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Ooh, SNAP! Now Trixie has to battle Celestia! Can she win? Will she win? We'll have to find out next time.
I hate cliffhangers like this.
Please tell me the idea is drafted somewhere :D
I have a feeling that something is affecting Celestia mentally, making her more cruel, closed-minded, and tyrannical than she should be, or at least I hope that's the case. If this just turns out to be the characterization of her in this story... Honestly, I have to say I would be disappointed. It seems to go counter to her behavior in the show, and without that being the main point in an AU or something similar (as is in a good number of variations on the character such as Tyrantlestia), I feel that it would come off as contrived and unnecessary. Of course, it could be pulled off well, but the odds aren't exactly in the favor of that outcome.
Holy....crap......Trixie....
*spit-take*
Hold the motherfucking phone!
................
Zecora's pregnant?!
And Trixie can do that?!?!
WE NEED NEXT CHAPTER NOW
I'm hanging off this cliff, but I'm holding on like nopony else.
Well.... I wasn't expecting that end. Honestly, Trixie is screwed.
I am also finding Celestia to be a self-righteous, judgemental bitch. "I know everything and if you disagree you're wrong." "It's a diarchy, but only in name because MY word is final. Luna doesn't matter."
Edit: Also, couldn't they just, oh I don't know, send an Earth Pony to the Everfree!?!? They'd be able to tell immediately if the forest felt different.
I like your new avatar picture. Also great job on the chapter, and Celeste is going to get her butt handed to her. Yay!
VS
Ready?
FIGHT!
Oh shit is going down! Also... Celestia is acting a bit off...
Trixie you idiot
Oh and good chapter btw
This is my guess but I bet chrysalis is behind Celestia's behavior at this point.
Yeah, no pressure, but Celestia's altered character better get explained with something more substantial than "oh that's just how she would act towards a real threat to her ponies blah blah".
No sign of Luna and shortsighted angry Celly?
I call shenanigans. Something is not right.
Now slap dat huuuuge plot in a duel and go fix all the things.
Damn, Celestia is being a real asshole for disrespecting Luna and Aeron.
Break Her
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That cliffhanger!!!! I am super excited to see what comes next! Also, I am in agreement with most of the other commenters. There is something very off with Celestia.
Also, Why can’t I favorite this story twice?
Ladies and gentlemen, it's...
SHOWTIME!
Well wasn't expecting a duel but i'm all for it. Can't wait for the next chapter, I really hope that nothing bad happens to either of our main heros.
Or -now just hear me out here- ...SHE COULD FUCKING CHECK!!! She's so caught up in her own assumptions that she's failed to realize how easy it would be to verify his story. Just go out into the Everfree and search for evidence before you pass judgement like that you damned idiot!
But then again, if she were the type to do the sensible thing she wouldn't have banished him in the first place. So I guess this is at least kind of in character, at least with regards to your version of Celestia.
....I detect something is off with Celestia. And that something is called fear. Irrational fear.
Yet another amazing chapter, as usual. Loved it. Admittedly, Celestia seems a bit out of character. But then again, she did say that countless individuals tried to solve the curse throughout her lifetime, so that does give credit to it.
create now trixie has a gun THAT THE MOST AWESOME SENTENCE
ABOUT HER EVER SAID.
I
For many years in love was considered a dangerous emotion with no place in marriage because People it was useless. In fact there are no original fairy tales that have any mention of “true love's kiss” that was made up by disney, I think, or by parents that didn't want to tell their kids “Then the prince raped the sleeping princess Aurora and she gave birth to twins. One of the twins crawled up to her finger and sucked out the splinter, breaking the curse and awakening her.”
wait but Arin said “Fishing for intel are we? You don’t expect us to give away all our secrets do you Shining? Not when we might still end up as enemies if things go south once we meet with Celestia.”
in front of twilight and she didn't even blink so did she know or didn't she?
I think I suggested this a few chapters back.
Wait THATS her real name damn.
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I'm really hoping that this is one of those stories where Celestia is just a bitch and ends up getting her ass handed to her. Even in the show, Celestia is a bit of a manipulative cunt, but nobody ever wants to see her put in a bad light in Fimfiction. What's up with that?
Celestia
Well, this will certainly be interesting.
100 bits says it a tie.
I get the Feeling Trixie has the plan
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Yeah, I honestly prefer the whole bitch celestia because a thousand years as sole ruler, umm.. I'm sorry, but that will lead to corruption within what is essentially a being with an immortal body but has a flawed personality and is more mortal in the ways of how they act and think.
While Celestia is definitely more powerful than Trixie she is most certainly out of practice and shape, plus its been shown time and time again that she is ridiculusly vulnerable to surprise attacks something Trixie can probably pull off, lastly Celestia probably has to restrain her powers from "nuke the city" level.
Plus if it turns out that this is actually Chrysalis than this would be a good way to expose her and make her waste her magic.
Lastly if the duel is happening their needs to be some form of judge and I bet that since the position would normally fall to Celestia, but since she is obviously unavailable it would have to be someone like Luna or Cadance maybe Shining Armor.
Forgot to capitalise these. And forgot your spacing for his name. There are other instances where I'm not sure whether you want to be capitalised, like Element Bearers and such but those are fewer.
Its.
Else.
