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CrimsonEquine
Improvement is a dire mistress.
CrimsonEquine
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Couple spelling mistakes and the dialogue goes kind of hentai-esque and silly: at least have Pound be hesitant or something, not just jump up and go "That's my fetish!". But eh, it's alright.
6082707
Understood, I'm glad you at least derived some enjoyment from it.
Nice story, but there's several times you should add an apostrophe.
6082757
Hopefully I fixed what you showed me.
Tell that to the judge, lady.
*Cracks neck before reading*
Finished reading
Whoa those deleted comments.
Just finished your story and now i am going to rate it:
Spelling 9/10
Not bad but i found some spelling mistakes.
Content 10/10
well its clop so
Story line 7/10
not the greatest but thats not importent for clop
Erotic (If available) 10/10
good clop nothing special but good.
My own opinion
I think it's good not the best but somthing. It has some spelling mistakes and the story line isn't the greatest but.
Story rating
I give this story a rating of 36/40 points
6218765
thnks
No one says that.
6218765 I don't think you understand how to rate things...
6370780 Apparently except this dude.
6436661 He gave the clop bit a ten out of ten, yet said it was nothing special. That is a contradiction. Ten of of ten means literally perfect.
6437432 It was in reply to this
6438331 It's hard to tell if you were talking to me or about me. So, eh.
A bit too cheesy for me. It shows potential just needed to be a bit longer and have a bit more effort put into it.
That last sentence was extremely inspiring.
Well done