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kurusagi16


I love fairytales, anime and a bit of an mlp fim fan. fluttercord is a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. ^.^ Fluttershy is one my favorite ponies next to Discord.

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Melodia, the queen of evil was defeated after her near attempt at conquering the kingdoms. Thirsting for revenge, she trains her kind-hearted daughter, Princess Fluttershy, to follow in her hoofsteps and become just as cruel and evil as she. When Fluttershy receives a letter inviting her to attend a special school for princesses, she sees a chance of finding her true self, and her mother sees it as a way to create her own sinister plan. One that could plunge the kingdoms into darkness.

Cover art by: Hop313ssRomantic

Chapters (21)
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Is this a bit like descendants in a way? If it is, it's a great idea!
Loving this story, can't wait to see where it goes. :twilightsmile:

So Twilight and Rarity are princesses too. Applejack I'm assuming is a member of castle staff, so I'm going to guess Rainbow is in the guard?
I can't wait to see what Pinkie is doing in this now, and is Twilight going to be like a bully to Fluttershy?
Oh well, I like where this is going, and I can't wait 'til Discord shows up! :twilightsmile:

Physical Education..........Lady Spitfire

:rainbowlaugh: Ok I'm sorry I can never picture her as a lady. I like her character but yeah she definitely isn't a lady.
Liked this chapter though, and is there maybe an element of Wicked in here too? I don't know it isn't obvious, but I just keep thinking about the musical when I read this. Oh well, can't wait to see the interactions between Fluttershy and the teachers, especially Luna and Discord.

To mythic Flame: Sorry about calling Spitfire a lady, I wanted to make her and the Wonderbolts a band of knights, but I wasn't sure if Sir Spitfire worked, because they didn't really have female knights in the olden days. Maybe I can have a whole bit involving Spitfire making it clear that just because she's called a lady, it doesn't affect her ability of being a noble knight.

PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS A FLUTTERCORD STORY!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

She made it a point to address the princesses that she took no pleasure in being called a 'lady', but digressed that regardless whether or not she was a lady, it didn't affect her abilities in the field.

Yeah that's what I expected from Spitfire :rainbowlaugh:
And there's Pinkie! :pinkiehappy: Figures she would do something like scare everyone awake.
So I'm guessing Luna is going to make it difficult for Fluttershy to do what her mum wants, and Discord is clearly going to be useful for Melodia's plans, am I right?
But at least all the mane 6 are there now. Liking the story; keep it up!!! :twilightsmile:

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My thoughts exactly. Also, I hope they'll be subtle FlutterCord moments.
Never. Forget. FlutterCord. It doesn't have to be romance, but a few sweet scenes would be nice, like a dance or something

Uhh...Discord as a teacher. A teacher. A goddamning TEACHER!:twilightoops::trixieshiftright::ajbemused:

This will not end well.:facehoof:

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My thoughts exactly.:raritywink:
I have to say though this is gettin' good!

I wanted to add Discord into the story in a creative way. And in my mind, Discord being "forced" to be a teacher to help reform him and get him to learn friendship or getting along with other ponies was too good to pass up.

Feed back time: This is the part where [u]you[/u], the reader, help give me inspirational ideas to use to clear my writer's block and continue the story. Here is the following scenario:

A good (but not contrived) excuse for Fluttershy to spend more time with Discord. All I've got is wrongful detention, but I'm not sure. Your thoughts?

Wait...what?! No Discord moment?! Just a brief little skim?! What?! :pinkiegasp::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: What going on here?!
I wonder how Queen Bitchy is going to convince Discord to help their her plan? I mean, he's not one to just shift alliance because of a... small... deal... never-mind:facehoof:

Princess Rarity of Lobelia

Is that Lobelia, as in the rival school, from Ouran High School Host Club?! :raritystarry:
Yea I'm waiting for Melodia to start pushing Fluttershy to get closer to Discord, and I like how clever she is in tricking her mother so she can keep hanging out with her friends.
And Pinkie and AJ appear again :yay: I like those two, Fluttershy is my favourite of the mane 6 but AJ and Pinkie are cool too!

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Haha yeah I know, don't worry I NEVER FORGET THE FLUTTERCORD!!!

Finally learned how to use that underline thing to separate the sections and paragraphs. Don't worry, I'll try to add some more Discord and Fluttershy moments.

*Fangirling mode on max* Osmeicducneichneicnndjhcndiwuendichnej!!!!!!! AAAAAAHHHHHH!!! :raritystarry: Too cute!

Also, DUN DUN DUN!!! Just as I suspected. Discord gets one little deal and poof...he's somepony's plaything now. Queen Bitchy is probably gonna stab 'im in the back after she's free.:applejackunsure::ajbemused::trixieshiftleft:

To Sky Mist: Did you have any doubts? Also, an important twist will be added in the future.

I may or may not be offline for a couple of days, perfecting the next chapter. Just a heads up!

To all readers: I am editing chapters 1-3, adding more details. Feel free to reread them if you wish.

Ooh...yay!:scootangel:
It's about to get wild, people!:yay:

Oh god, I feel a plot twist coming on!:derpyderp2::twilightoops:

Yea Melodia SO wasn't going to just let it go just like THAT!
BTW was that a reference to Three's a crowd, all the objects like the lamp he pulled out of thin air.
And also when Discord shoved Fluttershy into the teapot, all I could think of was Alice in Wonderland.

