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sbloom85


MSTifying ponies since 2012.

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After turning over a new leaf, Starlight takes it upon herself to find a friend she hasn't seen since she was a filly.

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Comments ( 29 )

I guess I'm a sucker for redemption stories.

Join the club.

Thanks for adding this to the apology folder! This was really cute and brought a genuine smile to my face. Props, friend!

6681659
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Nice story, but this one line bothers me:

I was shocked to learn that Sunny and his family were looking for me since I ran away, but I was more shocked that they didn’t get Princess Celestia to help in the search.

While it is not unusual that they would look into the disappearance of a friend, why is she surprised that Celestia didn't get involved? Why would they bother the princess with something like this when this is a job for the guard or police to handle? It would be surprising if she did get involved.

6681695 Also, the group is hosting a writing contest, and both the folders count. Since you're story is (currently) the only one there is it okay if I consider it submitted? You might win by default anyway, since I'm not sure who will enter.

6681712
I think there would've been a higher chance of finding her if the search was on a national scale, rather than local.

6681718
Go right ahead.

Aw you beat me to it. I was working on one called Reminice Over You. Basically the same idea. Idk if I'm gonna finish it though...

6681862
I don't see why not. Do it.

6681869
I've got over 1.6k words so far. I guess

Was anyone else on the verge of crying out "I ship it" before that teensy revelation came up?

6685364
There are plenty of other fish.

6685364 Since when has that stopped people?

6715664 ...What have I done?

6715754
Nothing good. :derpytongue2:

8228499
:unsuresweetie: And...?

If it's in your headcanon that Starlight's a mares-only mare, that's fine. I wrote this because I felt a story like this had to be written.

Welp I Am Pissed U SHOULD HAVE LEFT HIM SINGLE!!

8275121
I'm sorry to hear that.

Comment posted by LunarGalaxy89 deleted Jul 4th, 2017

8275195
U RUINED MY FAV SHIP SUNBURST & STARLIGHT GOD I AM PEEVED

8275195
I'm Sorry But Still Why?!?!?

8275214
Please calm down. It's just a story that was (obviously) written before Sunburst appeared. Starburst can still be a thing, as maybe a steamy side story.

8275265
I Know But WHO IS HONEY BEAR & HOW IS SHE MARRIED TO SUNBURST!?!?!??!?!?!?! (I Burnt This Story In Hell >:D)

8275327
Honey Bear is an OC specifically for this story. My headcanon at the time was Starlight ran off and was gone for so long that Sunburst wasn't sure he'd see her again, so he moved on (somewhat) and met her.

I do have the OC tag on the story.

8275365
Mkay I Just Woke Up I Fell Asleep But Happy 4th Of July! <3

8275609
Happy fourth! Hope you enjoy your fireworks show.

8275824
I Did!! (My Dad Shot Our Own Fireworks In Our Front Yard :D) And We Live Across From The Police Station xD They Did Not Care :3

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