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That's definitely been a theory that's been going about for quite awhile as well which seems to be even more credited that she 'believes' that Aeron 'corrupts anything/anypony 'it' touches'. Don't forget that the other Element Bearers are also present which would drastically show them another side of her that they've never seen before let alone experienced (probably) in another encounter with anyone else. Ever.
Still, I like Aeron's quip about how those guard ponies are basically lemmings at this point. Or maybe it's the herd mentality going on again? I dunno, lemmings seems more appropriate to me...
Edit: Oh yeah, let's not forget how she basically dismisses Luna as 'incapable' in front of all the noble ponies AND the Element Bearers as well. That'll surely go well with them.
okay your not having celestia get out of this with that BS, Luna needs to draw a line here. also celestia still hasn't answered for her assassin, or her illegal use of power, your telling em the nobility are going to sit and take this? BS hell it could be argued cadence should have been aware of the banishment.
No one is going to mention how insanely OOC celestia is being? Even for this universe everything that was said could easily be proven by sending some guard to scout the forest. The "no u bad" just feels like a forced cliffhanger
Nice (and quicker) uploads, very much enjoying this. I wonder, Trixie said a "nobles magic duel", so i'd imagine Celestia could pass of the challenge to Twilight or some one equally good at magic because "it'd would be unfair for the princess to fight a normal unicorn". So i believe Trixie will win by out smarting her opponent and using her life lesson from Zebracia to her advantage.
I wonder why Celestia was so mad though, I mean she banished him sure and he came back against her will but you'd think she'd approach the situation with politic calmness (if that's a thing). Maybe Celestia is falling to the nightmare. Celestia seemed to pass of Luna's authority like some joke, almost like she was recently angered by Luna, maybe Luna has noticed and tried to help Celestia but as all crazy / stupid people are the more you try to help the angrier they get. I'm also surprised that Celestia a connoisseur of friendship and reformation is surprised that the timber wolves were reformed (re-born, path righted, saved?)
And Trixie's family Ho-boy Trixie thought she was disowned before lol.
And the magic duel i wonder if Trixie does lose will Aeron lose his shit for her being injured? I'd imagine if it was a completely one-sided fight Aeron would step in but if Trixie also injures the opponent Aeron will stay his hand. Maybe if Trixie does lose the daughter (or was it sister?) of the Zebrican royal family come to the rescue of Aeron and Trixie.
Also is it just me or are these last two chapters feeling shorter than normal. I know there not (i looked at the word count) but it just feels like much hasn't happened.
Well no matter what happens next chapter it'll be interesting that for sure.
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She not acting OOC. she is acting exactly like someone who had one of the hard truths she has built the foundation of her world view on quite literally stripped out of under her, and she not acting but reacting to her lost of truth.
add in 1000 years of extra stress covering for Luna and more then likely spending every night of those 100 years keeping Nightmare Moon from attack Via dreams as well as years of ignoring and tolerating others bending over backwards to kiss her ass, and you got a full on Breakdown waiting to happen.
As does King Dragon.
Done.
A sense an Agni kai!
Wait a minute.
WAIT JUST ONE FUCKING MINUTE
I THINK I GOT IT!
Holy shit. Talk about your Chekov's Guns. I'd completely forgotten about that story thread. Clever author.
I mean, I could totally be wrong, but I think I'm right. And in case I am right, I'll be keeping this one to myself.
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You're a ProZD fan? ...I love you.
Huh Celestia is turning into a bigger and more annoying turd with each chapter. Kinda curious if this paranoia will be explained, or she's just being a butt.
Eeeexcellent... Now to wait what will happen next...
And yes, Celly could just GO AND CHECK THE FOREST HERSELF! And what would Luna think what she said about her? In front of nobles and EOH of all thing's...
Also; IMO this story would really deserve place in TV-tropes... Would like to see how many it would rake up...
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ARRRGHHH! IM SO MAD! WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END!? WHY MUST YOU TEASE US WITH THAT CLIFF!? GIMME A CHAPPY! GIVE IT TO ME, NOW!
STOP TEASING ME!
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Or maybe ...
[LE GASP]
IT WAS CHRYSALIS THE WHOLE TIME!!!
Celly needs a severe bitchslap to da face
Just a thought, do the wolves look like this now?
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Loved it, though, Celestia seems a bit out of character. In earlier chapters, she was against Aeron out of reasonable necessity, and no one could really blame her, especially since it was rather clear that she didn't want to hurt or otherwise inconvenience Aeron. I'm hoping Celestia isn't acting this way out of choice.
On a different note, I love any and all interactions with the Tree of Harmony, even if the amount of dialog the Tree has spoken could be counted on one hand. I'm hoping the Tree eventually evolves into a full character, perhaps having it serve as Aeron's mentor and friend. It certainly wouldn't be a stretch to say the Tree is lonely, after all, Aeron is the only one it can actually speak to.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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No, wait. Share your brilliant hypothesis because it's certainly more than I've got right now, and I'm hoping it'll bring Celestia's attitude into focus.
Oh, freak! It wasn't Cadance Chrysalis replaced this time, it was Celestia!
Calling it. This Celestia is acting so very, very OOC and unreasonable, she *has* to be Chrysalis. Or another shapeshifting creep. Luna's imprisoned by them too, hence her 'absence'.
Celestial seems odd....hnn