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You know, why DOES applejack always have be a prick and call out a lie no matter what? Ive kinda noticed she does that, in every single story, and it kinda makes her come off as a bit of a bitch at times...
One way to undermine Twilight's MUST KNOW setting
7717391 i guess the episode "where the apple lies" explains that bit.
7717410 i cant stand those people who are too dense, or just assholes, who constantly call out even the tiniest of white lies.
Beautiful. I love it whenever this story updates, cause I usually enjoy the chapter. I tried to imagine the song being sung in a guy's voice, which was kinda fun to do.
Duh! Plus she has a crush on you.
...could Aeron create dopplegangers he controls in order to have backup dancers/singers? f?
Really?
...didn't know that..
darn....
if they ever change that
I think there are a few lines in here about Aerons situation...or something....and how to protect his friends he needs to be stronger and stuff...
...i was sure i had some more songs somewhere....
so has he become like swamp thing then? a earth diety representing the will of the planet?
7717391 YOU BITE YOUR TONGUE!!'
Yay!!! Karaoke episode! Now we just need a needless beach episode to show off the characters in swimsuits and we are set!
But seriously, love this story! Keep going with the Trixie love! She needs a nice guy and pony or not Aeron needs a nice girl.
Very nice. I particularly enjoyed the way you handled Twilight's 'new magic' mania. Very believable. I also liked the way Aeron doesn't completely suck at construction, but isn't the best carpenter that ever lived either.
7717625 now if only the universe would stop giving him mixed signals. or just give him any signals at all as to what he is supposed to do with himself. but that would ofcourse take the fun out of it
7717682 swimsuits will have to wait till we hit the first EQG movie
7717697 ...what would happen to Aeron if he went through the mirror?
Chia pet?
Lawn Art?
Swamp thing?
Or maybe he hooks up with Everfree!
Magic Yoda is magic
Awesome chapter, got some good character development going on! And great sketch of spike all I could think of was spike saying in the best schwarzenneger voice "I'm the spikanator!!"
7717846 where do you get the idea that he worked at mcdonalds from?
7717813 you deserve a like for that.
7717410 good shit bro and you CAN USE other songs other then mlp in the way you did it i believe SO LONG as you ponyfy it. I know in a kingdom hearts crossover i read the dude did a "This is Halloween" parody for nightmare night which was like "This is nightmare night! Nightmare night, nightmare night!" But I'm sure he had to do it himself.
Grammar/punctuation/capitalization/etc all seems a bit off rather frequently this chapter. "Equestria" for example isn't capitalized, there are a few spots where the dialogue's punctuation doesn't quite match the mood of the speaker, and Applejack's accent should be made consistent. Either remove every "I" and replace it with "Ah" or the vice versa. I suggest the latter.
I'm going to ignore the karaoke thing—it's really just something that I dislike in fanfics in general. I've never actually seen it done well, even the best seem to be a bit forced.
Regarding plot, this chapter feels a bit filler-y due to the karaoke thing but things are progressing nonetheless.
Oh, and you didn't capitalize a "fluttershy".
Looking forward to the mayhem of the Gala.
Another chapter in the life of our favorite tree~
D'awww.... to the end with Trixie.^_^
Though, I do hope that the barista's question of a harem becomes a self-fulfilling prophecy. XD
...I only just realised that the 'Beefy Spike' has pretty much the same body-shape and facial-structure of Captain Qwark from Ratchet & Clank.
Nice rendition of the song, and I did like the way you took some liberties with it. Although, I feel that, given Aeron's ability to mimic multiple voices, he very well could have done a rendition of this.
7717997 vey nice and maybe an idea for another time
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Qwark's chin is like 3 times the size of buff spike
his torso is also ridiculously triangular
I figured you would have gone with that song by Imagine Dragons, "Monster". It would have been fitting.
7718032 That's why I said 'pretty much'.
Besides, He's more proportionally realistic in R&C 2016 and the movie.
They even almost removed his chin-butt.
that means bunny fire for the main char
Twilight is one big disturbing factor
Well them having a nice evening was a good scene, but I skipped the singing part as usual, I feel like I have never much to use, but I had readed the part from Trixie.
