I love fairytales, anime and a bit of an mlp fim fan. fluttercord is a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. ^.^ Fluttershy is one my favorite ponies next to Discord.
Fluttershy befriends a seemingly friendly pony named Dream Catcher, a shy, sweet pony who almost knows Fluttershy like the back of her hoof. But things take a turn when Dream Catcher shows coldness toward Fluttershy's other friends, especially Discord. It's clear all she wants is Fluttershy, and she's willing to use any extreme to keep her...forever.
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Why doesn't this have a dark and/or a thriller tag?
Beautiful opening that really catches ones interest. I look forward to the rest.
This is wonderful, I can't wait for more!
Thank you very much, I'm considering turning this into a trilogy. Before I finish my other fic.
I like this keep going
I feel really good about this, and will try to get on it full time after I finish my first fanfic.
Oh boy I'm guessing this isn't going to go down well
Oh well, I really like this so far! Really great!!!
So far so good! I could see this as an actual episode. And you do a really good Discord!! Not too sappy and totally sassy!
Discord is so cute when he's all worked up over Fluttershy!
You're doing a great job. I loved the cupcake scene, and you're coming up with your own chaos tricks rather Than just chocolate milk and cotton candy clouds. We all mention it once, but some don't try to think of their own schemes. And I actually really like your antagonist and her looks. I also think your Discord is really good. I hope you get more attention!
Oh my gosh have I seriously not commented on this yet? Ugh, I always forget! Hi! I'm Butchy! Since this is (regrettably) my first comment I guess I'm gonna have to write a lot!
Well, I must admit I'm impressed by your updates! They come in rapidly and your writing style is exquisite! I look forward to seeing new chapters every day and hope you keep this up!
The tension between characters is amazing and I cannot believe that Fluttershy is in danger of forgetting her friends! Poor her! I hope Dissy and Pancake Princess can save her! Woo!
*GAASSSPPP* MAYBE IT WIL END IN TRAGEDY?!? THAT WOULD BE SO COOL! If she does end up forgetting everything maybe you could write a sequel about her remembering? (I'm not a writer I'm a commenter so I suck xP)
GOODBYE
Can't wait to see whats in store
I appreciate all your feedback, and hope you enjoy the next few chapters.
So I assume Midnight Eve is some kind of innocent being manipulated?
Oh well, I kind of like that idea if that's where your going. 
And as much as I love Discord - and Fluttercord IS my OTP - I can't really sympathise with him in this chapter for some reason; maybe because I also feel sorry for Eve...? Oh well, liked this chapter regardless, and can't wait to see what happens, especially with Luna's misgivings at the end.
Oooh! The end is so close I can hardly wait!
can't wait to see more
I really love all this world building you're doing and how you're giving Luna your own backstory. It makes sense that she would used to get help for helping ponies with their dreams, only to lose it. The forest is a cool concept as well.
Also loving this slow development of Discord's feelings. You're still doing really well with characterization! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hats off for updating so quickly. I'm the exact opposite so I admire you for it.
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Thanks! It helps if you feel really inspired by the story and the characters, though it can be a bit difficult to make quick updates. I plan on exploring my world and the forest in a couple sequels. Thanks for the comments! ^.^
This is so good! The descriptions are amazing and suspense was really good.
Ok... so... I'm guessing the actual place is the real villain in this fanfic? So Eve's emotions made it stronger?
So is Eve going to end up saving the day or helping, and ultimately be forgiven? 
I've been feeling so bad for her the past few chapters.
Oh well... liked this chapter a lot, looking forward to the next one!
I wonder why it isn't had so many likes? It should have so this story is very interesting to read.
I'm glad to see that Luna and Amalthea are making up.
Beautiful ending, and I wonder what that thing in the Garden of Shadows is planning?
Something tells me Dream Catcher will get the "Notice me, Senpai!" sticker pretty soon.
I enjoyed the story, loved the chaos vs dream battle
. I can't wait to get reading the sequel.
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If the OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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I never really put too much thought into that. But I imagine Amalthea speaking with a regal demeanor and Eve sounding a bit like Twyla from Monster High.
Fluttercord?
Discord Your DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM D
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Uh...yes?
7370671 I do not no know whet that is
My old user name is Moonlight Evee...
6789513 there sure are a lot of moons' here.
Queen........ Chrysalis?
Ohh... so it is not queen chrysalis? I'm kinda confused.... oh well, time to read some more!
So it is not queen chrysalis, instead, nightmares? Makes sense.
Poor fluttershy.... her memory went from an elephant's to a goldfish's.
the nightmares have to say: Who's fluttershy?
Just think of the conflict between Discord and the bad thoughts while being angry at Eve!
I think the request is either: "What is this feeling I have?" or "Could you live with me?" or "Could you be my colt-friend?" or "Do you remember when I had this memory?"
I bet Dream Cather and Discord are like this;
*Having a war over Fluttershy when she has her back turned*
*She turns to them and they both look at her smiling friendly like*
"Aww I'm so happy my two friends are getting along," Fluttershy says then she turns her back on them.
*The war between Dream Catcher and Discord continues*
Discord control your anger..... do not blast Dream Cather to another dimension please. So, just keep her cool okay?
Oh Dream Cather, you fucked up now. You just ponynapped Fluttershy. Now get ready for the mind blowing, super ultra ULTIMATE MONTAGE TIME!!!!
Wait are you still accepting covers?!?!
Twilight=Order
Discord=Chaos
How long will it be before one of them snaps? I give them, thirty seconds.
I love it!!! Also, how did Discord get on the ceiling?! Well he's the Spirit of Chaos I guess I can expect the unpredictable to happen. Or should I not expect it since it's chaos?
Well, there goes part of the mystery behind this Dream Catcher.