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The heck's a scosche?
Cool, a chapter!
Don't worry, it's all for your own good! Trust us.
Ooohhhh i love this story awesome as always good job
7089406 spelling error, should be "skosh", but it means bit or smidgen.
7089458 fixed that, sorry for the confusion
Gah, damn nobles. I want to see what happens next but I really don't want to wait a long time, but life can be busy so I understand if it does.
Your biggest issues seem to be with conciseness and punctuation. Try to remove unnecessary dialogue and remember to use commas.
This chapter was definitely was not your strongest, but I still enjoyed it. Just keep trying, and you'll get better.
Man, I fucking love this story.
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It means "a little bit" or a "tad".
Ooh, court. Here's hoping for some interesting lawyer banter, eh?
Also, is it legal to formally charge a plant?
Good chapter I liked it.
As Humanity is the only one that can go to war on our planet so it goes without saying.
Good chapter, have a mustache
Silly, you don't nibble on parasprites, you chew them like bubblegum!
Nice chapter; eager to see how Auron's trial goes...
Nice chapter, one problem I noticed was the repeated use of heck when Aeron was explaining his case. Also another mistake (least I think it is) you put Sapiens twice.
Good chapter and I'm wondering what type of cell he will have.
7089511 actually no thats not a mistake, the scientific name truely is homo sapiens sapiens. Its weird but its true.
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No, as of recently it is Homo Sapiens Sapiens. To describe the "Modern Human".
Good chapter as always. Good job.
7089406 Something Lewd, involving a tub of mayo, 3 dogs/cats and 26 jack o lanterns.
awesome chapter and have a fave on me.
though i have to disagree with the religion is all bad part, but i suppose that's just a difference in opinion.
When blue blood came in I was hoping for aeron to punt him.
Your Multi-dimenentional theory is pretty advanced. I like it.
Such great wisdom from one so young.
You really need to get him to name his Species. Its getting old calling/thinking him Aeron the forest pony thing.
7089576 what sort of name would you suggest?
Huh, good to see that Blueblood's different. I was getting rather tired of seeing Blueblood painted as an easy villain just because he didn't like Rarity in the Grand Galloping Gala.
Also, good to see things were solved without much Bloodshed... At least until we get to the (likely) rigged trial with the Tribunal. Those guys sound like they have too much power from how I'm reading things.
Nobles, they always piss me off. I take great joy seeing them get their asses kicked. I applaud you for not making Blueblood a douchebag like many fics.
7089647 Yeah I like going against the grain with how certain characters behave/are perceived. I have a headcanon as to why he treated Rarity that way, which will be shown in a future chapter. but shhh, spoilers
7089679 Good to know. Maybe he already has a Girlfriend/Marefriend. Or maybe it's something else. Heh, only the Writer knows for sure.
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Hahaha...Defense Attorney Phoenix Right.
Sorry, can't come up with a pony name for him.
7089574 Putting Blueblood in that light is really unimaginative.
welcome to land of equestria, where everything that is not ponies faces constant racism...
Another amazing chapter, as usual, it seems.^^ You continue to do well on this fiction.:D
Ahhhh! That new chapter smell!
Lots of repeated exposition. They got too chummy too fast.
Like that Blue Blood isn't a prick, it's
Refreshing! I always figured he was "Bruce-Wayneing" it.
Yay! Lyra is okay!!!
politicians, nobles, complete wastes of space and existence.
Peel the fuckers and then bring in the tort..interrogation devises
Bucking YES you still are updating great story can't wait for next Chapter
7089592 Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't he refer to himself as a Treant (as opposed to a Dryad) in a previous chapter?
Aaaaaaand this is where the story starts to loose me. I was nice at the beginning, but now? Eck, I feel kind of sickly from reading this. It's just . . . .
Don't forget about their brother, Finagle. "Finagle's Law of Dynamic Negatives (also known as Finagle's corollary to Murphy's law) is usually rendered: Anything that can go wrong, will—at the worst possible moment."
7089544 HA!!
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I've seen Princely Prince Blueblood (at the Gala) explained as an act to get rid of the gold diggers after his title and money rather than the stallion. Kinda makes sense and gives the fellow a good laugh at the shallow mare's expense. "But it's Rarity, a Bearer of Harmony", you ask. It's possible that he did not know Rarity on sight well enough to realize who he used for a meat shield when a flying cake came at him. Remember it was Celestia's idea to keep the Bearers in Ponyville and keep them semi-anonymous for as long as possible. I mean, it's Season 6 and they can still go places where no one seems to notice they saved the world more than a few times already. I dunno. Maybe ponies are really humble, don't like parades for national heroes, forget about things quickly, or just don't care... unless you're gonna buy that bunch of carrots for 4 bits. Just picked them today. Ok, 3 bits, but no lower, I have a family to feed too you know.
7089883 true, but that was more an observation as to his appearance.
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7089592 He's most definitely an earth elemental
Congrats, My excitement at the new chapter saved me from Stardew Valley.
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I wonder how many people will look up the word smidgen now.
All that fucking edge. I bet you cut yourself, just for funsies.
Loved this chapter please keep up the good work! :D -completely generic comment
Love'd it. This in my opinion is the only good living tree fic, i look forward to the next chapter
You could cut off 80% of this chapter. Every mediocre kid feels obligated to show his very limited outlook on life by boring and useless repeatance of known facts through mouth of protagonist. You could try to look into this facts and show us something knew, to appear more interesting than others for example. With this chapter whole story have a risk to go into bucket because of loss of intrigue and conflict.
Dresden Files much.
Witnesses for the prosecution: Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Bon Bon, and Lyra.
Seven witnesses for the defense coming right up: Princesses Celestia and Luna, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Bon Bon, and Lyra.
Twlight Sparkle: "Wait! You can't call my witnesses for your own!"
Celestia: "That's what you get for missing staff meetings"