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More. Soon. Please. I mean... If you don't mind....
So Aeron survived and is now heading to find and save Trixie while swimming through the ocean like the kraken from the "pirates of the caribbean" movie, Oh I can't wait to see what happens when he appears in the harbor of Coral Cove, will he stand up out of the water looking like Godzilla by chance?
:O
... well that will solve a few problems.
It will be a blood bath like Guts and Attack on Titan, though something will try to stop him and might be a struggle somewhere. However it will still be beautiful and our mind character will lose out of control soon.
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When Aeron finds out what these A-holes did to Trixie and the other slaves.
I'm pretty sure all the slavers are going to call it quits and bail as fast as their hooves can carry them.
I didn't like this chapter. That said, just because I didn't like it, does not mean it wasn't good.
Oh no, someone gave an opinion that I don't like, I better thumbs down his comment.
Honestly, I think it would have been better if you skipped to Mr. Tree Stump coming out of the water, all pissed off and worried, only to have shown what happened to Trixie later on, so we both shared in his rage, and as he goes off to kill everything that harmed Trixie, we could have a big smile on our face as we read the bloodshed.
Oh boy. I'm ready for some ass kicking
In regards to the hippopotamus:
I hate to say it, but again I don't really buy this. There is no way that Equestria is not aware of a slave trade this pervasive that deals in captured ponies. And there is no way that Celestia, especially the way she is characterized in this story, would stand for it. In short, this can't realistically exist.
It's an interesting twist for the story to take, albeit one destined to be brief, but I can't reconcile it with the world you've already written.
the sea shall rise and the earth shall quake when the Leviathan of nature awakens and searches for his lost love.
That last part brought this little scene to mind.
...Well, I couldn't find it, but the scene in question was the one from Godzilla (1998) where Godzilla sinks a fleet of small fishing trawlers by pulling them under by the nets.
Also, I foresee this happening in the future.
This, I was able to find.
Or maybe this
So, uh... any estimates on when you can get the next chapter out? A week? Two? A month? You already wrote it and are just releasing in stages?
more!
heh, neat. so we know he found trixie the question is, what did he do to the town of slavers?
Is it wrong of me to imagine the theme song to the old Godzilla cartoon? Also that pic looks sick as my computer's lock screen also again I hope the confrontation is as giggle inducing as this scene
Wonderfully written, I can't wait for more!
Also, trying to ignore the little voice that keeps reminding me that coral is an animal, not a plant.
well they dun goofed
8042248 well hes not really using the coral, but more like.. the bedrock its attached to. the coral is just along for the ride.
I am so glad this chapter ended on a High note, I would have cried if it stopped off anywhere else.
8042205 a ship or two goes missing in the middle of the ocean, you don't immediately think slavers right? Could literally be dozens of reasons for its dissapearance. But even if Equestria IS aware, what can they do? Zebrica is not part of Equestria. Celestia has no real authority there.
Good, I hope he finds the slave traders and burn them all.
Then he finds Trixie and burn all of the slavers.
Then he goes on a rampage to burn all slavers and slave traders.
I would recommend a good pair of running shoes to the inhabitants of Coral Cove
While going into gruesome details of Swamp Thing's path of destruction, starting with the slaver's port, would be entertaining I feel it would be far more impactful if on the way back from Trixie's rescue we get to see the wreckage having left to rot for a few days. I can hear the bloodthirsty bunch of you all booing that suggestion already... Heh.
Yes yes, there's no doubt we'll get to have a chapter of his righteous vengeance on Master's little plot of land (really hoping Swampy tosses fatso into The Pit for some karmic payback) and most likely a struggle to remain 'sane' without going completely overboard in a homicidal rage, killing everyone, guilty or not. Assuming the zebra slaves survive, this would segue nicely into Swampy's quest to overcome the beast inside by checking in with Zebrican shamans and such having saved Maji and gaining a huge favor from Zebrican royalty.
...and then Agent Sweetydrops drops in and screws up everything that was going so well.
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agreed, this is BS.
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8042260 This Coral?
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Every time I hear that hippo guy talk I can't help but think of this guy's voice.
8042272 I wouldn't think slavers because it's a counter-intuitive and totally impractical way to get slaves, but that's besides the point.
The point is that Equestria can't be unaware of ponies being enslaved in Zebrica. It's been established that they've been taking pony slaves for years. They aren't even attempting to hide what they're doing here.
As for what Celestia can do, what can't she do? Either the government of Zebrica is part of the international community, (in which case the same factors that would ostensibly prevent Celestia from acting [international law, or the equivalent] would also make this kind of slave trade impossible), or they aren't (in which case, nothing is stopping Celestia from just kicking the door down). Either way, this situation wouldn't exist.
8042305 link no work.
8042295 i dont get it.
Relevant to the slavers.
8042311 idk why it didn't work. Let's try this again.
8042311 oh screw it. When ever I hear the hippo guy talk I always here this guy's voice. https://youtu.be/ny1XuofP6_g
8042313 This Coral also your meme knowledge is lacking, praise kek!
You know he's beyond pissed at this point.
8042321 now its working
8042272 that's assuming Celestia would allow herself to be trapped in a political game like that.
I doubt Celestia would allow her ponies to be bought and sold, and do nothing about it because...oh darn..politics.
It brings a bit too much of our worlds politics into their world.
It might work more if you have Sweetie Drops and other ponies constantly fighting the slave trade...assassination, underground railroads, and things like that instead of what seems like Celestia turning a blind eye to a thriving slave trade.
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here you go. I'm on a tablet so I opened m.YouTube in chrome then copied that URL and deleted the m. part
8042334 thank you. What was I doing wrong? Anyway that voice is what I hear when the hippo talks 8042330
8042336 I'm on a tablet so I opened m.YouTube in chrome then copied that URL and deleted the m. part
8042336 when i wrote him I imagined he sounded something like anubis in this scene.
8042313 I find your lack of knowledge of memes disturbing
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8042345 that actually kinda similar. At least it's the same idea.
8042260 Oh, right. Forgot about his earthbending magic. Plus the underlying structure coral creates as it grows is technically rock, so everything checks out. Carry on then.
8042356 i try to do my homework. I don't always get it right, but I try