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I am looking forward to where the story is going to go in the future so far I am enjoying it.
Trixie is best tsundere
Technically paid. Payed is a bit archaic
I like that for once a character is smart enough to realise just trying harder isn't enough and they should actually learn how to do what they are trying to do better, also I like that didn't just have one of those slowed perceived time moment where he kills his "inner evil".
Celly... please don't do something stupid...
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Smart, or mature enough to realize he's the same situation as Bruce Banner and The Hulk-- which I believe sums up the entire situation nicely.
This was a good chapter and as far as your concerns for being overpowered I think he's actually pretty balanced.
I have a question, can my OC come in to teh story?
I think the correct wording for that is actually spelled, Baka.
7867699 while thats true, Trixie isnt technically japanese. or neighponese for that matter
I like where this is going. It'll be fun to see how things go with this new arc.
7867935 hahaha i guess thats technically true.
I intensely liked two parts of this chapter. The first part is after Aeron had dealt with each of the dragons, it kind of gave them a small epilogue. That might not be the right word for this, but it was almost like a finalization. I guess I'm saying that it reminded me of the endings of a Fallout game. Closure might be the right word. It's nice. As for the second part, I liked how you played out Aeron's and The Beast's inner dialogue. Aeron's thoughts are indistinguishable to The Beast's thoughts up until Aeron remembers a bit. Also, happy late new year.
good job
Whoa man, damn, to the favorites with you.
Uhh what? He just said that the only reason this happened was because he tried to defend his friends and got beaten and burned to ash, unless he is seriously suggesting that Aeron would come under similar attack in a area where there are many ponies I don't see how this is cause for any more caution than the first incident.
I sense that Celestia, being the great big overprotective mollycoddling ass that she is wants to take action against Aeron and is going to use this as a flimsy excuse. Remind me what happened that last two times something managed to actually put his life in danger? I was sure it did not go well for the attacking party.
Great chapter but it made me want to give Celestia a good slap and made me wonder why all Aerons earth and plant manipulating powers abandoned him in the fight until he was almost killed.
Maybe I'm just a cold hearted bastard but I feel no sympathy for the dragons, they were planning to murder three people just because they did not agree. In my opinion the world would be better off with them dead and they got off lightly. The ease with which they decided to resort to murder indicates that they, in all likelyhood, have committed murder before and are likely to do so in the future.
Good job on this chapter, i did not see any errors that triggered me.
7868064 His powers didn't exactly abandon him. His first instinct is simply to throw a punch. its the human thing to do. That, and the fact that if he truly let himself go he could very easily injure or kill someone with his power. The beast has no restraints or reservations about inflicting grave bodily harm on anything or anyone. It acts purely on instinct. So when it takes over, all his powers cut loose.
7867947 Got two words for you: HOLY SHIT!!!!
Definitely worth the wait bro. And dayum!! Hope Celestia and aron can come to an agreement to send him to Zebrica. Waiting with baited breath for next chap bro!!
*eyes grow distant as i remember Thomas the Screaming Tank Engine and his Screaming Friends*
Oh so worth the wait.
This was quite the interesting twist, glad to see Spike has a big brother in Aeron and that things with miss Lulamoon are progressing.
To Zebrica ?! Uncharted water we are headed. Here there be monsters! Now one more comes!
Thank you my friend for the chapter!
7868251 I completely agree, this was the first fic I read and still has me regarding it very highly I remember when it came out I was like holy shot this is awesome.
Great chapter
Loved this. And though the beast was beyond brutal, hope he learned from its abilities it used.^^
Sun butt is going to do something rash and very stupid and it will backfire gloriously!!! Love the story
Brillaint as always!
Zebrica eh?
wonder how you will get there....
swimming?
7868421 same. Was one of first fics i found that i highly enjoyed. 3rd story i read if i remember right. First was "why am I pinkie pie?" And second was the dark branch off sequel of the above fic with the former cop turned filly by poison joke. Both were pretty good but this is exceptional.
me thinks that ol sunbut is going to do somthing rash and awaken the beast.
I don't like some of the sayings because of the way the thinking goes, but at least it is a different one. I mostly think thats only because they don't act like that all the time, which is my answer to most sayings.
I only put that here so I remember where I stopped reading.
This story is interessting so far, but I still hope to see more happening between Trixie and Aeron before the story is just ending.
7868124 I think they were pointing out that it felt like he was barely able to do anything with his powers before he went RIP AND TEAR on the surrounding half mile of land.
i say dovahkiin
Did Spike forget the part where Areon is made of wood?
'm. This could crash and burn horribly, or be really cool.
I'll wait and see.
Hmm.... I'm not sure I trust Celestia's "Old Friend." There's just something about him that makes me wary of him. Considering that Areon didn't lose control with the spiders (albeit he did have a little help from the Tree of Harmony), there is that point in his favor: danger isn't necessarily a trigger. It's almost as if this "Old Friend" wants Areon gone, and for more than the safety of others. Given some hints earlier in the story....
