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So, how will he survive this one? Zecora won't likely get there in time.
WHOA! That was intense. Awsome.
I kind of which he could have tamed that thing after he beat it. that would be pretty sweet.
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That was an amazing chapter! Keep up the great work.
Well this is going to be a moral dilemma for the ponies. While he didn't kill a pony, he was kinda a ravenous monster made of dark magic who actually injured several of them. And Lyra sounds like she could get chronic breathing issues out of this depending on how good healing magic is. So it's a hard to justify not destroying that seed, especially as i don't think they are aware that's him. Not to mention the giant graveyard of animal bones. Fluttershy will have nightmare's of that if she ever sees it. I hope for her she has already evacuated at this point. Of course ponies are a forgiving folk so it's not completely out of the question, but still. It will probably also help that the remaining seed is not radiating dark magic at this point. Still going to be awkward when he tries to reform his body, as i image that sudden plant growth around the seed could cause ponies to act rather rash.
One thing would be interesting is if because the inner-timberwolf drained the everfree of dark magic to fuel it's omnicidal expansion it actually purified the forest to some degree. That could make for a interesting twist.
awsoooooome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GET THE SNICKERS!
MORE!!! NOW!!!
6901865 Sorry, all i got is a mars bar
Sounds a lot like a character called "The Heap" from comics in the 40's. German fighter pilot crashes and becomes a sentient pile of vegetation.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
For a second I thought he was using a kido, but alas, I was mistaken.
Hypothetically speaking if they decide to execute or imprison him. It could pointed out Princess Luna went through something similar.
6901865 Better yet, get the snicker dimension! We're gonna need a shitton of them! And not just any shitton, a LITERAL Shitton! The biggest of the shittons!
(What the hell did i just type?)
I think I should know where that was from...
Wait, when did it recall its human name? This is Lumberjack right?.... Did i get the wrong story again?
Great job man. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! DON'T KEEP US WAITING AS LONG THIS TIME!!! PLEASE!!!!
6902000 I SO TOTALLY AGREE!!!
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Sorry, wrong story. You're thinking of the story Lupine Tree.
My thoughts on the ending of this chapter: "I must have moar! FEED MEEEE!"
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Well it is safe to assume that he will be ok, unless you turn out to be George R. R. Martin
Loved it. Waiting anxiously for more.
Why doesn't this story have a dark tag?
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Because Darkness its not in fact a central theme of the story?
If you consider whats happening in the story as *Dark* You really wouldn't like Marvel comic books
Intense.
I wonder how far plant immortality will Carry him before ponies get the pitchforks?
6901953 In his dream he could do anything he wanted right? Lol why not go all warhammer 40k on the wolfs ass and crush its wooden skull underneath an iron boot.
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Thanks for that, I remember what this one is now. This is the danger of reading so many stories at once. On the bright side; Once your mind blends enough stories together you get a very large, interesting world. Full of more detail than most stories would care to put into their writing. Even if you need to remind your self who's screwing who. (Secret boyfriends/girlfriends everywhere!)
More plz because this is epic
Let's see how you justify the ponies not killing him.
On a side not...found a music piece that might fit him...Nature theme and all.
I'm not sure that that's how acid works
6902300 Or being locked up, turned to stone, turned into Celestia's favorite houseplant, banished... I'm sure there's some other punishments they have. Typically death isn't on the list I think.
6902300 interesting that i have this video liked already.
As soon as i read "Darkness beyond twilight" i knew exactly where you were going, and i'm glad it did go there. I love slayers.
Cheese it! He's on to us!!!
This deserves the highest of fives!!
6901980 Slayers (Latin American Title Los Justicieros)
6902461 Ahhhh ok
Ye! That was pretty good. Nice little death monster right there sir. I will remember that one.
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Well that's easy.. No one died, he was under a form of corruption, Princess Luna experienced something very similar.
Pretty much if they justify killing him they also could of also done it to Nightmare Moon.
I don't think it would sound very good to the populace that whether or not your executed depends on how high up you are on the government ladder
more please
6902309 it can with the right acid... and the chemical reaction to the hay could produce enough heat to cause it to burst into flame... though it would be very unlikely...
DRAGON SLAVE?!?!?! THAT OP SPELL FROM SLAYERS?!?!?!
6901999 ♪He's a lumberjack, and he's okay,♫
♪He sleeps all night and he works all day.♫
♪I cut down trees, I eat my lunch,♫
♪I go to the lava-try.♫
♪On Wednesdays I go shoppin'♫
♪And have buttered scones for tea.♫
Mounties: ♪He cuts down trees, he eats his lunch,♫
♪He goes to the lava-try.♫
♪On Wednesdays 'e goes shoppin'♫
♪And has buttered scones for tea.♫
♪I cut down trees, I skip and jump,♫
♪I like to press wild flowers.♫
♪I put on women's clothing,♫
♪And hang around in b--♫ -- oh, wait...sorry, wrong story...
And Twilight is left wondering: "WTFJHO?"
6902489 But that's how governments worked until recently. It happens even now to a certain degree, though its more due to the people high up in the government having access to large amounts of money than their actual position in the government.
My inner anime geek squeed... loudly. Naga just laughed.
The last bit about bones and the seed, the distribution and location seems a little- ok, a lot out of place. Shouldn't those bones be scattered across the entirety of the Everfree rather than heaped next to Ponyville? And the magic seed, that should be waaaaay back where the dragon was killed, deep in the Forest, again nowhere near the edge of the Forest. Might want to clarify a bit more on the final scene as it shrinks the world from miles to mere feet-- I'm assuming the destruction was at least a mile or three across given the timetable and descriptions earlier in the story.
Speaking of the Everfree, it sounds like most of it (or a freekin' big chunk) was razed to the ground just now. Between the monster "timber storm" obliterating everything like a living tsunami and the dark magic leeched from the ground itself to power it, I'd think there's a huge new Badlands. Not that ponies will notice what with all the typical monsters and critters running about outside the Everfree borders now, heh. Displaced refugees might not play well with the locals, leading to a few nasty fights I'd imagine. Fluttershy and every other nature warden will have their hooves full trying to pacify and herd those that don't belong back into, er, what's left of the Everfree Forest.
And what about that dark magic? Did it just go poof into the air? Do we have anything like the conservation of energy that applies to elemental magic dumped into the environment? And possibly interacting on all those critters/monsters cut down suddenly leaving a lot of ghostly spiritual energy floating about. Still, that could be used as a reason why the new "Badlands" will remain dead and barren as salted earth. Good excuse to go hit it with a rainbow-- go get the girls!
...or (I hope I'm not spoilering the end game) this will prove to everypony that our human-turned-SwampThing can redeem himself by regrowing the new plains into a proper Endor forest; not as wild as the Everfree, not as peaceful as the Whitetail. I'd call it "Earthy" if there is such a thing.
6902576 Do you know any other OP spell from Slayers?
6902913 I'd have to rewatch it, but Fireball seems a close second, if memory serves...
6902920 that one was only over enslaved
6902925 Um... I'm beginning to think there is a vital piece of information missing... We were talking about overpowered spells, and you asked if there were any other than the incredible Dragon Slave spell... So, with this in mind, what are YOU talking about?
I hope they can at least do something before Celestia is getting there, I would hate it to see his core getting sealed away by Twilight, or Celestia before Zecora can say anything to help him a bit.
However it was interessting.
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Most likely it was because the mass was moving as well as getting humongously big. So it's not an immobile mass miles across, but perhaps a mass a few hundred feet across making its way out of the Everfree.