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I wouldn't call that SLIGHT cum inflation
I see an error: There's only one chapter!
I don't get the whole massive genitailia / inflation. Otherwise, short, simple, and to the point princest.
*made
Other than that, the only issues I noticed were a few comma errors.
This was nice.
Unless the both of them are hair triggers, I'd say the actual sex itself needs to be longer and more descriptive. The orgasms could stand to be described in more detail as well, although that's more my fetish talking.
Still good though.
Not bad, the sex could be longer but I enjoyed it.
Both sisters looked as if they'd spent an afternoon at an Apple family reunion
Huehuehuehuehue-
Short, but good. Have a like.
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The physicist in me can't help but complain about conservation of mass.
How could both of them have inflated the other without simultaneously deflating themselves? Where did all the extra mass come from?
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Probably using energy from the magical reserves that allow them to raise and lower the sun and moon. Plus they have grapefruit sized gonads and that's a pretty hefty package.
6563074 magic...
F#% brilliant story, keep it up mate.
Sequel?
I'm out (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻
Dang that was a quick story
More?
I think this one deserves a sequel. Can you make one. I really enjoyed reading it. Maybe you can add twilight sparkle to the sequel if you make one
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Having the sequel like the next day after she ascended and in a fit of classic Twilight panic comes rushing to the castle to find out why she is now a hermaphrodite. That would be interesting.