• Member Since 29th Apr, 2012
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Magic is a peculiar force. It lives in and through everypony, but none more so than Twilight Sparkle, the famous element of magic. In her mission to ascertain the true nature of magic and its most basic origins, she accidentally finds herself in a new plane of existence where light and dark are neither the same nor different. The world of twilight opens up to her, unleashing her true power and self. But in the process a shadow creeps forth, threatening to forever eclipse the land that is Equestria. What does it truly mean to be A Twilight Princess?

Cover Image by me.
-Hopefully it's not that bad. I don't usually do digital art. I'm much more fond of the pencil like my profile pic.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 214 )

Twilight Princess, you say?

Sweet Celestia, I am such a nerd.


It's very intriguing. Can't wait to read future chapters to answer some questions you raised. I like the idea. :twilightsheepish:

I really like it:twilightsmile:

Now it appears that you forgot to upload the second chapter, be a dear and fix that:raritywink:

Promising so far..

You, my friend, have a lot writing to do... :raritywink:

41 likes and no dislikes on your first story. You seem to be doing rather well.

I like that this is an original concept.... well, sorta.I certainly haven't seen anything like it. :pinkiehappy:

If you could say anything on how long it will be until the next next chapter, I think everyone here would be quite pleased.

It might be a good idea to use italics for character's thoughts, as this is generally accepted throughout FIMFiction so you wouldnt have to explain at the start of the story.

Also, this: "Meanwhile Near the Outskirts of Ponyville" should have a comma.
Cant wait to see more of this! :pinkiehappy:

one word more you must continue :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

the prince is evil! evil i say! EVIIIIL!

Awsome story! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Forgive me for mistaking the title for a Legend of Zelda game. :rainbowlaugh:

Rarity knows that one must never wear the same emotion long enough for it to go out of style.:duck:

Do you mind if I use Caesius(i'll probably only use the name as a reference in my fic, if you allow me that is)

OMG NEED MOAR!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Very intriguing concept, hopefully gets an update soon.

Sorry about the delay! I've been extremely busy lately. :ajsleepy: Hope you guys enjoyed it. I'll try to update as soon as I can!

7 must be your lucky number

I say! If I could give you cookies I would.

Extremely busy? In future, it is a good idea to mention a delay such as this in the comments. I asked you on the last chapter if you had an estimated time-frame or an explanation as to what is holding you back, even if it is something as simple as work. It would be good for everyone if you were to reply to comments like this. People do actually read the comments on here, you know. I checked the comments 5 times for updates!

:pinkiegasp: THIS IS JUST AS AMAZING AS THE LAST CHAPTER! Why everybody on the site has not read this yet I do not know. This should be in the feature box. People need to stop judging stories by their cover.
This was easily worth the wait, and I knew that, but I would have liked to know what caused the wait. I sort was a bit afraid the story was discontinued. Your lack of comments disturbed me. Anyway, the story is amazing and you have no reason to doubt it. My only suggestion is to reply to peoples comments so they know what is going on.

This should be on the princess twilight group page.

I enjoy it when twilight is handed the keys to godhood... I hope that's what just happened because that always makes for fun times.

:twilightoops: Oh No Twilight!!!!

So she is a princess? And basically has god-like powers?

:moustache: :twilightsmile: EPIC!!! :twilightsmile: :moustache:

Wait, wait wait...

So that shadow is EVIL? Huh? I thought shadow was a mix of light and dark- neither of which is evil. It's also common sense that a positive and a positive do NOT make an evil.

I'm confuzzled.

1 word NICE :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
anyway keep it up :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


Haha, I would love some at the moment. I'm so hungry right now, but lunch isn't for another two hours! :pinkiecrazy:

742043 neither of which are inherently evil but both have the capacity. It's a major theme in my most recent story, too

Beware Twilight it is THE GREAT SHADOW... why does Latin make everything sound so much better.


A concept or power doesn't make something innately evil, its the being that misuses these powers that creates evil. Shadows are not evil, but somepony or something can manipulate them to their ends. The user is evil, not the power.

Ever watched Teen Titans? A main character, Raven, basically has dark demonic powers, but she isn't evil at all. In fact, she saved the world once from her own demonic father. Conversely, a villian named Dr. Light literally uses light to commit crimes. Hence, it is not what their powers are associated with that classifies them as good or bad, it is how they use their powers.

Don't worry, I'll to explain more in later chapters. Hopefully this helps a bit.


hehe...sorry about that. Didn't mean to alarm. I'm not really used to this website's story format yet, and I keep forgetting that I can post my own comments days after I update to keep everyone informed. :twilightsmile:

Anyways, I'm flattered that you really enjoy my story and avidly look for an update!:twilightsheepish: I've been occupied with catching up on my other stories (ffnet), my new job, relationship stuff, family visits, thesis and a myriad of other duties. :ajsleepy: Trying my best to balance them all out.

Oh and thank you for the very kind comments.


Right? Latin is so much fun to use! :pinkiehappy: It makes everything sound cryptic and powerful.

742337 Placere transire butyrum :rainbowdetermined2:

Whoa will Caesius survive this battle.


Why of course.

Panem numquid vis aliud? :moustache:

743129 non gratias *shoves butter in mouth*:derpytongue2:

Caesius countered, her horn beginning to glow. Shouldn't that be his


Absolutely correct. Edited and fixed. Thanks!

What I read:
“si..si..sisters!???” she exclaimed, unable to believe the idea, “Lies! That's Impossible!”

What I pictured:
“si..si..sisters!???” she exclaimed, unable to believe the idea.

Now this... this is most interesting. Do want. Very much do want.

I am particularly impressed by the worldbuilding you've devoted to this. I'm a bit of a worldbuilder myself, so I can appreciate how much effort it probably took to think it all out.

I look forward to more of this.


Invader Zim! :heart:


Thank you. I do put a lot of time to creating a background story and establishing a central plot.

I'll try to update as soon as I can! I got some of the 3rd chapter already started. :twilightsmile:

754144 You type faster than I do man. much faster. I tip my hat to your expedient mental and literary processing capacity.

I just found this story, and I love it. :pinkiehappy:
WHen do you think you'll have the next chapter out? I can't wait.


Hopefully in a few days, I'm currently in the process of editing, revising, and re-writing :pinkiehappy:

One word... Fangasm!

Writer's nightmare....computer crashed...and all doc's lost. :fluttershyouch:

That's why there haven't been updates lately. I took a week break to relax and calm down about it.....but I've started up again.

Hopefully, this won't happen again.

... 2 in the morning... well sleep can wait. Glad to see this update again.

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