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No! Not Melody!
Oh Buck.....You better save that filly, no fillies or colts are suppose to be harmed in the making of this story.
I thought it did pretty well, I liked it. I just hope he saves the filly in time.
Fucking spiders.
Climbin in yo windows, snatchin yo people up!
7538296 ...no....Oh god, I actually feel sick. It's bad enough that couple got taken, but please, not Melody!
Saying that you are going to go "Indominus Rex" is kind of a bad phrase to use. It got its ass kicked in the end by a bunch of small enemies, kinda similar to this situation.
Behold! Battle of the Nope!
...Oh that tears it, ARACHNICIDE FOR EVERYONE!!!
Bro. You did well. Please if u can help it don't stop doing this story!! A lot of us have missed it a lot!
Sweet moons! What an awful way to end a chapter! The worst kind of cliffhanger is one that involves imminent death. (and by worst i mean the ones that draw the most need to see more)
Welp, that's 3 deaths and a probable. If they're that hungry, everybody is gonna get eaten shortly after leaving line of sight.
7538373 SPIDERS AREN'T THAT BAD!!!
Looking good man, now I'm waiting for EgH Chapter 20.
I had a feeling this was going to go the same way as the alien broccoli battle from the old powerpuff girls. You have to eat them before they can eat you.
7538392 Even these spiders?
welp those spiders just signed there own death wish any any one want a flamer i cant get rid of this things
Funny how hard he tries to save Melody, but seemed to just watch those unnamed ponies die.
Well if Indominus Rex was the first plan of attack I can't wait to see what the plan of search rescue and destroy(search out the hive, rescue Melody, destroy every spider and egg in the nest) involves.
I can't really explain it, but it feels some parts of this chapter was forced. I knew you would have some of the ponies (as far as we know) die for suspense but it just seemed hard to believe no one did anything within the time that the mare unicorn got a few shots out. Why did he wait till half the chapter to show himself aswell? I can understand why you said th story didn't seem to flow after a certain point, it just didn't make sense for aeron to limit himself when the threat is very real and his potential for combat and adaption was shown to be better in the previous chapters than this one, but again I think that's why I feel this chapter was forced into the way it was.
I'll probably get a lot of of flak for saying that, but know that I mean no disrespect.
7538380 oh i dont plan to stop, but maybe take a short break and just write something random, helps clear the mind and prevents things getting stale fear not i have way to many things planned out for this story to abandon it.
I knew this day would would come but no one believed. This is what happens when you give those damn arachnids rights.
some epic music for this chapter and the next one
and
Also OMG Lunas armor and weapon so cool.
7538498 "Squee!" Fluttershy yay!!
And featured again
God Dammit Aeron stop being a pussy and just go Geo Juggernaut on them all fucking ready! Ponies are DYING! A child could be dying!
Seriously though he knows he could just use the earth's magic to fight and with help on its way he doesn't have an excuse to not use it since in the worst case scenario the guards would stop him.
Really? Your using a Mezzluna for Luna's weapon? https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mezzaluna
I'm a melee weapons expert. Mezzaluna's are impractical for combat, more for cutting vegetables. Try a Crescent Moon Scythe.
I really hope Luna is on the wing and can rescue Melody if Aeron is unable to get a rage power boost and rescue her. The random unnamed pony deaths were bad enough, but I REALLY REALLY REALLY don't want to see an innocent filly get killed by giant spiders. I'm also wondering why Aeron couldn't use kudzu vines or something to make a barrier around the whole inn, it grows quick enough he should have been able to patch holes as they were made.
7538373 *Shifts into red dragon form* i61.tinypic.com/snmn2g.jpg You have my flame breath ready to go. Let's go burn out the nest and all the eggs we can find.
7538418 *chugs a barrel of napalm in dragon form* I'm good, just point me in the right direction.
*snarls loudly and lets flames fill his maw* Time for this arcanine to do what he does best BURN!
7538569 Bah, Scythes are so cliché not to mention they also make for unwieldy combat weapons unless you turn the blade forward, which basicaly turns it into a polearm. And besides, 9 out of 10 times I've read a story where luna uses a bladed weapon its a Scythe. Not going down that route.
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7538606 thanks for catching that, fixed
7538595 well I wouldn't use it as a weapon, because you can only really use it as a downward or upward attack. If Scythes are too cliche use a snake sword or chain dart they are hardly ever used in fics.
7538595 images.ontheedgebrands.com/images/A17-BK2649.jpg
Makes me wish seven days to die had spiders in it (jade said as they hold up in their hiddie hole hopeing the zombies go away)
7538643 interesting choice. I will keep that in mind for later use.
No siege weapon Aeron, fine, for now though, I do hope to see him begin to develop weapons other that just acid and fly traps, if you need an idea I could help
7538413 Well...no these spiders are terrible and need to be burned. Spiders in real life however are not that bad...unless it's a camel spider...*shivers*
7538316 hid yo kids, hide yo mares, cause they EATIN everybody body up here
really you have plant powers and are being attacked and you do Jurassic park rather then plants vs zombies?
This is in present tense when the rest of it is past.
And yeah, I can see where it sounds a bit forced in some places - but honestly, sometimes it's better to put something out than let a story sit for a year with nothing going on. Hell, by forcing passed the trouble spots, sometimes it makes the next bit flow smoother just because it's out of the freakin' way.
Dude, do NOT keep us in suspence! What happens!?
7538595 Why not have her wield a khopesh? Not only is it a historically valid weapon, it's also one that fits with the lunar motif.
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7538679
(Looks it up)
...*Meh* Still not as bad as Australian spiders.
7538688 or heck, undergrowth from danny phantom, or poison ivy from batman would of been a better way of fiighting them off.
7538679 personally I'd be more worried about spiders like the brown recluse.
7538755 Yes that is the most poisonous I've heard.
7538724 Meh not as bad as those pictures with spider eggs...I cried myself to sleep the first time I saw one of those pictures.
I ABSOLUTELY ASRGFROIEHNAPROLKGJANRBVIHAJLSKVFKBHKL;JBANJ
HATE SPIDERS, MAN!
7538714 honestly i have no idea why i didnt think of that.
There are a bunch of martial arts weapons that would fit Luna, without going the scythe route.
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Plus more fantasy style stuff.
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Plus if you don't need to physically grab your melee weapon because of magic, you can do some really crazy stuff since you don't need handles.