LilSlipsy
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Loved the story. Something about a group of mares (and filly of course) all having a fun time at a glory hole, and it being a casual thing they do for fun is ridiculously unf.
Loved how Aura was trying so hard to figure out what the heck was going on, only to eventually just say "screw it, I'm enjoying this." Cute lil filly didn't exactly have an ordinary first time, but she sure seemed to have enjoyed the heck out of it. Or... maybe that is typical for a first time there. In that case, double unf. Was also super cute how the mares cheered her on in a way.
I was told to: retroactive~DING
Absolutely love the concept of a bunch of ponies hanging out at the local glory hole as a casual way to spend a night out. Great to see how supportive the older mare's were of Aura, too. Fun story all around.
Thanks ya'll!
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Definitely gotta roll with the good time as they happen lol. And it probably isn't an ordinary first time, no, but other foals probably do come there. Might be rare, but it probably happens a few times.
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They're all in it together.
Brother in armsSisters in seals.10883175
Thanks! DING! Tis always a fun part to wright!
Loved this! Would love to see more of this!
Interesting and nice work
I admire guys like you for expanding scenes like that
Lovely, shower sex is always nice.
Hope that many orgasm were not damaging to the health, realistically speaking
"Full Body Glory Hole" wat?
awesome story and love the detail's. you just have that writing ability to make it interesting and flow along nicely.
it really gives me that state of reading like im the mane character
Wow, that was an amazing read.
Welcome to my Favorites by the way.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it. I probably wont be doing more of this theme, but I would certainly love to see others making more, heh.
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No excessive orgasms, no... gain? That works, right?
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A full body glory hole is like a glory hole except their back half is sticking out. 2612666 and 2612668 (NSFW) on Derpibooru are examples and what I was using as inspiration.
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We're all inside her
mindtogether10883413
Thanks and glad to be there.
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yeah, i just read once that Too many orgasms in a short span of time can be bad for one's mental state, thus saying it like that
10883871 Say no more! *immediately starts writing sequel*
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Oh yus plz
10884101 You got it!
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Very good!
Need more
10884443 You're welcome!
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Much apprechiated
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Indeed! Comments help the FimFic algorithm
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i keep that in mind
Happy to see foalcon in featured. Show the anti-foalcon cancel mob that stories should be rated on quality, not content!
10884962 They do?
10884977 Agreed!
Very well written. Good job!
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Yus, we do need more featured foalcon
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Most possibly
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
10884561 Agreed, and I am working on it!
Oh that was sexy. I really like stories where someone finds out a pony they care about is actually doing some really filthy, sexual thing.
I'm late to commenting, even though I was one of the first to read it, but great work!
Lots of dings were had.
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Yus, tis fun
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DING
Not gonna lie, I'm genuinely surprised this comments section contains words other than "ding". Lol
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I am also surprised there weren't more DINGS
DING!
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DING!
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DING!
Ding! x2
Honestly, it's the pleasurable journey of self-discovery, where everyone is safe, and having a good time, that really does it for me. Also, consensual helplessness, where that trust isn't betrayed, really speaks to my soul.
All in all, a magical experience, that hit a lot of my buttons, especially as it was told from her point of view, so the reader can insert themselves, no pun intended(that was a lie), and I seriously dig that sort of thing.
Real 10/good.
Very nice story, and great use of 1st person POV. That really helps get across her innocence and keeps things focused. An interesting combination of fetishes, too. Don’t often see this kind of free use stuff mixed with foalcon, but it works well. And the part with a mare on the other side of the wall was a great climax to end the chapter with — an innovative way to kick it up a notch when I thought it couldn’t go any higher.
The only thing I can complain about is how the last chapter really yada-yadas the lesbian shower orgy. That could have been so much more than it was. Especially with the filly getting her first good look at (and taste of) mare parts. But this story just skips over all of that like it’s not interesting at all.
Oh, lol, and it was left unresolved who got the most ‘dings’.
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Thanks! And glad you liked it!
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Thanks for the review and compliments! I can see what you mean about the last chapter, so that is fair (And yes, probably could have been expanded on more). Also, I'm decreeing that Aura had the most dings that night!
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I couldn't agree more with this sentiment. I'm not going to lie. This was a huge let-down, a major disappointment, especially since I was looking forward to it. Really wish this had been thoroughly explored in-depth. Would have especially loved reading about Aura experimenting more with butt stuff with the other girls.
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So glad you agree with that sentiment!
Well that was an experience.
This is, BY FAR, one of the best foalcon fics I've read. We BARELY have any good foalcon fics that involve a group of mares and a filly. If there's is a sequel in concept, PLEASE, make both of these stories into an animation. Also, I LOVE full body gloryholes. I wish we had more stories like this. Maybe some futanari stuff could be cool for the sequel, like say Ararua could be with her sister and her friends again and say her teacher who's a futa finds her. That would be pretty hot and pretty interesting. One of the absolute GOATS of falcon fics, up there with the brand new game trilogy, pumpkins flurry pounding, and a few others. KUDOS