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So... do Twilight and the others know that Celestia banished him? I'm still wondering about that.
Woot Woot!! :D
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Seems to be a no if they're asking why he didn't come back.
Classic Celestia.
you know coral ain't plants, right?
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From their lack of concern that he's on Equestrian soil, they might not know. Either that, or it just hasn't occurred to them to be worried yet. Who can say really?
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I don't think she told them. Remember, she tend to hide many secrets from her student.
Shining was wisely shut his comment on this one.
Psst~ These forgot to be capitalised~
I can imagine Shining's face pitcher perfect when Aeron told him about lunch. Honestly, those ponies really need more culture, they're too... What's the word? Static? Couch potatoes? I dunno, I lost myself there. I also have to wonder how fast Aeron was moving underwater to have Trixie be comfortable and not probably feel motion sickness and/or the inertia.
Thanks for the update!!
yey finaly an update
Why didn't he bring up his banishment? The only way his conversation with the girls makes sense is if they don't know he was banished. I would have expected that to be a sore point that would have been brought up quickly to explain to them why he had to leave without telling anyone. That way they wouldn't go tell Celestia too soon and get him caught. Instead he apologises and says he was stupid and not in his right mind? It was the best option for everyone IMO.
I'm glad that this story updated!!!! I want to know what happens next so much!! Areon exploding about Celestia, Twilight blindly siding against Areon due to her borderline fanatical love for Celestia possibly? A split between the main 6 with those who side with Celestial on one side and those who side with Areon on the other? Celestia being dumb and trying to force the elements that don't side with her to use the elements on Are on? IM SO EXICITED
Yes!!! It continue's :D
And wonderful wording there too, with "Not retelling story twice"-thing. Now let's wait what SunButt has to say about thing's... Probably tries something-something-element's of harmony" or something similar... We'll see...
Also, good luck with you'r muse... Mine has been sneaking away when trying to start writing...
So glad it's back again! But at the same time it's only part one! ARGH! The only thing worse than a cliff hanger is knowing that there's going to be a cliff hanger
pinky never change
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for some reason I can't help but see arin telling a similar story to this to shining.
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Sheltered? But yes, there's almost always that reaction to cuisine outside standard vegetarian fare. For most readers here, to get the same reaction, you'd have to resort to something exotic like deep jungle fare-- eyeballs and ox gonads. I am a little surprised unicorns haven't got something unique to themselves in a food table way; earth ponies tend to be strictly vegetarian, pegasi have some seafood, but unicorns don't have something to call their own.
Maybe something magic based would be it? A spice or sauce that's literally "magically delicious" [have to sing that part] added to or a side dish of the unicorn meal. A ubiquitous spice sounds like a decent world building idea and easy to incorporate. Might taste weird but have no effect on non-unicorns while those with a horn would find it irresistible and rejuvenating, the spice making food process more readily into energy replenishing mana for them and in higher doses, a mildly euphoric sensation like a sugar rush. I suppose you could go the whole "Dune" route and say that eating just pure spice would cause eyes/horn to glow, lips to stain, and some possibly degenerating effect with too much mana being absorbed for the unicorn to handle (can't become an alicorn that way despite the legends). To prevent that, it would need to be rare in the wild, something like Saffron comes to mind; the most expensive spice on Earth, it takes almost 500 hand picked stigmas to make a single gram of the spice (it comes from the stigma of the blue flowering crocus). However, it's extremely potent and just a tiny amount will add color and zest.
To make it more unicorn based, it could be assumed that trying to harvest by hoof is a disaster, requiring a delicate telekinetic touch to remove the stigmas without obliterating the delicate flower itself between clumsy hooves-- like trying to pick up an eye contact from the ground with boxing gloves. A pony such as Rarity would be ideal with her precise TK magic. Yes, a non-unicorn could do it with tweezers but they didn't have those back in the early pre/post-unification days so it's far more traditional for unicorn harvesters to do it and ponies do so love their traditions.
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you raise a good point, and bring up some interesting ideas.
Fuckin called it, I knew he was gonna be a self sustain oxygen tank for Trixie travel under-water rather than taking a boat again, though the whale idea was a cool way to think of it.
Oh and welcome back good to see you updating again (This is the only story i read from you (sorry))
I wonder what will happen this time with Celestia. Bon Bon made it pretty clear what she would do if he came back to Equestria. I feel like he'll be sentenced to something and begrudging accept punishment of labor or some thing cause Trixie didn't want to fight. Then in two weeks time comes the changeling swam and Chrysalis will offer him a partnership to help her cause he was banished and punished, then they'll fight and what not.
That's my prediction.
Oh now that i think about it i wonder if Trixie is like spy like Bon Bon, cause why would she not want to fight the guards and just leave Equestria, why would she risk his potential imprisonment / death if he goes to meet with Celestia, because she was ordered to get him to meet Celestia when they figured out that he was in Equestria. And to explain her capture in Zebrica maybe she tasked with spying on him and not actually receive training, that situation would still be traumatic for her. Would also explain why she feel in love with him, she was only asked to spy on him not ordered as an employee of Equestria. But to be honest i don't believe that, i am just writing trying to help give ideas to Aprion.
8617399 He submarine'd it all the way back home, now that is a genius use of his gift, now I wonder if he can turn himself into an airship and fly off into the sunset with Trixie...
