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I can not wait for the next chapter
And I have a saying I would like to impart you with...A story is a guitar string. Too little tension and there won't be music. Too much tension and the string will snap, ending the story.
Yeeeeaaah! Zecora to the rescue!
While we're all sharing quotes, I shall leave with one that has helped me in my writing for a couple of years now:
"Beer before liquor, never sicker. Liquor before beer and you're in the clear."
The quotes sound a bit like #2 and #6 from this list I found from Pixar.
I ship Zecora and Star Horn
I cannot wait for my eyeholes to consume more of these fantastic horse words.
Heres a quote, "There are never truly happy endings, just varying amounts of bad endings."
Or any other FTDs (Fan Transmitted Diseases).
I think he might have been 'assigned' some sort of druid alignment when he arived, and that's why he turned into an ent, or dryad, or whatever when he was killed. Druids are all about plants and nature, right? Have you already thought that far in your story lore yet, mister author dude?
Awesome quote
7148595 heck if anything i may have planned a bit too far ahead in certain cases. >_>;
Good fucking chapter bro. Can't wait for the next chapter. The universal card bit was fucking hilarious!!!!
7148615 That's good to hear. That means the story wont stop updating without notice; or rather, for a while anyway.
THANK THANK THANK YOU YOU
Writing is like a Greek tragedy. Sometimes you have to kill whole lines before its all over.
Loving this, as always it seems.^^
*sees new update* oh helllllll yea *wraps belt around arm and slaps vein*
OPEN WINDOW AND MAKE LOVE TO THE WORLD?
LEWD.
This needs a brush and some Turtle Wax. Lots of lowercase words what should be upper (like shiny, a few 'i's and the like) and I think you switched tense when Shining came in to see the Treant.
you realise that tartarus isn't something the powers that be can open and close as they see fit right? I don't think it's keeper would like the diea of someone talking about how they can throw people in when he hasn't judged them.
The entire bit with the Sergeant's speech:
7149021 Um, in MLP it kinda is just Celestia and Luna who can decide whether or not people get sent to Tartarus.
Some of my favorite stories have Celestia as a mother. Heaven help the beings who wake up Mama Bearlestia.
Fire Shot is awesome.
Does that We include the CMC??? Zecora isn't fully recovered and could probably use three extra pairs of hooves. Most of the chaos the CMC cause is when they're unsupervised, if she's watching them and giving them instructions I can see them helping her brew a potion or something else to help out.
Grammar note: a few times names in the middle of sentences are not capitalized.
Fuck! I ran out of story! I was enjoying it so much...
BRILLIANT as always
well worth the wait
hmm..if you absorbed a plant with healing powers, would you gain them as well?
Hope too see more of this soon.
*sigh* sometimes i really hate that im a fast reader.
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Well, aren't you just a little ray of sunshine.
Hurays! It lives!
Here's a quote
"Life is like walking on a trail,
If you only look behind you, you will trip and fall.
If you only look at your feet, you will trip and fall.
If you only look at the horizon, you will trip and fall.
You are safest when you look just ahead of yourself.
But.
How are you to know how far you've come if you never look back ?
How are you to be sure of your footing if you never glance at your feet?
How are to maintain your bearing if you never look to the horizon ?"
7149262 I like that. I like that a lot.
7149021 who are you talking about?
Those quotes at the end sound like you're taking advice from whatmustido.
And that's terrifying.
I just finished reading this from the start and this is a great story. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more updates soon.
So I guess their world the proof is on the defense? Becuase they have no way to prove the dragon was attacked or attacking him. They have no proof their was even a dragon.
7149501 terrifying in a good or bad way
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For story quality? Good.
For muh feels? No. Unsafe waters ahead.
7149699 Better stock up on Feeli-O´s then
Oh boy...
Personally, if I was faced with Tartarus, I'd just escape and flee somewhere else. I would maybe take the jail sentence of it was decreed, if only to alleviate guilt, but Tartarus? Fuck that.
Oh, and you'd best be bringing the next chapter soon , because this is getting interesting.
Inbread nobles making a fuss, some things are apparently universal.
If I hadn't already placed this story in my Favorites bookshelf, that last quote in your notes would have convinced me to do so.
It's nice to know your thestrals love Luna as much as they do in my own headcannon, although it makes me wonder how they feel about spying on her on Celestia's orders. I imagine most of them wouldn't be happy about it, and some might object, but the wiser of them, such as Borealis and his sister, understand and accept the necessity of it.
7149858 its not so much spying on her as it is being her silent protectors. Until shes back up to her full potential
Eager for the next chapter
7149350 tartarus was a prison fashioned from the body of an primordial diety older then the titans themselves. even taking into account this is a different series we've seen nothing supporting the fact that it's just a place they can toss criminals at there pleasure. tirek went there yes but he committed a crime worthy of Tartarus and celestia and luna and cadence where placed directly into a cell. if tartarus was an option for them outright don't you think they may have stored discords statue there for safe keeping?
7150318 We've also seen no evidence to the opposite. That being the case, I'm pretty much just going to make it up as I go.
Applejack is actually just one word
Oh my Luna. Celestia knows Horatio Caine
7148860 get thy mind out of the gutter. It is where Ours belongs.
do you know who said these because they are interesting
7151653 I'm honestly not sure. I stumbled upon these at random.