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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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I hope you know that Colgate name has been changed to Minuette.

Nice story. But the ending was a bit sad though.

6349099 Actually it was always Minuette.

6349099 I do know that, I just chose to use the name Colgate because of her profession in the story (dentist).
6349122 That was not the ending I had originally planned but as I write a story my ideas change. When it comes to my stories, I never have every detail set in stone. A lot of times the direction of my stories will be dictated by my mood. With this, I decided to have it end the way it did because I figured that is how things would turn out in real life if one could not decide between the other two.

LOL Colgate!!! Hope you soon find the person you love. Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts is going to get the torture even more going with Colgate. But I better sleep now. It's 10 in Vietnam. Wish everyone a happy school year! Especially u StormLuna unless if you're not in school then have a good year of work until summer!

6349903 Steven, I'm thinking of maybe writing one where Colgate (Minuette) tries to get Moondancer to get to come out of her shell and maybe, just maybe try to win her love since she always liked her. You have a good day at school. As for me, I haven't been in school for 18 years!

Okay, now people are just lookng for reasons to be upset with the show and that makes me sad.

6350004 Don't get me wrong, I LOVED that episode. This is just a story that takes off from the end of M.A. Larson Pisses Off Colgate....which I wrote to be funny. I don't get why people think I hated that episode because I write stories like this.

SLZ

I refuse to believe that this story has this many dislikes. I read this entire story today and it was absolutely touching to my heart. I would literally do anything to turn those dislikes into likes.

I did end up enjoying the true ending of the story more than the alternate ending, but they were both great. I enjoyed the sad feeling of the true ending which might be kind of strange to some people. But I must say, the part in "Discussions and Decisions" where Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts forced Minuette (or should I say Colgate?) to pick one of them to marry and ended up with them separating broke my heart, but that's how you know that this story was fantastic.

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Hell I don't even remember why I did the alternate ending but I tend to do that on various stories, have two endings. The original ending is the more realistic one I will admit. I get a lot of people complaining because THIS Colgate is nothing like the canon Minuette. Sometimes I do stories with alternate endings so that I can write sequels to one of the endings, or both of them. I am glad you are enjoying some of the things I have written.

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