Great chapter! Lol
I knew you must have broken down the chapter into 2 parts cause there's no way after all this time you did only a 4000 word chapter. Xp
I'm both excited and dredding when he meets the princesses. Xd
I'm just happy it was updated. Celestia is gonna go full retard and try to imprison him isn't she?
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in fics like this when doesn't she HELLO she is easily the most neglectful leader of all think about it there is STILL nobles USELESS nobles (except fancy pants)
Glad this updated. Its a good story.
Happy whateverday to you as well. Loved the update!
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If she tries I'm pretty sure he could cause all their crops to wither and die which would Celestia to negotiate with the other nations for food or face starvation. In doing so the other nations could charge Equestria exuberant prices, bankrupting them into the ground.
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And THAT makes me imagine him taking the shape of Bowser's airship. Theme included.
Ok, meeting them went nicely and yes...Pinkie crying in sadness sounds like watching a great tragedy unfold and can't help.
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Yeah, I'm expecting Aeron to drop the bomb about his banishment when they're face-to-face with Celestia for maximum effect.
Quoting myself because I REALLY want Aeron to bring up something along these lines. Hell, with the EoH there it'd become even better!
Besides, I may have missed it, but I think every mention of "rulers" or "Princess" was singular, as if Celestia is High Queen with the only crown, and Luna her kid sister just playing princess. If Aeron is really so fucking terrifying, shouldn't he be meeting the princesses?
Nice.
HAPPY EARLY EMPEROR'S DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Glory to the throne of Terra.
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Wait... a juvenile equestrian? is he asking for a pony?
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Likely! Or just a horse... not entirely sure.
There is like a whole series of comic strips based off of this called the real world 40k or something. Just found out about it myself. Oh and also, I just posted a 2nd chapter to a story I have. You should check it out.
(totally not shameless advertising for my stories.)
Loved it. Can't wait for the second part and the Canterlot invasion.
The thing I'm waiting for is when Celestia tries to explain her reasoning of since she didn't know of a way to help him it didn't exist and was going to put him in Tartarus, especially since it took very little time to find once he could actually get down to helping himself and that it was a fairly simple process once they knew what to do.
Also since Celestia is definitely going to try to turn the mane six against him by saying he slaughtered numerous ponies in a town, maybe his response could be some thing along the lines of "173 I killed 173 in that town, however I saved 85 slaves in that town and you know what before left I had some research done, that town processed an average of 5 slaves every 3 days and the town had been doing "business' for well over a year" strange how you neglected to mention that this was a slaver town to everyone".
Lastly i can't wait for everyone's reaction to Celestia's "anti Aeron" bolt, especially if he points out this wasn't something you could just throw together this was something she had been preparing for a while, and that the bolt was made specifically to kill not stop, not restrain, not seal away, this thing she had made specifically to kill him.
Another great chapter, as always.^^
I was so happy to see this story starting to bloom again.
Keep up the epic work, I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
i'll point this out again, celestia can't win here from a legal/political standpoint, she sent an equestrian agent into a separate sovereign power to assassinate a figure who was not an equestrian citizen, well aeron isn't protected by the zebracian government, it is still politically illegal for her to have sent bonbon there unsanctioned by zebrica. further is the fact that she clearly did not involve luna in this dispatch, nor did she get lunas seal when drawing up aerons banishment, at worst she can chew aeron out for coming back, but really? any punishment she tries needs to be ratified by all princesses, luna and twilight say no and celestia is SOL, and it really seems like they would say no. celestias little vendetta is doomed to fail here.
Typos:
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twenty-five*
"Counted" sounds/feels awkward/wrong here, "... if you were to count Shining Armor" would be more correct I believe. Or "included" would likely flow better.
Nothing else jumped out at me. Good chapter, glad to see more of this.
Yahoo! More story~
There are two problems, but Erik caught the first one. Second one was no capitalization on some of the Shining Armour's.
Good chapter. Hyped to see Celestia's reaction to him not giving a single fuck.
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I think you really meant Luna and Cadance, because— if my memories are all lined up properly— Twilight is not a princess yet.
Anyone else hoping to see a an extremely brutal verbal smackdown be received by a certain solar monarch?
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my mistake, point still stands.
I just finished getting caught up on this story and I must say it is quite the story, I wish to see more of this!
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Well yeah. I just wanted to point that out.
*Looks up drunken shrimp* I'm going to agree with Shining Armor on that one.
Still, can't wait to see the story finally get told. But it's pretty clear to me they only came back to get Trixie's wagon and something happened that blew their cover.
Good to see you got your muse back. Mine left. Was almost done with the first chapter then wanted to change it a little then it left. Was there then just gone been real depressed since then. Oh well it happens I guess.
Yay! The visit is coming.... still waiting for some clean and unbiased Celestia spanking in the form of Twilight and the girls finding out that Celestia effectively cleared him of charges, set him free, then reconsidered and sent a heavily biased 'agent'/assassin to bring him back... effectively murdering him and then banishing him on principle.
I mean, come on... not even Idol worshiper #1 (Twilight) is going to take that completely sitting down.
But, since that's not likely to happen, I'm still VERY glad to see this running again; and I certainly look forward to the next offering.
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I'm eagerly awaiting for it.