In most storys the singing scene somehow makes them look like they are good at everything, since this is mostly the fourth thing they could do perfectly. However he doesn't look like a.....a...Gary stue so far. (That was the word for it wasn't it?)
aaahhh no please no. I don't really like it if they make it into a real mystic force.
I think I would love to have a quick scene with them reacting about Tixie fainting. Usually I don't enjoy to much of the chliche like teasing of the main char, but this time I would like to see the mixed reactions.
I think I agree wit you there. I enjyoed the way they were able to hear the song.
7717421 I agree with that to, if even more with your first comment about that, but I guess this one means the same.
7717678 why? I guess they actually make her look like that sometimes in some stories, even if they don't mean to do it.
7717697 Do you plan on using every Equestria movie? I'm just asking because I want to know if I have to suffer through the movies in order not to reas spoilers. I only watched the first few movies, they aren't bad, but I take some stuff to seriously, like why they still can transform and stuff like that. I bet they even get a new way to transform in every movie, which would it make kind of bad.
I was in the opinion that they always needed to have at least one from Equestria there to be able to transform, not like their body always had magic and all that stuff I don't want to talk about right now.
Well yes, I only want to know if I have to watch the third and fourth movie for this story.
Another song that seems to fit would be "Carnivore" by Starset.
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I had to look that one up because the only "Monster" I know is the one by Skillet and that is the absolute worst thing he could possibly sing. (Humorously so)
I just realized. He's a plant.
Therefore, he is more of a she. Biologically speaking.
Also, my ship senses be a' tingling.
..............she fainted...........OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
7717955 I find AJ's accent to be a nightmare to write. sometimes its too subtle to put into writing, other times its very on the nose. i have yet to find a good middle ground to go with.
As for the singing thing, I'll admit that was a bit of an experiment on my part. I don't plan to use it too often.
Please can you tell me what song you originally wanted to use?
Anyway, great chapter!
Tsundere Trixie FTW!
7718134 You should watch Friendship Games anyway. if only to see the conclusion of sunsets redemption arc.
As for which ones i will be using. Equestria Girls 1 for sure. the others... I haven't decided yet. It depends largely on how the story will develop. I mean I have a rough outline of where the story is supposed to go but sometimes things go off script because of last minute ideas or because a comment gives me new insights.
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I'd have to wonder what salt water would do to him? Most plants don't take kindly to the stuff unless they were evolved to handle the extreme salinity. But that's only if he starts drinking the seawater. Most people can swim without drinking the water and he's not a mindless plant so it stands to reason he can go swimming without choking down seawater involuntarily.
And speaking of swimming, he'd be far too buoyant to do more than bob on the surface. At least he'd be an officially recognized flotation device, ha!
7718167 most plants are actually hermaphrodites, technically speaking.
7718420 hehe, he would make a good raft wouldn't he
Oh he's gonna sing? I wonder what he's gonna go with? Don McLean's American Pie? Simon & Garfunkel's Bridge Over Troubled Water? Oh I bet he's gonna troll. My little pony! I used to wonder what friendship could be...etc
Oh, oooh, Let the rainbow remind you is a good choice! :)
Huh, and here I've been using parodies of songs that are out there.
It's not that you are restricted to MLP only songs, but in terms of copyrights and other legal jargon, it's best to use either MLP songs or make stuff up as you go (parodies are acceptable).
Good chappy!~
7718528 yeah i really don't have the talent required to write a song or parody one or anything like that so I'm pretty much stuck with the MLP ones.
7718520 given the monster comment I'd of done either calling all the monsters ( with back up bulbs) little.shop of horror or I put a spell on you
Should work with Luna so he can get at the very least some low level nocturnal photosynthesis generation! Granted, wont be as much as from day but there are plants that still do their thing at night so it's not in the realm of "Magic, I ain't got to explain jack!"
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I'd like to see him challenged by Dashie to a diving contest, and no weights allowed. Not that Dash would ever stoop to taking blatant advantage of his inability to sink at all.
7717849 Yeah I'm just gonna delete that comment now. My cousin said that when I specifically told him not to comment with my account. Simply put:Somebody didn't switch their account.
Your profile pic went great with that one though. Gave me a laugh.
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I helped.
But yes, we mostly just ponified the lyrics.