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F5 MAH SAVIOR!
Eyyy! Baked Bean shows up again. He is getting around these days.
CONGRATS. It's been awhile since I've seen this story. I just wanted to say congratulations on getting featured! Now have a nice day!
WOW Long chapter, Still a great one though.
What did she think was the plan if they were evacuating the city?
I should of seen that twist coming with the way Celestia went from cautious to paranoid to all out bitch. Well played!
I have a matching grin at the name.
HE IS BACK
Oh my God the day has come!!! An UPDATE!!!
"sister" doesn't start with a vowel, so you use "my" here.
"thee" is singular and familiar. It'd be "you" in both cases.
Comma splice. "Nay" is functioning a sentence unto itself, grammatically, so you use a period.
xenophobia
IT LIVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
Nnnnnooo not apple bloom!
if he is capable of bending nature to his will...
he might be capable of bending ogres to his will, ogres in myth where themselves living facets of nature. if things are coming to this, aeron well need an army, one with numbers, numbers he can live with losing. i hate to be blunt but it's time for him to go full on talion on this.
perhaps also start breeding timber wolves from different environments? i imagine the wood from the fire swamps might really throw changelings for a loop.
Well, that was delightfully unexpected, if traumatizing! Here's hoping that Applebloom's leg can be reattached! It's happened in real life before, and we got magic there in Equestria!!!
...*Sniffle*
Wow..................That's all I've got....just......wow!!! Amazing job with this chapter, thanks a ton, keep up the great work!
well, i wasn't especting the whole 'military takeover' from changelings of all things, hontestly? not a fan, quite the contrary, i was rolling my eyes at this 'general', skipped most of his dialogue too, i really hope his existence is a short one
A very well done chapter! It was definitely worth the wait!
Ahhhh shit. Now she's practically guaranteed to get kidnapped... again.
ooooo neat, the plot thickens
I was not expecting the title to be literal
Extremely awesome.
Story descriptions are screaming 'Revenant variant'.
First of all, hurray an update! Secondly, poor Aeron :'(
Okay 10/10
Soundtrack
You just made my day!!!!
Poor Apple Bloom, though. Hope all turns put well for her!!
Is that a cameo I spy?
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Yow... that was quite a twist. Though some of us have to wonder what those twin crystals will really do or what it supposedly unlocks. Theories are there sure but it's too early to say.
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Aren't military coups almost mandatory for dictatorships? Consider the mindset of the changelings that Chrysalis herself fostered. Hoisted by her own petard would be an apt comment assuming she eve makes it back to the hive. Sadly, Swamp Thing's fortune telling days are over as this Equestria's future has gone right off the rails leaving him as much in the dark as the rest of the ponies. I'm also dreading the next chapter as it will be the aftermath of this first battle of the war. So many known ponies possibly killed.
p.s. Has Trixie told anyone she still has the contents of the royal safe in her hat?
All things are wonderfully set in place. I love how it all comes together to form a giant climax of awesomeness!
Although, that last paragraph is setting off alarm bells in my theorizer brain(pessimistic model).
Tarandus has angered many, many beings that are beyond him....
And i am one them...
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there are several actually. you spotted one of 4
It's so beautiful
This general looks like cliche anime supervillain. All this pathos, monologues and superman-like invulnerability.
and thus the course of history was altered forever. Only the fates know what will happen now. Well done good sir/madam, well done.
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He certainly has the arrogance of one.
goIng lol
Everything beyond this point is specifically for the author to read, if you read it, it might spoil a future portion of the story for you.
.... *mental click*
... aw... aw SHIIIT... you ASS... I can see THIS from a MILE away at this point of my life, just... don't be an ass and take your time with making us suffer, OK?
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*raises eyebrow*
*looks back at title of the chapter*
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...PFFFFFT! BWAHAHAHAHAH!
Well worth the wait. Thank you for another riveting and harrowing chapter.
9088471 They're not quite over yet. The general serves Sombra, and those gems are for the Crystal Empire. The Heart should still be in the same place it was in canon, barring the Changelings getting there way in advance.
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aww, but watching y'all squirm is half the fun
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Indeed *giggles as innocently as a child, but as drawn out as a madman's*
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Damn, things went to hell and back. Now i will spend days wondering what did those damn bugs take, that was worth all of that.
I must admit i was REALLY surprised, i kinda figured that Celestia was either controlled or slightly corrupted by some exterior force, i never once even considerd the REAL reason she was acting so off, you really threw me off there, jolly good work!
Also, the fight scenes was simply glorious! truley intense, you really made me get into it, it was great how everyone was divided up into groups and how everyone fought on various locations, heh loved how Luna/Nightmare used a attack that actully leveled all of canterlot.
Also, the part where aeron asked the trees for help to save Apple Bloom, and their love for the apple family was so great that they gladly gave up their life force for her, it made me choke up a little bit, that was a truley touching scene.
*sigh* Poor little applebloom tough, kid was in a real bad spot, but the pain she felt will be NOTHING compared to what the wretched general will feel if Applejack or aeron ever see him, oh all the glorious violence they will bring down upon his sorry hide.
All in all, A truley and utterly epic chapter!
Beyond amazing. The beginning with Chrysalis replacing Celestia was fairly obvious to anyone with two brain cells to rub together, but everything else was exceptional. The only thing I hope is that Aeron can somehow manage to reattach Appleblooms leg. Having her lose it just seems so cruel.
9088580 yeah that's one helluva death flag.
Aaron didn't fight nearly as powerfully as he once did where's the Death Bloom he formed against the dragon? The sea monster who destroyed the pirate city? The first moment he grabbed the general he could have melted him. He has done that before. This nerf doesn't make much sense. A changeling that's not the queen with more bullshit powers than an Alicorn (with apparent infinite regeneration) sounded a little as lazy writing, sorry
Otherwise a solid chapter. Let's hope the Lord the Everfree receives a proper noble title to go with his de facto domain. It's only proper.
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True, he could have just melted him into goo, but he held back because he was trying to take him alive. And there's more to Tarandus than meets the eyes. Which will become clear later
Definitely worth the wait. You've created a wonderful villain in Tarandus. Motivated, unhindered by morals, as any good villain should be, and most importantly, he's not a complete idiot. Well done on that end. The chapter as a whole was good too, but Tarandus impressed me the most. Please don't let him fall for the same terrible tropes as other villains. Or at least none of the bad ones.
And all this time I just thought that you were writing Celestia uncharacteristically because you weren't a good writer. I should've known better than that. And finally congrats on getting featured! You definitely deserved it.