Good chapter overall. The battle is balanced in its own way: Areon isn't a master of his powers, and has a human mindset. This limited his ability to use his magic. And we know that the Beast is severally overpowered, but there is absolutely no control.
Honestly, Areon should have known better. He knew the whole thing wouldn't end well, and he knew that if Rarity and Twilight followed along, they would handle things just fine. Even with some of the changes his presence has caused to the timeline, there are some things that would remain the same. It just seems to me if he were smart, he'd let what parts of the original timeline that can still happen, happen.
I was a bit worried that this story was growing stagnant. I can clearly see I was wrong. Things are ramping up. Best chapter so far in my opinion! Keep up the good work
The beast is back baby and its hungry for more
Hmmm... I too get the feeling Celly might end up doing something that's gonna bite her in the plot. I mean she has kept her pony's protected... Maybe a little too much thou; when sh*t go's down they run around like idiot's.
Keep up, this story is relly guud read.
This is one of the best chapters in the story so far imo. I just hope the next won't take as long
a question, have they destoryed the eggs nest? I'm not sure if it is the same with eggs, that the bird wouldn't like the egge anymore or if Spike would even know that, but I'm suprised that he is just taking it.
Okay...
1. I like the change of scenery
2. I probably miss a few of his friends and characters in Ponyville, but it could be very interessting if he meets new friends, maybe they even kind of whorship him like a god in that town.
3. I'm affraid Celestia is going to use that to make some weird traps and attacks on him, as much as I like some action, I somehow prefer it if the character doesn't have to go trough a long time of hardship and stuff like that. I guess I prefer in some storys the social problems because that nearly never interrupts other happy times. Yes I can enjoy sad moments, but I guess I prefer the good once in the end.
4. Well not sure if there is more to say, I finally managed to tame the beast and finished reading it. Good job, I wait and see how you are going to suprise us next.
Oh yes, I believe Celestia would have to hide what she is doing right? Haven't she kind of lost the first time she tried to get him into prison and he was declared no treat? Not sure if one little problem that could be cured in a nice way, would be enough to get him into that bad position again.
Of couse it is probably going to be a different thing with the dragons, if their boss is dumb enough to not think about what his situation means for him he could only try to get revenge.
edit: one litte thing, please don't do the usual thing and let Trixie stay in Ponyville.
I want her to go with him and not just join in the end of the story, saying I love you and then the story ends. I want to see more of the relationship, even after it, which is why I don't need it to get delayed that long.
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He grows a boat? :p
If he goes solo he could do it easy, once he samples some costal plants to handle the salt...
Taking Trixie and her wagon with him would be harder with more issues to over come, but still possible.
7868124 it was a good chapter and worth the wait as to out of character its your story your world there for all are acting within the bondries of said world only if and I mean only if said chaticter dos a 180 with no justification would I think that plus dependin on the narrative style we the reader's may not have all the puzzle but thats just me
Now he just needs to enter his inner world and face the hollow inside himself so he can put on his mask and become a badass Visored with control over both sides of his power instead of having his savage side always trying to take over and save him due to his hesitation and imenent death.
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Something along these lines would be interesting (fantastic idea, taken from Bleach). Assuming he finds the Zebra elders and goes through some kind of mental/spiritual training to tether the beast instead of caging it, this would be a neat way to overtake the darkness he hides. If he gets into combat after that, it might be quite cool for him to become part wolf (like the mask) in an Anubis form; part human and part beast, an intelligent force of earth/nature and wielder of death. Controlled destruction, but still entirely conscious of its actions as to not just devour everything that moves.
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In other news, I love the new chapter and hope that it continues. This is one of my favorite stories and with this new page has taken first place in my eyes, beating out Xenophilia as the best fanfic I've read to date. Keep up the great work, and make it as amazing as it can be!
Biollante is once more released! Praise the gods. Nice chapter! I was waiting for him to come out again.
(Sidenote. The creature will forever and always be named Biollante from here on out.)
7869308 thats scary high praise. Considdering how high Xenophilia rates on my own list of personal favorites. Ofcourse I will strive to make this the best possible story I can. I just realized its already been a year since I started this monster. It's my longest running project to date. And i have no intention of stopping anytime soon.
7869410 My favorite kaiju.
7869308 I was being slightly snarky, but I genuinely hope it goes that way. The idea of not killing but accepting and finding balance with your inner darkness is my favorite. Dark and violent doesn't always mean evil. Anger, hunger, pride, all these things are not true sins. They give you strength, when the world beats you down they push you to get back up and kick the world's teeth in.
I super want Aeron to go the path of the grey Jedi/visored of finding peace with the uglier side of himself instead of the goody two shoe story trope of killing the personification evil with a sword or just locking it away and burying your head in the sand.
what if Daring Do and Anon switched places when the story started?
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