A story written by Neutralbrony (deviantart link http://neutralbrony.deviantart.com/) in memory of Nathan Maddox. I have his written consent expressing the ability to post this story here on his behalf. Edited by Malicious-Badger.
Fluttershy hasn't been seen in public for a few days, and her friends are beginning to worry...
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Good to see it on here. I like how you're titling the chapters.
Holy
Omg Trixie this is getting awesome
I don't see how "two peas in a pod" was on the featured page and this wasn't.
oh no they will think fluttershy killed trixie i bet well favorited and thumbs up
This is really really nice. Have a thumbs up! And tracking as well. Can't wait for more.
688853 Thanks! I was always gifted with making good titles^^
689942 That's my goal! Neutralbrony's work deserves it
690179 Good observation! I didn't notice that while I was reading it, but I think that's might what will happen!
690415 Unfortunately, the author has hit writer's block, so part five might be delayed.
690658 Lol, it shows.
688971
Really, you choose a story like this to try and advertise....
That is just wrong.
690725 Don't worry, deleted and now unrelated ad free!
690810
Cool. Just bugs me someone would post an ad like that in anything on this site.
690820 and on a story like this too!
"Well, now that you're finished reading about fluttershy tying to kill herself, buy my crap!"
690667 I am good at making titles and chapter names, but the reason i havn't posted any of my original work is...
I'm too damn lazy.
I have so many great ideas, but I can't be troubled to write them down.
I am truly living up to my american standard.
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I am Heavy Weapons Guy and I approve this story
That picture is bothering me so much.
691944 I don't know when Neutral will start chapter five, he said he hit writer's block.
692067 Glad I got heavy approved!
692815 Sorry if it does, but it mas actual fanart made about this story, so I thought it would be perfect.
Kinda gives the plot away though...
Oh shit bro, I'm almost in tears myself. Did you feel this way when you wrote this?
693340 I didn't write this. Here is the man who is responsible for all this:http://neutralbrony.deviantart.com/
you can ask him all your questions.
But it was a pleasure to post and acquire more view for him.
And I shed manly tears while reading this, yes.
Manly tears aren't enough to describe how sad this is...
We need more descriptions... I need a thesaurus :C
maybe trixie killed angel?
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That bad part is I want to read the story, its just that picture bugs me. Its not even the fact its Fluttershy. It is just so dark and depressing, plus its just really creepy.
693461 Well, I assume this to be a success... go check out the author on DA, his name is Neutralbrony.
693895 I couldn't say... I just posted the story, I didn't write it. Again, check out Neutralbrony if you want an explanation.
694591 The pic goes away after you click on a chapter. So, while you click on the chapter, try and ignore the pic until then.
Dammit i hate this story! I started reading it and i want to know what happens next cause its really good, but now i have to favorite it and set it to email updates, witch means i still have to see this dam picture.
I am pleased with my story being this successful. I will continue to work on it for you all
696653 Everything will be okay. I promise, just wait till I finish part 5.
696653 That was just plain funny.
696678 They will all be pleased to here that. I'm glad I could contribute to your success. BTW, howzit going on chapter 5?
698613 Well, I'm half way done but now I gotta go back and retrace my steps on what my plan was. I wish I had done things slightly different in chapter 4, but I can't change that. I have plenty of time tomorrow to work on it. I will get up in about 12 hours from now and work on it.
698776 Alright, everyone will be pleased! you're a huge hit, and I'm telling you, you're gonna be really popular!
693461 Manly tears are a way to describe this story.
698794 But there has to be a better word, well, never mind, you are right, loving the story, made my friend cry when I told him what this was about. You are a brilliant author.
I can't even look at that title picture... :(
700207 Well, I obviously chose the right picture then.
agreed
755317 Are you referring to chapter 5's title?
Great... Now I'm stuck between hating Trixie and wanting to hear her out.
755440 I feel the same way...
just started reading 'some things better left alone' and when I got to trixie's line "ah, that was refreshing" I literally crushed my mountain dew can, still mostly full, in my hand. I now have a strong urge to write a grim dark fanfic involving Discord and Trixie... I think that speaks for it's self. don't you?
and then that ending...damnit! now im not so sure about that whole grimdark fic.im so confused!
alright, I will hear Trixie out, see if she can redeem herself in my eyes, then decide on the fic.
760976 That's probably best. Trixie's a bitch, but she needn't be slain unless there's a good reason.
760992 I guess your right....better put away the cleaver then.
760999 Mmm... Trixie cupcakes would be scrumptious.
761008 oh so good.
761014 Not to be a jerk or anything, but have you checked out any of my original fanfictions ?Death and dying is quite good, although it'll never live up to the standard of "Would anypony miss me"
actually I haven't read anything else you have done yet, this fiction being a particularly untouched... don't you hate when you forget what you where saying in the middle of saying it? anyways, I will make certain to check out 'death and dying' when time give me some slack, but I am burdened with a school years worth of 'read laters' I am finally thinning out.
761037 Ah. Well, ok! I think just to be safe you should track it just so you remember. Again, thanks^^
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Thank you!
760976 Hi! The thing about Trixie is that she was just made at Twilight for the time she was kicked out of town
but had no idea that Fluttershy would push herself to kill herself. Though I know most of the viewers would want to just kick Trixie in the throat for saying such things, I wanted to write about her realizing the truth and then knowing what she did was utterly hurtful. fluttershy didn't deserve that. 
Thanks for reading my good sir!