You come home after working an unexpected graveyard shift at work, only to find that your bed has been occupied by a hungover DJ! Oh, and she's a talking horse. Shenanigans ensue.
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Yes, it's supposed to be yet another piece of the (for better or worse) massive "______ is in Your Bed" story trend that stemmed from Ocalhoun and Admiral Biscuit.
I have an idea for a second chapter that I might write if I'm bored someday, hence the incomplete tag. This was just a silly distraction for me, so it's not likely to be written for some time.
Chapters (1)
Not the most original thing I've ever read, but I still got a chuckle or two out of it. Don't let the dislikes keep you down.
Pretty good, although most might not like it - I find it pretty good. Very interesting concept, I hope to see more of this!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH
More! Give me more!
I can't tell if ye know of Admiral Biscuit's story or not. Probably where ye're getting all yer dislikes from. Good story though.
Nice story. For a distraction, it's well-written.
Comments:
1. Possible correction - "Your roommate is is a typical college student, and probably only went to bed an hour ago."
2. “Hey, I'm no package,” Vinyl says. “Well, maybe. But I'm not nearly cramped enough to have been sleeping in a box. That bed's pretty comfy. Happy birthday, by the way."
- Lol!
As long as she doesn't shit in my bed....
Well, at least it ain't a "a pony magically teleports on you while you are sleeping" story, so carry on with this and I hope hilarity will continue.
I love to see that this is catching on! ^.^
Look! I want more of this story!
So many ponies! Not enough beds!
Can't wait for the next chapter. The hell is with ponies and beds?
Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I'm glad my silly little story made a few people smile.
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Ah! I'll correct that right away. Thanks!
Short but funny and silly in a way, good work, just what I needed right now!
Well i guess that's one explanation for why Applejack would have pigs on her farm: Ponies love Bacon.
And to add credence to this theory: Pinkie Pie admitted to liking Hot Dogs, which come in a variety of meats, including Pork.
Ergo: Ponies can eat pork-products.
I work at a graveyard and I like Vinyl... *Shrugs*
Hehehehe, this looks like an interesting story. I love Vinyl Scratch, and this is looking to be a good one.
Nice job, nice job.
Funny. Thanks for the fun read.
I approve.
Also, this:
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6189068 Bacon thief! I want that to be a thing now.
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Ask and ye shall receive:
Simon and Twilight: Bacon
6193108 You're like Santa. I want a Red Ryder BB gun and a pretty pink pony for Christmas. Can I have?
(Fun story! I'll have to check out the others.)
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You'll shoot your eye out.
Thanks!
6194739 Durnit!
Can I has bacon? Pweaase?
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Baaaacon!
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Here - my like and a moustache
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That's pretty much it! Thank you, I will accept your mustache and raise you a bowl cut.
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Glad someone got a kick out of that!
Well at least nothing exploded or burst into flames or anything. Amusing little thing, if you write more, I'd love to see it
At this point, someone needs to make a Ponies In Your Bed group.
...
Not me though.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/group/205734/ponies-sleeping-next-to-humans
6265767 Doesn't count because of humans in beds and the cuddles fic.
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Fimfic Authors are in Your Bed pretty much offsets the good, IMHO.
6266758 I don't know that acronym
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In my humble opinion.
6177449 Princess Celestia is in your bed started it, then it got out of control.
This could be quite fun.
*looks at the date of publishing*
Hmmmmm