Honestly, I loved the Three's a Crowd reference, all I thought about when he conjured the items was the song. :twilightsmile:
And HOW do you update so quickly!? This is a really great story, and I've read stories that are equally good, and often take longer to update! Did you have this story planned out in advance?
Still loved this chapter, and I suppose the month long wait for Discord is so he can spend even more time with Fluttershy, and begin to doubt what he wants?
But I'm also guessing it won't be too had for Twilight to figure out who Fluttershy's mother is now that she's seen a portrait: I bet she's going to start researching past queens the minute she returns to the school, am I right? :pinkiehappy:
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Hmm...
Hmm...
I can already see Queen Bitchy breaking her promise.:ajbemused:

Ooh...hate to admit it, but that was a good move, Queen.:twilightoops:
Twilight is definitely finding out in the next chapter.:applejackunsure:

Wait a minute...:rainbowderp:
Just read this twice but I just now realized what was familiar with this. It's like in Frozen when Elsa lost her cool!:derpytongue2:

Yay, Mane 6 are great supporters for Fluttershy!!! :yay:
Why wasn't Discord there? It just seems like he would be there pulling up the popcorn, watching Fluttershy unleash her magic and then enjoying the argument between the teachers afterwards. Maybe even standing up for Fluttershy? :pinkiehappy: No? Ah well, I bet there will be some moment of connection between them later on when they next have a tea party. :twilightsmile:
And is Luna going to be supportive to Fluttershy now? She was doubtful about Fluttershy coming, but now she seems really eager, unless she just wants the extra security to ensure everyone else is safe? :rainbowhuh:
This was a really nice chapter, can't wait for the next one!

I raise an eyebrow at that Author's Note...:trixieshiftright:
And this was meh for me. I think the heat's really gonna rise in the next chapter.:moustache:

:raritystarry: Those Fluttercord moments were adorable
And yeah personally I think someone needs to remind the other princesses that if Fluttershy doesn't learn to control her magic, there could be another incident in the future. :ajbemused: (Which I bet there will be)
But that food fight was awesome and Discord and Fluttershy are rubbing off on each other :twilightsmile: D'awww

I was grinning the entire time.:pinkiehappy: I still am!:scootangel:
It's that good and hilarious.

It's okay. This is a nice little insight on Discord's thought process.:twilightsmile::scootangel:

EEE! It's like a mix of when Fluttershy reformed him and Bride of Discord with an amazing fairy tail twist! I love it! :raritystarry:

I loved this chapter! Fluttercord is so cute, I can't wait for more! Well I will, but its difficult. Happy Holidays! :pinkiehappy:

Ship! Ship! Ship! Ship! Ship!:pinkiecrazy:

Ship! Ship! Ship! Ship! Ship! :pinkiecrazy:
On another note, SHIT JUST GOT REAL PEOPLE!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::moustache:

Oh shit.:twilightoops:
You made Fluttershy evil!:pinkiegasp:Not surprised; it was quite obvious it was going to happen.:ajbemused:

Love the Harry Potter-esque feel to this! And you write very well, and so far, good characterization!

You know, it seems that Fluttershy's mother honestly believes what she is doing is being done for the good of her daughter, which means the most likely way that would break her of said beliefs would be for her actions, either directly, or indirectly, causing lasting harm to her daughter in a major way. The most likely method of harm to her daughter that would have an impact on her emotional state is depriving her daughter of something she places a great deal of value upon. Seeing as Ms Melodia places a great deal of importance on the magic she and her child is capable of, the permanent loss of such abilities would be a near lethal wound, and possibly a fate worse than death in her eyes, so that is what she will cause Fluttershy to loose, her eyes.

Is Melodia having regrets?! :unsuresweetie:
Aww Discord came to help Fluttershy! :twilightsmile: So cute.
I really like this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

To: Mythic Flame

Where have you been? I haven't seen any comments from you in ages! I thought you'd grown bored of my story.

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!:pinkiegasp:
The where'd she go moment. The moment that's oh-so suspenseful. :pinkiegasp:
Love it~!:scootangel:

Aww! That was a nice story! :twilightsmile: I loved it!

D'aww!:rainbowkiss:So cute! I could die!

And even Melodia can see this ship!

"Yes well, it's good to see that you're okay my dear." He smiled sheepishly. Queen Melodia playfully arched an eyebrow.
"Is he your gentlecolt friend?" she asked teasingly. Fluttershy batted a hoof.
"Mother, don't say embarrassing things like that!" Queen Melodia laughed a beautiful, and tinkling laugh.

"I'll leave you two alone." said Melodia, winking at Fluttershy as she left.

SHIP! SHIP! SHIP!:pinkiecrazy:

I sorta wish there was a sequel to this
so that way fluttershy will marry discord and who knows maybe having a baby too
just thinking

That was... AMAZING!!!
Fluttercord.
Hope there will be a sequel, but not preassure!!!
Good Job!!!!

I love the end and cannot imagine a better end to this story! Your very welcome for the fanart, I could hardly resist drawing it. I'm sure this story will be one of my absolute favorites for a long time.

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I believe that the feminine version of Sir is Dame. When women are knighted nowadays, which they do in England for anyone they think is awesome (a number of actors have been knighted simply for being great actors, for instance), they're referred to as Dame. So Dame Spitfire would probably be better.

I LOVE IT! :heart: it's amazing, cant wait to read more

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Great story loved it :) I think this might be my favorite story of yours I've read.

I'm a give you all the pinkes.
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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