to proofread
6821536 Fair enough
So... can he grab things with vines? Also, since he's apparently picked up moss and everfree flytraps, could he... I don't know, "eat" an apple and then start budding fruit if he wanted to? What if he included part of a Zap Apple tree into his body?
i like this