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"Where other men blindly follow the truth, remember, nothing is true, where other men are limited by morality or law, remember, everything is permitted, we work in the dark to serve the light. We are Assassins.

My name is Marcato, Sometime ago I stumbled across a group of Assassins called the brotherhood, but due to my bloodline, I was welcomed, a lot of you may know my Ancestors, Edward Kenway, Pirate Assassin, and Conner Kenway, who worked with George Washington during the revolutionary war, so yeah this is my story, ready for some fun?

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I like it all ready keep going.

Author's Note:

Obviously.

Is ezio going to be mention

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Ya can use my OC Fer this, and yer transformers one as well.

To be honest, I’m on edge about this story. The prologue piqued my interest enough that I’ve read further, though I’m not sure if I’m going to continue onto the next chapter.

I’m going to be brutally honest, the story is littered with a plethora of grammar errors, the incorrect punctuation in direct speech and overuse of ‘as’. However, I’d still forgive you that, as getting an editor to fix these should be easy enough. But what I cannot overlook is the excess of jumps between various scenes that serves no beneficial purpose to the story, and also the amount of drama that seems to be there just for exposition—it was also rather unrealistic and irrational. Why is everyone suddenly crying out their eyes over a boy that has been gone for sixteen years?

Still, I feel like this story has potential and that you have a very interesting plot in your mind. All you need to do is hone your skills of executing it.

Is this getting an update?

Is this getting an update? been more than a year

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I'm working in it now, I've had really bad Writers block, I promise a new chapter will be out the next few days, if not tomorrow

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