Everything Pinkie Pie does, is in good fun, and she couldn’t even consider actually hurting a single one of her friends, even as a joke.
Since there is a scene at Canterlot High, this was the obvious and perfect platform for her next step; to establish her very own Theatre Group.
A group of friends, or even a group as close as hers is good, but if she was establishing a theatre group, it could endure far beyond the school years. Besides, the joy would be spread far and wide; far beyond the walls constricting the school.
As the expert in preparation and throwing parties, Pinkie Pie was the obvious leader of the group; inviting key members in order to secure the quality of the performance and entertainment.
Rarity, Applejack, Sunset Shimmer, Vinyl Scratch and finally, Midnight Sparkle ended up as the obvious key positions. Bulk Biceps, Lyra, Bon Bon, Adagio Dazzle, Aria Blaze, Sonata Dusk and finally Octavia was obvious choices to complete the troupe.
Hey, where are Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy in this?
6684831 If you refer to the character tags, I opted to pick a formal leader for larger groups.
Otherwise, Pinkie Pie will formally introduce them later on. They are most likely held up in class on campus right now.
Of course; we can't just ignore our wonderful, and epic Pegasisters; now, could we?
Each and every card will be presented, in their own due time.
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I was actually asking because of the list of ponies in Pinkie Pie's theatre troop. By any chance, are you a FlutterDash shipper?
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I will have to include them in the troupe, as I get to the part, where that is staged. For now, I have established were I am going, while I am trying to build up a stage for her play.
I have been known to spin tails about the ship between the two, yes. Once I found the proper fuel for the fire, it is an obvious ship. I think they do compliment one-another in an epic fashion. Flutters is much stronger than given open credit for, while Dashie is much more fragile than the average brownie dare to let on. Yet, I guess one of my favourite reasons is when Dashie pointed out that Bats are Awesome, and Flutters subsequently was later turned into a bat. Naturally, there are numerous other reasons for them to be together.
No offense, but having just read your first chapter, you might want to consider working on your writing style. The story is good, it's just your writing could be a little better. Try finding someone to help you.
6685551 Are you referring to the dialogue, if so; I doubt that will be a problem in the rest of the story.
As the title said, I am establishing the story, while not giving up the plot that will come in the story.
I have tried to find an editor, and failed; repeatedly. On that note, if you have any suggestions as to how I could improve the story, I would be most grateful.
I hope I manage to balance the details in the story ahead, so that I say all I need to, without going overboard, or boring you as a reader with details you find embarrassing, or just plain irrelevant.
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Well, for one thing, you might want to check your spelling on a few things. Second, it would be okay if used words like "It'll" instead of "It will" more often with Pinkie Pie's vocabulary.
6686818 I have a few limitations in finding typos, particularly on certain issues.
Since you mentioned it, I went over the entire first chapter in search for what you mentioned, I did not find the specific, but several similar cases, though. figured I could lose a few words, since i am clear of the 1.000 limit.
Funny thing, it did not change the word count at all.