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Tunefulsubset72


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My name is Nights, my home was destroyed a decade ago by a race long forgotten. All I wanted was justice, now I get something much more.
An adventure, from the natives of cybertron, to rebels against a empire, even, through the home of the princess of the sun and moon. Will you be willing to join on this adventure?

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 35 )

Okay...Now this is where my story begins :pinkiehappy:

What did I just read.

I say that and I haven't made it past the description.

6758308 That's actually a pretty good question, Nova. I can't tell what this story's crossed over with to save my soul.

To answer your questions I'm new and this is a crossover with one of my favorite books series the wingfeather saga and two some other stories on fit fiction might show up and two hater gona hate

And the daring do tag is in there because she will show up in a chapter and she maybe. A very important charater

6758597 Which is why you read the writing guide.

Breakdown? Hold on a second! I
He isn't in my story! :unsuresweetie:

Comment posted by Tunefulsubset72 deleted Dec 23rd, 2015
Comment posted by Elric of Melnipony deleted Mar 21st, 2016

6760860 it's short I have a blog about it you get to chose

Ok the last chapter I wrote is deferent because you get to chose how it begins in the next chapter. You have three options.

1.nights should follow the autobots and join them.

2.nights should just stay with the decpticons

3.just leave and find more about the planet.

Oh! I forgot what chapter this one was. Let me think... :facehoof:

6771488 this is after the rain booms meet the autobots. The reason sunset is with bumblebee cause she rode with fluttershy.

I like how you made Jackie and you a connection of their feelings about the past. Nice work :pinkiesmile:

6815565 my birthday may not be in a week. But ten years me and my grandma did did go back to find the house I was born gone, and also nights meet his grandma. MORE ANNARIANS

Good, although some chapters can weld in together. I also understand you're new. I really want to sequel and make a plot twist from the first chapter, one with my oc and you. A bit rushed and short, along with roughness. You can count on me for reading and fixing error!

Good job!:twilightsmile:

TheShimmerOreoLover

This story could be good if written well. But, after time, you'll get used to writing and will get better and better. Originally I was worse than this, and now I'm a pretty decent writer. The more you write mate, the better you become.

7079321 you'll notice through exam book I've gotten better, or someone offered to rewrite a chapter, along with special guest and other peoples ocs

Yeah no pony would go in the portal:/

I'm sorry but this is terrible. The grammar is really and you misspelled a lot of words the chapters are really short. I would consider looking for an editor.

7429810 It was my first story, I've gotten better in my others

Why did you take down the previous story?

Slow down here. Its so fast forward, that you surpass the speed of sonic rainboom. We'll see what await in next chapter

7823545 I understand, is was my first story, I even thought it was bad so I decided to start fresh:twilightsheepish:

What in the name of everything holy I just read? We got an earth pony, annarian or something, that went through a portal in everfree no less, transformed into a human, met deceptions, become an allies with them to destroy autobots, and then BAM! we got info, that ten years later he can transform into a super sayian,fly, and use energy blasts. No, just no. Too much of everything here. I hoped that it will be quite good, but all I got is... something. I don't have words to describe that. Your grammar errors don't bother me, as I have seen worse. But all that is above... nope. I end it here.

7823564 it's my story, and I actually agree with you, if you not like this story don"t both reading the other three, but my latest story, nights. Discharged is different it it doesn't have the trash that's the first four had, but it your own choice! To read it or not

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