Shining Armor's Birthday Present

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Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #1 · Aug 11th, 2015 · · 1 ·

This felt a little bit rushed and the tone is a tad rape-y for my tastes. Upvoting for Changeling!Twiley though.

sbloom85

sbloom85 #2 · Aug 11th, 2015 · · ·

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I'm glad I got something right with this one.

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #3 · Aug 11th, 2015 · · ·

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True that. Now get to work on that Filly!Cadance chapter

sbloom85

sbloom85 #4 · Aug 11th, 2015 · · ·

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Blissey1

Blissey1 #5 · Aug 11th, 2015 · 5 · ·

Clawtoris

oh lawd

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #6 · Aug 11th, 2015 · · ·

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dragonjek

dragonjek #7 · Aug 11th, 2015 · 9 · ·

So, you paid someone to rape your husband, rendering him helpless as a mortal enemy violated him. And once it was over, your response was to giggle at the shame he felt from the forced pseudo-incest Shining was made to endure, then tell him to clean up for visitors (one of which being the sister he was image-raped by). In response to his feelings on his rape, emasculation, forced pseudo-incest, infidelity, and failure as a husband, she does... absolutely nothing.

Great job, Cadance. Great job.

Oh, wait! You're the alicorn of Love, right. Forgot that, sorry--nevermind, I retract my previous statement.

That last paragraph pushes Shining into asshole territory, too, but at least he's got a viable excuse.

iamli3